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Best writing ( P.11)

John is fat.

He has short legs.

He has big eyes.

He has short hair.

He has a circle head.

By Alvin

She is Kiwi.

She has small eyes.

She has long hair.

She has a big mouth.

She is tall.

By Kiwi

My name is Angie.

I have big eyes.

I have a big mouth.

I have long hair.

I am cute.

By Angie

Mame is pretty.

She has short legs.

She has big eyes.

She has big ears.

She has a big mouth.

By Heather

Kate is tall.

She has long hair.

She has long arms.

She has short legs.

She has big eyes.

By Megan

This is Angie.

She has small eyes.

She has a thin neck.

She has big ears.

I love Angie.

By Grace

I am thin.

I have short hair.

I have s small mouth.

I have big eyes.

I have small ears.

By Jay

This is Megan.

She has short hair.

She has a small mouth.

She is thin.

She has a small nose.

By Regina

This is Sam.

He is thin.

He has a long neck.

He has big feet.

He has short legs.

By Nixon

My name is Josie.

I have a small mouth.

I have long arms.

I have long hair.

I am beautiful.

By Josie

Anna is thin.

It has big eyes.

It has a big nose.

It has short arms

It has a small mouth.

By Matthew

This is Karson.

He is fat.

He has small eyes.

He has a big mouth.

He has short hair.

By Karson

Megan is thin.

She has short hair.

She has big eyes.

She has short legs.


By Haylie

Jacky is thin.

He has small feet.

He has short hair.

He has a big mouth.

He has big ears.

By Daisy

Max is fat.

He has small eyes.

He has short legs.

He has a small nose.

He has a big mouth.

By Max

Best writing (P.4)

This is my cat.

It is fat.

It is big.

It has a long tail.

I love this cat.

By Bella

This is my mouse.

His name is Jack.

It is cute.

It is small.

I love my mouse.

By Nixon

This is my rabbit.

It is big.

It is thin.

It is cute.

I love my rabbit.

By Grace

This is my turtle.

It is small.

It is thin.

It has a shell.

I love my turtle.

By Sandy

This is my rat.

It is red.

It has two short legs.

His name is Nana.

I love my rat.

By Alvin

This is my rabbit.

It is cute.

It is fat.

It has long ears.

I love my rabbit.

By Regina

This is my dog.

It is big.

It is nice.

It is lovely.

I love my dog.

By Kate

These are my dinosaurs.

They are big.

They are thin.

They are tall.

I love my dinosaurs.

By Sunny

These are snakes.

They are green.

They are thin.

They are long.

I love snakes.

By Jimmy

This is my rabbit.

It is fat.

It is small.

It has small eyes.

I love my rabbit.

By Yobi

This is my dog.

It is thin.

It is small.

It has four short legs.

I love my dog.

By Natalie

This is a rabbit.

It is cute.

It is small.

It has long ears.

I love my rabbit.

By Angie

This is my frog.

It is small.

It is thin.

It is green.

I love my frog.

By Daisy

This is my giraffe.

It is tall.

It is thin.

It has a long neck.

I love my giraffe.

By Jay

This is my rabbit.

It is small.

It is thin.

It is cute.

I love my rabbit.

By Heather

This is my sheep.

It is cute.

It is small.

It is pink.

I love this fat sheep.

By Megan

This is my mouse.

It is cute.

It is thin.

It is colourful.

I love my mouse.

These are my turtles.

They are playing.

They are small.

They are thin.

I love my turtles.

By Karson

By Joise

This is my rabbit.

It is small.

It is thin.

It has long ears.

I love my rabbit.

By Kiwi

Best writing in class

My name is Angie.

I have two erasers.

I have three pencils.

I have one ruler.

By Angie

This is Jay.

He has two erasers.

He has four pencils.

He has one ruler.

By Singsing

I am Jay.

I have one pencil case.

I have ten pencils.

I have one eraser.

By Jay

This is Alien.

It has three rulers.

It has two pencils.

It has two erasers.

By Ian

This is Miss Cheung.

She has one pencil.

She has one pen.

She has an eraser.

By Nixon

I am Daisy.

I have six pencils.


I have one eraser.

By Daisy

This is Kitty.

She has one eraser.

She has two pencils.

She has one book.

By Kitty

I am Heather.

I have two pencils.

I have three erasers.


By Heather

I am Kate.

I have one school bag.

I have nine pencils.

I have three erasers.

By Kate

This is Regina.

She has five pencils.

She has two erasers.

She has one ruler.

By Megan

This is Miss Wong.

She has four pencils.


She has one school bag.

By Lily

This is Miss Wong.


She has three pens.

She has three pencils.

By Sunny

My name is Josie.

I have three pencils in my

pencil case.

I have a ruler and two erasers.

I have a pencil case in my school

bag.

By Josie

I am Cyrus.

I have two pencils.

I have one eraser.

I have one ruler.

By Cyrus

This is Megan.

She has five books.

She has two pencil cases.

She has one eraser.

This is Mummy.

She has five books.

She has two pencils.

She has one pencil case.

By Regina

By Matthew

This is Megan.

She is my classmate.

She is a monitress.

She is helpful.

By Haylie

This is Max.

He is my friend.

He is in Class 1A.

He is a monitor.

By Sunny

It is my dog.

It is seven years old.

It is helpful.

It is my friend.

By Karson

This is Alvin.

He is a monitor.

He is in Class 1A.

He is six years old.

By Grace

I am Grace.

I am six years old.

I am helpful.

I am kind.

By Grace

My name is Josie.

I like pink and purple.

I am a monitress.

I am a girl.

By Josie

This is Megan.

She is my classmate.

She is a monitress.

She is helpful.

By Haylie

This is Max.

He is my friend.

He is in Class 1A.

He is a monitor.

By Sunny

It is my dog.

It is seven years old.

It is helpful.

It is my friend.

By Karson

This is Alvin.

He is a monitor.

He is in Class 1A.


By Grace

I am Grace.

I am six years old.

I am helpful.

I am kind.

By Grace

My name is Josie.

I like pink and purple.

I am a monitress.

I am a girl.

By Josie

Best writing in class 2a. This is Lazy.

2b. Her dress is pink and

blue.

2c. She has a colourful

bag.

2d. Her hair is brown.

2e. Her crown is yellow.

By Grace

2a. This is dinosaur

Tom.

2b. His socks are green.

2c. His shoes are green

too.

2d. His horns are orange

and yellow.

2e. He is cute.

By Cyrus

2a. This is Kate.

2b. She is my classmate.

2c. She is jumping in the

puddle.

2d. Her boots are green.

2e. She is kind.

By Megan

2a. Charlie is my sister.

2b. She is swimming in

the pond.

2c. She is wearing a red

swimming suit.

2d. She is smart.

2e. She likes swimming

very much.

By Natalie

2a. Jacky is my brother.

2b. He is playing in the

park.

2c. He is wearing an

orange T-shirt.

2d. He is happy.

2a. Mark is my brother.

2b. He is skipping in the

park.

2c. He is wearing a red

T-shirt.

2d. He is tall.

2e. I love my brother.

By

Daisy

2e. He has big eyes.

By Jarek

2a.Megan is my classmate.

2b.She is singing in the

hall.

2c. She is beautiful.

2d. She has short hair.

2e. Her dress is pink and

red. By Regina

2a. Coco and Kitty are

friends.

2b. They are playing on

the grass.

2c. They are wearing pink

and orange dresses.

2d. They are happy.

2e. There is a butterfly

in the sky. By Joyful

2a. Hi, they are Lily and

Miss Wong.

2b. Their dresses are blue.

2c. They are happy.

2d. They are beautiful

and cute.

2e. I like the park.

By Lily

2a. May is my sister.

2b. She is playing games in

the bed.


dress.

2d. She is so happy.

By Kiwi

2e. She is wearing purple

shoes.

2a. These are my pets.

2b. They are yellow ducks.

2c. There is one daddy

and two baby ducks.

2d. They are playing in the

pond.

2e. They are happy.

By Nixon

2a. He is Blippi.

2b. He is my youtube

friend.

2c. He has a big mouth.

2d. He has a big, round

face. By Donna

2e. He is nice.

2a. Mary is my friend.

2b. She is sleeping on her

bed.

2c. She is wearing a pink

T-shirt.

2d. She is sleepy.

2e. She is lazy. By Ashley

2a. This is my cat Jenny.

2b. Her eyes are big.

2c. Her tail is long.

2d. Her hair is short.

2e. It is lovely.

By Matthew

2a. This is Maggie, she is my

friend.

2b. She is singing on the

stage.


dress.

2d. Her shoes are green.

By Haylie

2a. John is drawing.

2b. He likes to draw cars.

2c. He is nice.

2d. He is helpful.

2e. He is the smartest in

2e. She sings very well. his class.

By Alvin

2a. Ava is my friend.

2b. She is playing in the snow.

2c. She has a yellow sweater.

2c. She has a new skirt to match her sweater.

2e. She has a cozy hat.

2f. She is nice. By

Josie

Best writing in class (P.12)

Fun Zoo

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They are in the pond. There are two

tigers . They are orange. They are on the grass. There are four turtles. They are green. They are in the

pond. The tigers are so cute. Their eyes are small.

By Alvin

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They are in the pond. There are

fourteen monkeys too. They are brown. They are on the tree. There are sixteen birds. They are

yellow. They are in the sky.

By Heather

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They are in the pond. There are four

rabbits. They are on the grass. There is one tiger. It is orange. It is in a cage. The hippos are big. The

rabbits are cute. The tiger is strong.

By Grace

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They are in the pond. There is one

giraffe. It is yellow and black. It is on the grass. There are two birds. They are white. They are under

the tree. The giraffe is on the grass too.

By Matthew


lions. They are yellow and black. They are in the cage. There is a turtle. It is in the ocean. The hippos

are big. The turtle is cute.

By Karson


elephants. They are blue. They are under the tree. There are twelve pandas. They are black and white.

They are in the cage. The elephants are big. The pandas have small hands.

By Daisy


elephants. They are grey. They are under a tree. There is one zebra. It is black and white. It is on the

grass. The elephants are big. They have thick trunks. The zebras are cute. They have long legs.

By Haylie


rabbits. They are white. They are on the grass. There are two elephants. They are grey. They are near

the pond. The rabbits are small. They have long ears. The elephants are huge. They have long noses.

By Josie

Best writing in class ( P.2)

3a. What can you see?

3b. I can see my doll Lamy.

3c. Where is Lamy?

3d. It is on the grass.

3e. Her fur is colourful.

3f. I love Lamy.

By Heather


3b. I can see my mother

3c. Where is your mother?

3d. My mother is sleeping on

a bed.

3e. She is lazy.

By Ashley


3b. I can see a bird.

3c. What colour are the

wings?

3d. They are red.

3e. The bird is blue.

By Alvin


3b. I can see a turtle.

3c. Where is the turtle?

3d. It is in the sea.

3e. I love the turtle.

By Angie


3b. I can see an ant.

3c. Where is the ant?

3d. It is under the tree.

3e. The ant is black.

By Haylie


3b. I can see a bee.

3c. Where is the bee?

3d. It is in the sky.

3e. I don’t like the bee.

By Josie


3b. I can see a rabbit.

3c. Where is the rabbit?


3e. It is beautiful.

By Lily


3b. I can see a frog.

3c. Where is the frog?


3e. It is big.

By Daisy


3b. I can see a hippo.

3c. Where is the hippo?

3d. It is in the river.

3e. It is grey.

By Regina


3b. I can see a turtle.

3c. Where is the turtle?

3d. It is in the ocean.

3e. The turtle is cute.

By Karson


This is Billy.

His jacket is red. His

shorts are green. His

rainboots are yellow.

His ears are small. His mouth is

big. His legs are long. He is nice

and kind.

By Alvin

This is Teddy. She

loves dancing. She has

a pink dress. She has

a small hat. Her eyes are small.

Her head is big.

By Angie

This is my

robot Tom. His shirt

is purple. His shoes

are pink and yellow. His trousers

are blue and orange. His legs are

long. His eyes are big. His mouth

is big. He is cute.

By Cyrus

This is Jenny.

Her dress is pink. Her

socks are yellow. Her

shoes are red. She has long hair.

She has a small nose. She has a

big mouth. I like her dress. She

is beautiful.

By Daisy

This is my doll

Donna. Her shoes are

black. Her skirt is

red. Her T-shirt is pink. Her

mouth is big. Her hands are

small. Her feet are big.

By Donna

This is Stella.

Her trousers are

yellow. Her skirt is

orange. Her T-shirt is grey. Her

nose is small. Her eyes are big.

Her tail is short.

By Grace

This is my puppet Bonnie.

Her T-shirt is pink. Her skirt is

This is Bob. His T-shirt is

purple. His shorts are red. His

red. Her high heels

are yellow. Her eyes

are big. Her nose is

big. Her hair is long.

By Haylie

sandals are brown. He

has big eyes. He has

long legs. He has short

hair. He is cute.

By Jarek

This is Belle.

Her dress is yellow.

Her shoes are yellow.

Her gloves are yellow too. Her

hair is long. Her eyes are big.

Her legs are short. She is

beautiful. I like her dress. I

love Belle. By Josie

This is Jom.

Her T-shirt is red

and pink. Her skirt is

pink. Her shoes are purple. She

has big eyes. She has a small

mouth. She has long legs. She is

cute. She is tall.

By Kate

This is my

teddy bear Tim. His

T-shirt is pink. His

scarf is in rainbow colours. His

shorts are blue. His eyes are

big. His legs are short.

By Matthew

This is Thomas.

His T-shirt is red. His

shorts are blue. His

shoes are green. His ears are

big. His eyes are small. His legs

are fat. By Max

This is Gina. Her dress is

pink and purple. Her gloves are

blue. Her shoes are red.She has

big eyes. She has small ears.

This is Isabella. She is my

sister. Her dress is yellow. Her

shoes are green. Her socks are

red. Her eyes are big. Her hair

She has a small

mouth too. She has

long hair.

By Regina

is long. Her legs are

short.

By

Singing

This is Jason.

His T-shirt is blue

and orange. His hat

is orange and green.

His trousers are green. He has

small eyes. His legs are long. His

hands are big. He has a toy gun.

His toy gun is green and red. His

shoes are red. He is kind. His

mouth is small.

By Karson

This is Tina. I

like her skirt. Her

skirt is beautiful.

Her cloak is in rainbow colours.

Her shoes are orange. Her neck

is thin. Her hair is brown. She

has big eyes. She is kind.

By Megan


3a. My mummy has a dress.

3b. What colour is it?

3c. It is purple and red.

3d. I like her dress.

3e. I love my mummy.

By Heather

3a.Amy has a dress.

3b.What colour is it?

3c. It is pink.


3e. Her dress is short.

By Daisy

3a. Peppa has a dress.


3c. It is red.

3d. She is smart.

3e. She is beautiful.

By Josie

3a. Sally has a dress.


3c. It is purple.


3e. She is beautiful.

By Angie

Mummy Amy

Peppa

Sally

3a. Jasmine has a dress.


3c. It is red.


3e. She is cute.

By Max

3a. Kate has a skirt.


3c. It is in rainbow colours.

3d. I like her T-shirt.

3e. She is kind.

By Megan

3a. May has a dress.


3c. It is yellow.

3d. I like her shoes.

3e. She is lovely.

By Jarek

3a. Billy has a jacket.


3c. It is yellow.

3d. I like his jacket.

3e. He likes his jacket too.

By Alvin

3a. I have a hat.


3c. It is red.

3d. I like my hat.

3e. My shoes are white and

red.

By Haylie.

3a. Coby has a toy gun.


3c. It is red and yellow.

3d. I like his toy gun.

3e. He is my best friend.

By Karson

Jasmie

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Kate

May Billy

Haylie

Coby

Best writing 32Class 1B

By Marcus Tsui

My Pet

This is my pet Diesel.

He is big.

He has two big brown ears.

He has four small white legs.

He has two black eyes.

He has one black nose.

Best writing 6 Class 1B Written by Nathan Wong

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They are in the pond. There is one lion. It is orange and brown. It is big. It has long hair. It is on the grass. There are two birds. They are blue and yellow. They are small. They have small beaks. They are on the tree.

Best writing 5 Class 1B Written by Sophie Ng

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They are in the pond. There are six giraffes. They are yellow. They are on the grass. There is one elephant. It is black. It is under the tree. The giraffes are tall. They have long legs. The elephant is big. It has a long nose.

Best writing 1 Class 1B

By Summer Hung

My Pet

This is my pet Diesel.

He is a big brown dog.

He has four long legs.

He has a big black nose.

He has small eyes and long ears.

He likes eating bones and meat.

Best writing 4 Class 1B

By Jayden Tang

This is Jayden.

His T-shirt is blue.

His shorts are red.

He has a small mouth.

He is naughty.

His tongue is long and pink.

His hair is green.

He is smart and helpful.

His legs are purple and long.

MT1 writing

My name is Devin.

I am a boy.

I am six years old.

I am in Class 1C.

This is Junko.

He is my classmate.


He is in Class 1C.

This is Miss Wai.

She is my class teacher.

She is nice.

By Devin Lai

MT 2 p.10

This is Mouse.

It has three erasers.

It has an English book.

It has three pens.

By Junko Ho

This is Yoyo

She has three rulers.

She has two school bags.

She has one pencil sharpener.

By Nicholas Li

School rules by Edward Wong

Come in , please.

Sit down, please.

Don’t talk in class.

Don’t look at the window, please.

Don’t stand up, please.

Don’t run in the classroom.

Don’t eat or drink during the lessons.

MT 3 p.4

This is my rabbit.

It is small.

It is thin.

It has long ears.

I love my rabbit.

By Janice Wan

MT 3 P.11

Hadi is thin.

He has short hair.

He has a small nose.

He has a big mouth.

He has big feet.

By Blues Li

Morris is thin.

He has short hair.

He has big eyes.

He has small feet.


By Edward Wong

This is Diesel.

He is thin.

He has big ears.

He has a short tail.

He has long legs.

By Nicholas Li

Best Writing (Booklet 3) By 1D Chan Yan Tung (Eunice)

Momo is thin.

She has long hair.


She has big eyes.


Jack is tall and thin.

He has big eyes.

He has small ears.

He has a big mouth.

Jack is in Class 1D.

Best Writing (Booklet 3) By 1D Chan Yan Tung (Eunice)

Momo is thin.

She has long hair.


She has big eyes.


Jack is tall and thin.

He has big eyes.

He has small ears.

He has a big mouth.

Jack is in Class 1D.

Best Writing (Booklet 4) By 1D Wong Long Yu (Moses)

This is my puppet Squly.

He has a big head.

He has small hands.

His T-shirt is orange and yellow.

His shorts are blue.

His bow tie is red.

Best Writing (Booklet 4) By 1D Wong Long Yu (Moses)

This is my puppet Squly.

He has a big head.

He has small hands.

His T-shirt is orange and yellow.

His shorts are blue.

His bow tie is red.

Best Writing (Booklet 5) By 1D Hui Chun Shing (Ball B)

Fun Zoo

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They

are in the pond. There is one giraffe. It is yellow and tall. It is on

the grass. There are two monkeys. They are small and brown. They

are in the tree. I like the zoo.

Best Writing (Booklet 5) By 1D Hui Chun Shing (Ball B)

Fun Zoo

This is Fun Zoo. There are three hippos. They are grey. They

are in the pond. There is one giraffe. It is yellow and tall. It is on

the grass. There are two monkeys. They are small and brown. They

are in the tree. I like the zoo.

Best Writing (Booklet 6) By 1D Kwan Pak Yin (Sam)

Today is Sunday. The children are in the park. Matt is sleeping

on the grass. Michelle is reading under the tree. The dog is

swimming in the pond. It is cute. Peter and Ann are running.

Bobby is skating. Charlotte is riding a bike. The children are happy.

Best Writing (Booklet 6) By 1D Kwan Pak Yin (Sam)

Today is Sunday. The children are in the park. Matt is sleeping

on the grass. Michelle is reading under the tree. The dog is

swimming in the pond. It is cute. Peter and Ann are running.

Bobby is skating. Charlotte is riding a bike. The children are happy.

Best Writing By 1D Tai Tin Yau (Ziva)

1. This is Eunice.

2. She is my classmate.

3. She is in Class 1D.

4. She is seven years old.

5. She is kind.

1. This is Yanni.

2. She is a monitress.


4. She is helpful.


1. This is Eunice.




5. She is kind.

1. This is Yanni.



4. She is helpful.


1. This is Eunice.




5. She is kind.

1. This is Yanni.



4. She is helpful.

Best Writing By 1D Yeung Tsiu Yin (Zoey)

School rules

1. Come in, please.

2. Close the door, please.

3. Don’t talk in class.

4. Don’t look out the window.

5. Don’t look at the door.

6. Don’t open your books.

7. Clean the board, please.


School rules

1. Come in, please.








School rules

1. Come in, please.







My Classmate

This is Marcus Leung.

He is my classmate.

He is in Class 1E.

He is energetic.

By 1E (7) Bethanie Cheng

My Pet

This is my dog, Diesel.

He is fat.

He has one long tail.

He is brown and white.

He has two small ears.

He has one big nose.

By 1E (9) Sum Fan

This is Lorraine.


She has four pencils.

She has three books.

By 1E (12) Lawrence Hung

My Pet

This is my dog, Diesel.

He is fat.

He has big ears.

He has long legs.


He has a long tail.

By 1E (14) Sally Lau

This is Yannie.

She has ten pencils.

She has one school bag.

She has four books.

By 1E (16) Lorraine Lee

My Classmate

This is Lawrence Hung.

He is a monitor.

He is in Class 1E.

He is kind.

By 1E (27) Eunice Tang

My Pet

This is Diesel.

He is a dog.

He has a long tail.

He is cute.

He is small.

He is brown and white.

By 1E (1) Alycia Chan

My Birthday

Today is Sunday. It is my birthday. I have a

birthday party at home. Mum, Dad, my cat and I

are at the party. I have some potato chips and

some sausages. Dad gives me a robot. I am happy.

Mum brings me a strawberry cake. I am eight

years old so there is a number eight candle on the

cake. I feel excited. Suddenly, the cat jumps to

Mum. The cake falls down on the floor. We are sad.

Finally, my mum makes another cake for me. I

am happy.

By LEUNG Hong-tung, Kalli

My New School

There are six floors in my school. The playground is on

the ground floor. We mustn’t litter there. The school hall is

on the first floor. We must sit still there. The classrooms

are on the second floor. We must line up in the corridor.

The computer room is on the third floor. We mustn’t spit

in the computer room. The library is on the fourth floor.

We must keep quiet there. The art room is on the fifth

floor. We mustn’t eat or drink there.

By LING Zong-sheng, Jason

My New School

There are six floors in my school. The playground is on

the ground floor. We mustn’t litter there. The school hall is

on the first floor. We must sit still there. The classrooms

are on the second floor. We must line up in the corridor.

The computer room is on the third floor. We mustn’t spit

there. The library is on the fourth floor. We must keep

quiet there. The garden is on the fifth floor. We mustn’t

pick the flowers there.

By HU Ding-chi, Rocky.

The Easter Party

It is Friday. Jim is at a party at his friend’s

house. They celebrate Easter together. In the

morning, they eat Easter eggs. They are yummy.

Jim and his friends watch a movie at eleven o’

clock. They are happy.

In the afternoon, they play a game. Then, they go

Easter egg hunting. Jason’s mum hides some

Easter eggs in the garden. When they are in the

garden, a dog comes out and barks at Jim. Jim is

scared.

Jason cries out loudly and Mum comes out. The

dog runs away when it sees Mum. Jason and Jim

find all the Easter eggs and they are very happy!

By LING Zong-sheng, Jason

The Easter Party

It is Friday. Jim is at a party at his friend’s

house. They celebrate Easter together. In the

morning, they eat Easter eggs. They are yummy.

Jim and his friends watch movies at eleven o’ clock.

They are happy.

In the afternoon, they play a game called Easter

Egg Hunt. Kalli’s dad hides some Easter eggs in the

garden. Jim and his friends find the eggs

everywhere. Suddenly, a dog comes out and barks

at Jim. He is afraid.

Luckily, Jim’s parents come back home from

shopping. They save Jim from the dog. Even

though the dog almost attacks Jim, he has fun with

his friends at Easter.

By LEUNG Hong-tung, Kalli

Billy and the Housework

Billy is lazy. He does not help at home. He usually

watches TV on the sofa after school. He feels happy.

Billy’s mother usually sweeps the floor. She usually

makes the bed and cooks the meals every day. She feels

tired.

One day, Billy’s mother feels sick. She goes to bed and

does not tidy the house. Billy feels sad.

Billy helps his mother do the housework. His mother

feels happy. Billy feels so tired but happy.

By TANG Chung-hei, Phoebus

Billy and the Housework

Billy is lazy. He does not help at home. One day, Billy is

at home. He usually watches TV after school. He feels

happy. His mother does all the housework. She sweeps the

floor. She makes the bed. She cooks the meals. One day,

his mother is sick. Billy’s house is untidy. He is sad.

Billy helps his mother do all the housework. He

becomes a helpful boy. Billy and his mother feel happy at

last.

By CHAN Hon-ki, Jye

Jim and his family

Jim lives in Sha Tin. He goes to school by bus.

Jim has no brothers or sisters. He lives with Dad

and Mum.

Jim’s dad is a postman. He delivers letters to

people. His mum is a waitress. She serves food to

people.

Jim likes his family.

By CHAU Chi-long, Jeremy

My New School

2B Cedric Lai

There are six floors in my school. The playground is on the ground floor. We

mustn’t litter there. The school hall is on the first floor. We must sit still there. The

classrooms are on the second floor. We must line up in the corridor. We must walk

to the classroom. The computer room is on the third floor. We must wait for our

turn. We mustn’t spit there.

The library is on the fourth floor. We must keep quiet. We mustn’t run. A

garden and a cola room are on the fifth floor. We must drink cola in the cola room.

In the garden we must keep off the grass. We mustn’t pick the flowers. We mustn’t

climb the trees. We learn the rules in school.

My birthday

2B Tina Cheung

Today is my birthday and I am eight years old. I have a birthday party with

my dad, my mum and my cat. There are some drinks, chicken wings and cookies at

my birthday party. My father gives me a birthday present. It is a robot. I love it very

much.

When my mother brings me a birthday cake, I feel surprised. Suddenly, the cat

jumps to the cake and it drops on the floor. I feel sad.

Then, my mum bakes another chocolate cake for me. It is yummy. I feel very

happy for my birthday party. It is a wonderful day!

Jim and his family

2B Amber Leung

Jim lives in Sha Tin. He is seven years old. He goes to school by bus

M18. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child in his family. He

lives with his parents.

Jim’s father is a postman. He delivers letters to people. His mother is a

waitress. She serves food to people in the restaurant.

Jim loves his family.

Billy and the housework

2B Moriah Lee Billy is lazy. He does not help at home. In the summer holiday, Billy watches

TV, plays video games, plays with toys and surfs the internet all day. Mum is the

only one to do all the housework.

One day, Dad gets home late and finds that Mum is very sick. He sends her to

the hospital. The house is in a mess. Billy is lonely and he starts reading a book

about a dirty boy meeting a beautiful fairy on Clean Island. The fairy turns the boy

into a frog. Billy is very afraid.

From that day, he becomes a helpful and tidy boy. He sets the table, cleans the

rooms and makes the beds. Mum is happy and Billy is happy too.

A Busy Girl

2B Daniel Kwan Susan is a busy girl. She usually has swimming lessons on Mondays and

Wednesdays. She has her lessons in the swimming pool. She feels happy and

relaxed.

Susan has dancing lessons on Tuesdays and Thursdays. She goes cycling in the

park on Fridays and she goes to Brownies in the school hall on Saturdays. She feels

tired but happy.

Susan studies with her tutor at home on Sundays. After her studies, she visits

her grandparents in Tai Po. Her grandparents cook a big meal. She feels very

excited.

The Easter Party

2B Kari Lai It is Easter. Jim is at a party at his friend’s house. They are celebrating Easter.

They eat chocolate eggs and watch a movie in the morning. They are happy.

They play Easter Egg Hunt in the afternoon. They play in the garden. Suddenly,

Jim meets a fierce dog. The dog barks at him. He feels scared.

The dog bites Jim and he needs to go to the hospital. He is sad.

Best writing by Jayden Choy

My new school

There are six floors in my school. The playground is on the ground floor. We mustn’t

litter there. The hall is on the first floor. We must sit still there. The classrooms are on

the second floor. We must line up in the corridor. The computer room is on the third

floor. We mustn’t spit. The library is on the fourth floor. We must keep quiet. The

music room is on the fifth floor. We must sing. We mustn’t dance.

I like my school very much.

Best writing by Lucas Li

My birthday

It is my birthday today. I am eight years old. I have a birthday party with my family.

There are chips, chicken wings and some coke at the party. They are yummy. I am

joyful.

Dad gives me a robot. Mum gives me a big cake. My cat is hungry. It jumps up high

to the cake. The cake drops on the floor. I am upset. Mum buys me a new cake. I am

happy again.

Best writing by Kathryn Tang

Jim and his family

Jim lives in Sha Tin. He goes to school by bus. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the

only child in his family.

His father is a postman. He delivers letters to people. His mother is a waitress. She

serves food to people. He loves his family.

Best writing by Sophia Cheung

Jim and his family

Jim lives in Sha Tin. He lives with his parents. He goes to school by bus. His father is a

postman. He delivers letters to people. His mother is a waitress. She serves food to

people.

Jim loves his family very much.

Best writing by Sienna Yeung

Jim and his family

Jim lives in Sha Tin. He lives with his mother and father. He goes to school by bus. His

father delivers letters to people. He is a good postman. His mother serves food to

people. She is helpful.

Jim loves his family.

Best writing by Yoyo Chong


Billy is lazy. He does not help at home. He always watches TV after school. He feels

relaxed.

His mum is hard-working. She sweeps the floor, waters the plants and cooks for the

family. She feels tired all the time.

One day Mum is sick so Billy tidies the house. Mum feels happy. Since then, Billy

always helps his mum with the housework. He becomes a good boy.

Best writing by Kiki Chung

A busy girl

Susan is a busy girl. She usually has swimming lessons on Mondays and Wednesdays.

She has her lessons in the swimming pool. She feels happy.

She dances on Tuesdays and Thursdays. She dances in the dancing room. She goes

cycling on Fridays. She goes to Brownies on Saturdays. She feels happy.

She has piano lessons on Sundays. She has her lessons in the music room with her

teacher. She has a lot of fun. What a busy but happy week!

Best writing by Joshua Ho

The Easter Party

It is Easter. Jim is at a party at his friend’s house. In the morning, they watch TV and

eat chocolate eggs. They feel happy.

In the afternoon they have an Easter Egg Hunt. They play hide-and-seek. They also

find the chocolate eggs too.

Suddenly, a dog barks at Jim. He feels scared but he is brave. He scares the dog away.

He feels happy.

My New School by Tiffany Ng

There are six floors in my school. The playground is on the ground

floor. We mustn’t litter there. The school hall is on the first floor. We

must sit still there. The classrooms are on the second floor. We must line

up there. The computer room is on the fourth floor. We mustn’t spit

there. The library is on the fourth floor. We must keep quiet there. The

music room is on the fifth floor. We mustn’t play DVDs there. I like Red

Hill Primary School because it is fun to study there.

My Birthday by Boaz

Today is Sunday. It is my birthday. I have a birthday party with my

daddy and mummy.

I have potato chips and chicken wings at my party. My daddy gives

me a robot as a present. I’m happy.

My mum gives me a strawberry birthday cake. I’m happy too. I am

eight years old. Oh no! The cat jumps up to the cake! I think my cat

wants to eat the cake and the cake drops! I am afraid.

Phew! Dad catches the cake. I’m relieved. So we eat the cake and

give some to my cat. I have a happy day.

My Birthday by Emily

My name is Tom. Today is my birthday. I celebrate my birthday

with my mum and dad at home. We have chips, coca cola and sausages

for the party. My father gives me a toy robot.

My mother gives me a big, yummy and good-looking birthday cake.

I’m eight years old. I feel totally excited. Suddenly, our cat, Mimi jumps

over the cake. The cake drops down accidentally. I am sad.

At last, Mum gets a new cake for us. I feel happy again. We eat the

new cake. It is a very good day.

Jim and his family By Alyssa

Jim lives in Sha Tin. He is a student. He is studying in C.C.C. Heep

Woh Primary School. He goes to school by bus.

He has a lovely family. He has a father and mother. He lives with

them. He loves his family very much. His father is the tallest man at

home. His mother is a beautiful woman.

His father’s job is a postman. He delivers letters to people. His

mother’s job is a waitress. She serves food to people.

This is Jim and his family. He loves his family.

Billy and the housework by Carson Cheung

Billy is not hard-working. He doesn’t help at home. Every afternoon,

Billy is watching TV at home. He doesn’t help his mother do the

housework but he is happy.

His mother does a lot of housework every day. She sweeps the floor,

makes the bed and cooks the meals. She feels tired. One day his mother

gets sick. Then Billy’s house has become untidy. He feels sad.

Then Billy starts helping at home and his home becomes tidy again.

Billy and his mother are happy.

Billy and the housework by Grace Chan

Billy is lazy. He does not help at home. He usually watches TV after

school. He feels relaxed. His mother makes the bed, sweeps the floor

and cooks the meals. She feels tired.

One day, his mother is sick and Billy’s house is untidy and dirty. No

one makes the bed, sweeps the floor or cooks the meals. He feels sad,

scared and worried.

In the end, Billy feels sorry for his mother. He becomes hard-

working to tidy his home. He makes the bed, sweeps the floor and cooks

the meals. Billy and his mother feel comfortable because their home is

tidy and clean again. From then, Billy is helpful and hard-working.

Billy and the housework by Emily Li

Billy is lazy. He doesn’t help at home. Mum does the housework. She

is not lazy. She sweeps the floor and cooks the meals.

One day, Mum is very sick. She cannot do the housework, so the

house is very untidy. Billy has to do all of the housework or the house

will be very untidy. Finally, Billy does the housework because he is

worried about his mother.

Soon, his mother gets better and Billy does the housework with her.

At last, Billy is a good boy and always helps his mother. His mother is

very happy.

Billy and the housework by Carson Li

Billy is not hard-working. He doesn’t help at home. Every

afternoon, Billy is watching TV at home. He doesn’t help his mother do

housework but he is happy.

His mother does a lot of housework. She sweeps the floor, makes

the bed and cooks the meals. She feels tired. One day, his mother gets

sick. Then Bill’s house has become untidy. He feels sad.

Billy starts helping at home and his home becomes tidy again. Billy

and his mother are happy.

The Easter Pary

It is Easter. Jim is at a party at his friend’s house. They eat Easter eggs

and watch TV. They are over the moon.

They have the Easter egg hunt in the garden. Jim wants to find an

egg but he finds a dog instead. He is scared.

In the end, his friend’s mum comes and rescues him. He is safe.

By

Abby Kung, 2E,

The Easter Pary

It is Easter. Jim is at a party at his friend’s house. They watch TV and

eat Easter eggs and cake. They are happy.

They have the Easter egg hunt in the afternoon. They try to find the

eggs. Suddenly, Jim sees a dog barking and chasing after him. He is scared.

Jim has an idea. He gives a ball to the dog and the dog is happy. It

helps Jim find the Easter eggs in the end.

By

Prudent Tai, 2E,


Billy is lazy. He does not help at home. One day, Billy is at home. He

does not help with the housework. He usually watches TV after school. He

feels happy.

Billy’s mother is hard-working. She sweeps the floor, makes the bed

and cooks the meals every day. She feels tired.

One day, his mother is sick. Billy’s house is untidy. He feels unhappy.

He tidies the house and cooks the meals for his mother. Billy and his mum feel

happy in the end.

by Jessie Choi, 2E

Jim and his family

Jim and his family live in Sha Tin. He goes to school by bus.

Jim lives with his mum and dad. His father is a postman.

He delivers letters to people. His mother is a waitress. She serves

food to people. He loves his family!

By JJ Law, 2E




feels happy.





happy in the end.

by Jessie Choi, 2E




feels happy.





happy in the end.

by Jessie Choi, 2E

A busy girl

Susan is a busy girl. She usually has swimming lessons on Mondays

and Wednesdays. She has her lessons in the swimming pool. She feels happy

and relaxed.

She has dancing lessons in the dancing room on Tuesdays and

Thursdays. She rides the bicycle in the park and goes to Brownies on Fridays

and Saturdays. She feels tired.

She takes a rest at home with her family on Sundays. It is enjoyable to

stay with family on holidays!

By Siu Yiu, Yolie, 2E

A busy girl

Susan is a busy girl. She has swimming lessons on Mondays and

Wednesdays. She swims in the swimming pool. She feels happy and relaxed.

She has dancing lessons on Tuesdays and Thursdays. She goes cycling

and goes to Brownies on Fridays and Saturdays. She does these activities

outdoors. She feels happy.

She goes to worship on Sundays. She worships in church. She goes

with her mum. She feels peaceful.

By Aliza Chan, 2E,

The Easter Pary

It is Easter. Jim is at a party at his friend’s house. They watch TV and

eat Easter eggs and cake. They are happy.

They have the Easter egg hunt in the afternoon. They try to find the

eggs. Suddenly, Jim sees a dog barking and chasing after him. He is scared.

Jim has an idea. He gives a ball to the dog and the dog is happy. It

helps Jim find the Easter eggs in the end.

By

Prudent Tai, 2E,

A Letter to My Friend

Dear Jane,

I am fine. It is autumn in Hong Kong. It is cool and dry today. I like

autumn because I can go on picnics.

This year I am a Primary Three student. Life at school is so fun. My

class teacher is Miss Cheung. She teaches me English. She is nice to

students.

I have a reading session on Tuesday and Thursday. I like it very much

because I can bring my favourite book to school. I like P.E. lessons

because I like running and playing ball games with my classmates.

After lunch, I always play hide-and-seek with my friends. After school,

I finish my homework at home.

What do you like eating? Write to me soon.

Love,

Curtis

Curtis Wong

At the Playground

During recess, the students are at the playground.

Two girls are reading books and a ball hits one of the girls. The boy

who throws the ball says, “I’m so sorry!” The girl is so angry and does

not want to forgive him.

At the same time, a boy throws the rubbish on the floor, so the

teacher punishes him. “Pick it up, right now!” says Ms Cheung. There are

two boys fighting with each other.

They are not good students because they are rude and naughty. We

should be careful and behave ourselves.

Raina Ng

At the Playground

During recess, some P.3 students are at the playground.

They eat potato chips, read books and play basketball. Then the ball

hits a girl. The boy says sorry to the girl. Some students fight. Some

students throw the rubbish on the floor. The teacher punishes them.

The two boys who play basketball are careless. The boys who fight

and throw the rubbish are naughty. We should behave ourselves and be

careful.

Caleb Chan

At the Happy Farm

On Sunday, Sam goes to the Happy Farm with his parents. They get

there by bus and they all feel so excited.

In the farm, Sam sees a lot of fruits and vegetables like corn, carrots

and strawberries. They look very fresh and yummy!

Later, Sam’s family walks to a pond. There are some children

throwing stones at the ducks in the pond. The ducks are so scared and

Sam feels so angry. “Stop throwing stones at the ducks! You’re hurting

them!” says Sam. Then the children stop throwing and say, “We are

sorry. We don’t know this will hurt the ducks.”

I think the children are naughty because we should love the animals

but not harm them.

Carine Cai

At the Happy Farm

Sam goes to the Happy Farm with his parents this Sunday. Sam can

look at the plants and animals in the farm. He is very happy.

First they go to look at the plants. There are corn, carrots,

strawberries and watermelons.

Then Sam walks to the pond alone. He sees two children throw some

stones into the pond. There are many ducks in the pond. Sam is very

angry. Sam shouts, “Stop it!” The two children stop and run away.

I think they are not good because they will hurt the ducks. We should

protect the animals.

Unique Chan

3B Ian Lo

My special classmate

My best friend is Adian. He is in Class 3D. He is short and thin. His skin is

white because he does not like outdoor activities. He is very polite. When I help him

with something, he always says “thank you” to me. He is a happy boy. He always has

a big smile on his face.

His favourite subject is Maths. He is good at doing sums. He is good at

singing. He can sing but he can’t play the piano. When he is free, he likes playing

computer games and making models.

I like him very much because he is kind and funny. He tells jokes and sings

interesting songs. I like talking to him at school because he listens to me. I want to be

good friends with him forever.

3B Mag Leung

My school picnic

I had a picnic today with my P.1 to P.3 classmates and teachers. We went to

Jordan Valley Park by school bus. Everyone was excited. Some students chatted with

their friends. Some students had a nap on the way.

Our class teacher did the roll call after we had arrived at the park. After that,

we took class photos. Then, it was our free time. Our class teacher let us choose the

best place for the picnic.

I had chosen a great place with shelter and a good view. I settled down with

my picnic mat. I ate some candy floss, cherry tomatoes and farfalle. I played football

and hide-and-seek with my friends after the meal.

I saw so many mosquitoes and sparrows when I was playing hide-and-seek. In

the first round, I was bitten by some mosquitoes when I was hiding behind the tree. I

felt itchy. I screamed “Ah!” and the classmate found me. I was the loser in that round.

Time goes by so fast. It was time to go back to school. I felt reluctant. It was a

wonderful day today anyway but I was extremely exhausted and itchy.

3B Natalie Chong

My special friend

My best friend is Shanice. She is in Class 3B. She sits in the second seat on

the fourth row.

Shanice is nice and smart. She always smiles. She loves learning and she gets

good marks. Her favourite subject is Visual Arts. She can play the piano but she can’t

play the violin. She is good at drawing too. She practises the piano in her free time. I

like her because she doesn’t fight with me or laugh at me.

I like playing with her because she doesn’t shout at me. I want to be special

friends with her because she is helpful and polite.

3B Tammy Fan


My best friend is Donna. She is my classmate. She sits in my row. Donna is

tall. She has big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth.

She is kind, polite and helpful. In school, her favourite subject is Music. She

can play the piano but she can’t play the flute. She plays the piano very well. She is

good at PE. She likes running, she runs faster than me! She is also good at drawing.

Her pictures are very beautiful. The teacher always gives her high marks. She likes

skipping in her free time. I like her so much because she is good.

At recess, I like talking to her because she listens to me. I really want to be

special friends with Donna forever. She is a good girl. I love her!

3B Charmaine Ng

My school picnic

I had a picnic today with my P.1 to P.3 classmates and teachers. We went to

Jordan Valley Park by school bus. I was very excited.

We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. We took class photos with our teachers happily.

Then we settled down on the grass and ate some snacks. After that we skipped and

flew a kite. We played ball games too. At noon we all felt hungry so we had lunch

together. I ate some sandwiches and an apple pie. I drank some peach juice and cola

too.

After having lunch, we played hide-and-seek. Suddenly, I saw a beautiful

butterfly. It flew around the flowers. I chased after it. I tripped over a rock and fell on

the grass. I felt sad and in pain. My classmates took me to the teacher, Miss Ng. She

put a bandage on my knee.

Finally we packed our bags and got onto the school bus. I felt tired and in pain

but still very happy! I hope we will have our school picnic very soon.

3B Christy Yip


My special classmate is Hebe. She is in Class 3B. She sits on my left. She has

long hair and big eyes. She is thin too.

She is quiet and polite. She is nice and kind too. Her favourite subject is

English. She is good at English. She can play archery in her free time. She is good at

playing games too. I like her because she always plays with me in recess.

We like sharing our happy moments with each other. I want to be her special

friend because friendship is very important. They will play with you and spend time

with you.

3B Dora Yung

A letter to Jane

29th October, 2019

Dear Jane,

How are you? It is autumn in Hong Kong. It is cool and windy

today. I don’t like this season because I feel cold.

This year, I am a Primary Three student too. Life at school is so

happy. My class teacher is Miss Ng. She teaches me Maths and General

Studies. She is nice to students. My English teacher is Miss Tam. She is

very funny. My Chinese teacher is Miss Man. She is sick today.

I have a recess in the morning. I can eat snacks and play. I enjoy

Art lessons because I like to draw and colour. I have lunch with my

classmates in the classroom. It is yummy.

After school, I go to the tutorial centre to finish my homework too.

Then, I go back home and play with my sister.

Do you like winter? Why? Please write to me soon.

Love,

Dora

3B Hailey Ho


Alice is my classmate. We are in Class 3B. She is eight years old. She sits next

to me. She is tall and thin. She has a small nose and big eyes. She is pretty, everyone

likes her.

Alice is nice and polite. She always says “thanks” and “please”. Her favourite

subject is English because she likes reading English books. She is good at Visual Arts.

She can draw beautiful pictures and make crafts. She likes playing football. We

usually go to play football in our free time. I like Alice very much because she is

caring, she talks to me and listens to me when I am sad.

Alice is very kind too. I like playing games and chatting with her. Alice is not

only my special classmate, but also my best friend. I hope we can be friends forever.

P3C 1920 Heep Woh Chime 3C Cheryl Fong (8)

My Special Classmate

My best friend is Mary. She is in class 3C. She sits in front of me. She is tall.

Mary is good. She listens to me and looks after me. Her favourite subject is

Visual Arts. She is good at drawing. She can play football. She is good at music

but she is not good at sports. She reads magazines in her free time. I like her

because she plays with me every week.

I like talking to her at school because she doesn’t laugh at me or fight with me. I

want to be special friends with her because she is friendly and careful.

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P3C 1920 Heep Woh Chime 3C Macy Lam (15)


My best friend is Chloe. She is in class 3C. She sits in front of me. She looks like

a cute cat.

Chloe is funny. I think she is funny because she often tells jokes and makes me

laugh. Her favourite subject is Visual Arts and she is good at painting pictures. She

likes English. She is good at writing English. She likes doing sports. She can swim

well. In her free time, she likes listening to CDs. I like Chloe because she looks

after me.

I like talking to her and I love to study with her at school. I want to be special

friends with her because she is good and I want to be as good as her too.

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P3C 1920 Heep Woh Chime 3C Hailey Tsang (21)


Chole is my special classmate. She is in class 3C. She sits in front of me. Her

eyes are big and her mouth is small.

Chole is nice because she looks after me. Her favourite subject is Computer

Studies. She is good at using the computer. She can’t play basketball but she is

good at playing the piano. She watches TV and listens to music in her free time. I

like her because she doesn’t play tricks on me.

I chat with Chole and play with her at school because she is my best friend. I

want to be special friends with her because she always helps me.

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P3C 1920 Heep Woh Chime 3C Angel Wan (23)


Venus is my best classmate in class 3C. She is my best friend too! She sits next

to me and she is short. Her hair is long but her eyes are small. I think she is cute

and pretty.

Venus is nice and kind. She is polite to everybody. Her favourite subject is

English. She is good at sports and she likes playing basketball. She rides a bicycle

every Sunday. Venus is helpful too. I like her because she helps me with my English.

We like playing football in the playground together at recess. It is fun to play

with her. I want to be her special friend because I like to talk to her. I hope we can

be close friends forever.

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P3C 1920 Heep Woh Chime 3C Meko Wong (24)

My Special Schoolmate

My best friend is Jinni. We were classmates last year but this year she is in class

3E. She sat next to me last year. Jinni is short. She has big eyes.

Jinni is nice. Although we are in different classes, she talks to me and listens to me

during recess. Jinni’s favourite subject is PE. She is good at running. She is good

at singing too. She can sing well but she can’t play the piano. She likes listening to

music when she is free.

I like her very much because she is kind. I like playing with her because she doesn’t

play tricks on me. I want to be special friends with her because she is helpful.

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P3C 1920 Heep Woh Chime 3C Holiday Yim (26)

My Special Schoolmate

My best friend is Simon. He is in class 3D. Every day after school, we go to the

same tutorial centre. We are in the same group so we study and do homework

together. He sits on my left. He is thin and short.

Simon is friendly. He always listens to me and talks to me. His favourite subject

is Maths. He is good at doing sums. He can swim but he cannot play the violin. He

is good at sports but he is not good at music. He takes photos during his free time. I

like him because he is kind.

I like chatting with Simon at school. He doesn’t fight with me or laugh at me. I

want to be special friends with him because he is nice.

My special classmate 3D Lok Mak

Paco is my classmate. He is my best friend too. He is in Class 3D. He sits next to

me. He is short and thin.

He is generous, kind and funny. He tells jokes to me and he shares food with me.

His favourite subject is Maths. He is good at doing sums. He plays badminton in his

free time. I like to play with him because he is kind.

I like talking to him at school because he listens to me and talks to me. I want to

be special friends with him because he is funny.

My diary 3D Smile Cheung

6th

December, 2019 Sunny and cold

It was 6th

December, 2019. I had the school picnic. I went to Jordan Valley Park

with P.1 to P.3 classmates and teachers. I felt excited.

I played hide-and-seek with Venus and Lucy. I ate a piece of mango cake and

drank a can of orange juice. I saw some birds standing in the pond and some

butterflies flying in the sky. I tripped over a rock and fell on the grass. I hurt my

hand. It felt painful so I cried.

Then Mark gave me a tissue and helped me clean up. I said, “Thank you.” I felt a

little bit sad.

My diary 3D Zoe Cheung

6th

December, 2019 Sunny and cold

I had a picnic today with my P.1 to P.3 schoolmates and teachers. We went to

Jordan Valley Park by school bus. I was happy and excited.

We ate some food such as sandwiches, fish balls, chocolate, potato chips, chicken

wings and lemon tea. After we finished eating our food, I played with my

classmates. We played hide-and-seek. We saw a big bee when we were playing

hide-and-seek. I was so scared.

I enjoyed the school picnic. It was so memorable.

A Special Trip 3D Charisse Siu

It was sunny yesterday. Dad suggested we have a barbecue in Happy Country

Park. Then we bought some food and drinks in the supermarket. I felt happy and

excited.

We had a barbecue first. We ate sweets, sausages and chicken wings. Then we

flew the kite and took photos. Suddenly, there was heavy rain. I felt sad.

Then we went shopping. I felt happy because my parents bought me some gifts

and we ate dim sum in the Chinese restaurant.

A letter to my friend 3D Greta Lau

Dear Jane,

How are you? It is autumn in Hong Kong. I like this season and I can eat hotpot

and go hiking.

This year I am a Primary Three student. My class teacher is Miss Lam. She

teaches me Chinese, Visual Arts, General Studies and Putonghua. She is nice and

funny.

I have a morning assembly every day. I enjoy Music lessons because I am good

at singing songs. I like lunch time because the meal is yummy.

After school, I go to an English centre to study English including Oral, Grammar

and Phonics. I will learn English well and communicate with you. I help Mum look

after my brother at home too. I like my brother very much.

What’s the weather like in Australia now? Do you like it? What do you do after

school at home? Write to me soon.

Love,

Greta

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1. A letter to my friend Greta Lau

Dear Jane,

How are you? It is autumn in Hong Kong. I like this season and I can eat hotpot

and go hiking.

This year I am a Primary Three student. My class teacher is Miss Lam. She

teaches me Chinese, Visual Arts, General Studies and Putonghua. She is nice and

funny.

I have a morning assembly every day. I enjoy Music lessons because I am good

at singing songs. I like lunch time because the meal is yummy.

After school, I go to an English centre to study English including Oral, Grammar

and Phonics. I will learn English well and communicate with you. I help Mum look

after my brother at home too. I like my brother very much.

What’s the weather like in Australia now? Do you like it? What do you do after

school at home? Write to me soon.

Love,

Greta

At the playground 3D Katelyn Lee

It is recess time. A lot of students are playing in the playground.

Some of them are playing basketball. Some of them are reading books. However,

some of them are fighting and even littering.

When Max is playing basketball, he accidentally throws the ball at Mary. She is

hurt and feels very angry. When Alan and Peter are fighting, Anna wants to tell

their teacher. However, she is busy scolding Roy about not to litter.

What an exciting day at the playground.

At the Happy Farm 3D Chaska Chow

It is Sunday. Sam and his parents go to the Happy Farm.

They see a lot of food including corn, carrots, strawberries and watermelons.

After that, they go to the greenhouse. They go to the pond to watch the ducks.

Suddenly he sees his friends Amy and Peter. They are throwing the stones in the

pond. He says, “Hey! You guys can’t throw the stones in the pond. Otherwise, the

ducks will die!”

I think they are not good because they hurt the ducks. We can’t throw anything

at the ducks because they will die. They apologize at last and agree not to do it

again.

My special classmate 3D Hayden Lai

My best friend is Jayden Li. He is in Class 3B. Jayden sits in front of me. He is

thin and tall. He is nice and friendly. He always listens to me, talks to me and looks

after me. His favourite subject is Maths. He is good at doing sums. He can run but

he can’t play the violin. He is good at sports but he is not good at music. He chats

with me in his free time. I like him because he is kind.

I like chatting with him at school. He doesn’t shout at me, fight with me or play

tricks on me. I want to be special friends with him because he plays with me, talks

with me, listens to me and looks after me every day.

A letter to my friend

Dear Jane,

How are you? It is autumn in Hong Kong. It’s cool and windy.

I like summer and I can go swimming with my family at the

beach.

This year I am a Primary Three student. My school life is

happy. My class teacher is Miss Poon. She teaches me Chinese.

She is nice and kind.

I read story books every Tuesday and Thursday morning. I

enjoy PE and English lessons. I listen to the teachers and feel

great to learn new things. I have lunch with my classmates

together in the classroom.

After school, I do my homework at home. My favourite

subject is English. What is your favourite subject?

Hope to hear from you soon.

Love,

Jensen

By 3E (29) Jensen Wong

A story – At the playground

At recess, Ms Wong and the students are at

the playground.

Kelly is eating potato chips. Mary and May are

reading the books. Tom and Kenny are fighting.

John and Peter are playing basketball but the

basketball hits May. Then May is crying. John

and Peter say, “Sorry!”

Lego is dirty, he puts the rubbish on the

floor. “Don’t throw the rubbish!” Ms Wong says.

Students are naughty and careless. They

should be careful and be a good student at the

school.

By 3E (30) Angel Wong

A story – At the Happy Farm

At eight o’clock in the morning, Sam, his

mother and father go to Happy Farm .

They go to Happy Farm by bus. They arrive at

Happy Farm and Sam wants to play badminton.

They go to the garden. They see a lot of

flowers and fruits. Sam sees a butterfly and he

wants to catch the butterfly.

He goes to the pond. He sees Amy and Ella.

They are watching the ducks. They feel happy.

Sam says, “Where are my mother and father?”

Amy and Ella say, “We don’t know. Sorry!”

Finally, Sam finds his mother and father. He

says, “Sorry mother.”

By 3E (34) Amy Zhou

A story – At the Happy Farm

Sam goes to the Happy Farm at twelve o’clock.

They go to the farm by bus. They go there

because Sam likes animals.

First they go to the farm. They see some corn,

carrots, strawberries and watermelons. Sam

feels very hungry because the vegetables look

yummy.

Next they go to the duck pond. They want to

see some ducks, fish and turtles. Suddenly, Sam

sees two children. They throw stones at the

ducks. Sam says, “You mustn’t throw the stones

at the duck.” The children say, “Sorry!”

Sam feels they are not good because they

throw the stones at the ducks. Suddenly, Sam

cannot find his mum and dad. He feels very

scared. He runs to find the farm keeper. The

farm keeper helps him to find his parents.

By 3E (4) Esmond Chan


Dear Jane,

How are you? I live in Tsuen Wan West. It is autumn. The

weather is wet and windy.

My school life is busy. My class teacher is Miss Poon. She

teaches Chinese. In the morning, I eat breakfast. During

lessons, I listen to teachers. In the afternoon, I have lunch.

After school, I go to the tutorial centre.

Are there any big shopping malls near your home? Write to

me soon.

Love,

Isabella

By 3E (7) Isabella Cheung


Dear Jane,

How are you? It’s autumn in Hong Kong. It is cool and windy

today. I like this season and I can fly a kite with my friends too.

This year I am a Primary Three student. Life at school is so

good. My class teacher is Miss Poon. She is kind to students.

I read story books every morning. I enjoy Maths lessons

because I am good at Maths. At recess, I play badminton with

my classmates.

After school, I go to the tutorial centre and finish my

homework. Then I help my mum to look after my brother.

What do you do after school? Write to me soon.

Love,

Cathy

By 3E (13) Cathy Chu


This morning, my classmates and teachers are

at the playground during recess time.

Some of them are reading books. Some of

them are fighting. Some of them are eating and

drinking.

“Oh! Look!” Ben throws the rubbish on the

floor. “Don’t throw the rubbish on the floor. You

should put the rubbish into the rubbish bin,” says

Miss Latta. “I’m sorry! I will put it into the

rubbish bin,” says Ben.

I think they are not good students because

they are fighting and throwing the rubbish on

the floor. We should teach them.

By 3E (27) Raphael Sun


On a sunny day, Yuki, Ella and Valerie are at

the playground. Yuki is eating her favourite

potato chips. Ella and Valerie are reading their

story books.

Choco and his classmate are playing basketball.

Suddenly, Choco throws the ball and hits

Valerie’s head. Valerie feels pain. She cries.

Choco feels sorry and says “I’m sorry! Please

forgive me!” Valerie stops sobbing and she

forgives Choco finally.

Larry and Ethan are fighting. Yuki stops them.

They say sorry to each other and promise never

to fight again.

The naughtiest boy Jensen throws rubbish

on the floor every day. Miss Ng sees it and

shouts “Do not throw rubbish on the floor!”

Jensen feels upset. I think the boys at this

school are very naughty, but they will apologize

when they make the mistakes.

By 3E (28) Karis Tang

Best writing (Booklet 3) By 4A Chinning Jay (Jay)

The Good Big Brother

Yesterday, Sally and John’s mum was sick. Mum said, ‘Please take care

of Sally today.”

In the afternoon, Sally and John felt hungry. John tried to find some food.

He saw two cartons of milk and a tin of nuts in the refrigerator. He also found

two packets of noodles. “I can’t cook the noodles,” said John. “I can’t either,”

said Sally. Suddenly, they had an idea of eating out.

John helped Sally tie her shoelaces and then they went to Jolly Fast Food

Shop. They had noodles with pork chops. At last, they bought a loaf of bread

for Mum. John was really a good big brother.



Yesterday, Sally and John’s mum was sick. Mum said, “Please take care

of Sally today.”

In the afternoon, Sally and John felt hungry. John tried to find some food.

He saw two cartons of milk and a tin of nuts in the refrigerator. He also found

two packets of noodles. “I can’t cook the noodles,” said John. “I can’t either,”

said Sally. Suddenly, they had an idea of eating out.

John helped Sally tie her shoelaces and then they went to Jolly Fast Food

Shop. They had noodles with pork chops. At last, they bought a loaf of bread

for Mum. John was really a good big brother.

Best writing (Booklet 4) By 4A Lo Sze Wing (Cherry)

A Sporty Weekend

I am Bobo. Laura and I were good friends. One day, I called Laura and

said, “What will you do tomorrow?” Laura said, ‘I will go to play badminton

in the Happy Sports Centre tomorrow. Will you come to play together?” I

said, “Yes, I will.”

Then I asked, “How do I get to the Happy Sports Centre?” “Go out of

Kwai Fong MTR station, Exit A and turn left. Walk straight ahead. Then walk

across the road. The sports centre is opposite the convenience store,” said

Laura.

The next day, I tried to go to the sports centre but I could not find it. I got

lost on my way. I was confused. Luckily, I had a mobile phone. I called

someone for help. At last, I got there. Laura was happy to see me.

Best writing (Booklet 4) By 4A Lo Sze Wing (Cherry)

A Sporty Weekend

I am Bobo. Laura and I were good friends. One day, I called Laura and

said, “What will you do tomorrow?” Laura said, ‘I will go to play badminton

in the Happy Sports Centre tomorrow. Will you come to play together?” I

said, “Yes, I will.”

Then I asked, “How do I get to the Happy Sports Centre?” “Go out of

Kwai Fong MTR station, Exit A and turn left. Walk straight ahead. Then walk

across the road. The sports centre is opposite the convenience store,” said

Laura.

The next day, I tried to go to the sports centre but I could not find it. I got

lost on my way. I was confused. Luckily, I had a mobile phone. I called

someone for help. At last, I got there. Laura was happy to see me.

Best writing (Booklet 5) By 4A Chan Sze Chit (Jade)

Eating Habits

Carmen did not have good eating habits. She liked eating meat and junk

food. It was because she thought healthy food tasted bad. Her mum said, “You

need to eat more vegetables and fruit.” Carmen did not listen to her anyway.

One day, Carmen had a buffet dinner with her parents. She ate a lot of

pork and sausages. Since she ate and drank too much, she was not feeling well.

Then she had a stomach ache. Her parents took her to a clinic.

After that, she changed her eating habits. She did not want to get sick

anymore. She wanted to keep fit and strong. She ate a lot of vegetables and

fruit. She did exercise every day. A few months later, she became fit and

healthy.

Best writing (Booklet 5) By 4A Chan Sze Chit (Jade)

Eating Habits

Carmen did not have good eating habits. She liked eating meat and junk

food. It was because she thought healthy food tasted bad. Her mum said, “You

need to eat more vegetables and fruit.” Carmen did not listen to her anyway.

One day, Carmen had a buffet dinner with her parents. She ate a lot of

pork and sausages. Since she ate and drank too much, she was not feeling well.

Then she had a stomach ache. Her parents took her to a clinic.

After that, she changed her eating habits. She did not want to get sick

anymore. She wanted to keep fit and strong. She ate a lot of vegetables and

fruit. She did exercise every day. A few months later, she became fit and

healthy.


The Fat Princess

Once upon a time, there was a monster who locked the fat Princess

Molly in a tower. She liked eating French fries. So she was fat. She was sad

because she was too fat to escape.

Then she decided to change her habit. She ate healthy food and

exercised every day because she wanted to leave from the window. One

month later, she became fit.

One day, when the monster was sleeping, she got out of the window

with a rope and left. At the end, she could escape successfully.

She learnt to do more sports and eat healthy food from then on.


The Fat Princess

Once upon a time, there was a monster who locked the fat Princess Molly

in a tower. She liked eating French fries. So she was fat. She was sad

because she was too fat to escape.

Then she decided to change her habit. She ate healthy food and

exercised every day because she wanted to leave from the window. One

month later, she became fit.

One day, when the monster was sleeping, she got out of the window

with a rope and left. At the end, she could escape successfully.

She learnt to do more sports and eat healthy food from then on.

Best writing (Booklet 1) By 4A Luo Wing Fung (Ken)

My best friend Emma

I am Rosie. My best friend is Emma. She is ten years old. She is

shorter than me. Her eyes are bigger than mine.

Emma is a funny girl. She has a great sense of humour. She often

tells us jokes and makes us laugh.

Emma’s hobbies are going ice-skating and cycling. She always

goes ice-skating on Wednesdays after school. She is good at sports.

Emma sometimes goes cycling with me on Sundays. We are good

friends. We have the same hobbies.

Best writing (Booklet 1) By 4A Luo Wing Fung (Ken)

My best friend Emma

I am Rosie. My best friend is Emma. She is ten years old. She is

shorter than me. Her eyes are bigger than mine.

Emma is a funny girl. She has a great sense of humour. She often

tells us jokes and makes us laugh.

Emma’s hobbies are going ice-skating and cycling. She always

goes ice-skating on Wednesdays after school. She is good at sports.

Emma sometimes goes cycling with me on Sundays. We are good

friends. We have the same hobbies.

Best writing (Booklet 2) By 4A Chan Hiu Yeung (Yeung Yeung)

Our Picnic

I went for a picnic with my family yesterday. We went to Sai Kung

Country Park. It was a big park. We felt excited.

First, we wanted to buy some food and drinks for the picnic. We went to

the supermarket. We bought some milk, nuts, potato chips and soya milk.

Then we went there by bus. When we got off the bus, we found that the

food and drinks were left on the seat of the bus. We felt disappointed.

Luckily, the bus driver was kind. He found the food and gave it back to us.

We were happy. We will take good care of our belongings next time.

Best writing (Booklet 2) By 4A Chan Hiu Yeung (Yeung Yeung)

Our Picnic

I went for a picnic with my family yesterday. We went to Sai Kung

Country Park. It was a big park. We felt excited.

First, we wanted to buy some food and drinks for the picnic. We went to

the supermarket. We bought some milk, nuts, potato chips and soya milk.

Then we went there by bus. When we got off the bus, we found that the

food and drinks were left on the seat of the bus. We felt disappointed.

Luckily, the bus driver was kind. He found the food and gave it back to us.

We were happy. We will take good care of our belongings next time.

Eating habits Carmen was very picky. She never ate vegetables or fruit. She

ate a lot of junk food. Even though Mum always advised her, she still did not eat

any vegetables or fruit. But after a horrible lesson, Carmen finally changed her

eating habits.

One day, it was Carmen’s birthday so they had a buffet dinner at

Happy Hotel. Carmen ate a lot of food, such as steak, chicken wings and

sausages. Then, she ate a lot of ice cream and cakes for dessert. She also drank

three glasses of soda. She was satisfied.

Later that night, Carmen had a stomach ache. Her parents

quickly took her to the doctor. The doctor said that if Carmen did not change her

eating habits, a ghost would catch her and lock her up into a tower. Carmen was

scared of ghosts. She decided to eat healthy then.

Three months later, Carmen was healthy and strong. She had not

been caught by a ghost. She was over the moon!

By Alvin Lam, 4B

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A Sporty Weekend

Last Saturday, I asked my friend, Laura if she had something to do the next day.

She said she did not have anything to do so she suggested going to the sports centre. I did not

know how to go there so Laura gave me the directions. “Go out of Exit A from Kwai Fong

MTR Station. Then turn left and walk straight ahead. After that, walk across the road.”

Then it was time I went there using the directions Laura gave me. When I got

there, I did not see the sports centre. I was lost! Luckily, I saw a policeman. I asked the

policeman where the sports centre was. He replied, “Start from here. Walk straight ahead,

Turn right and walk across the road. The sports centre is on your left. It is opposite Sky City

Plaza.” I said thank you to him and ran to the sports centre. In the meantime, I was worried.

Laura gave me the wrong directions. Is there something wrong? I wondered.

Then I ran towards the sports centre. However, I found that everything was dark.

When I was about to leave….surprize! The lights lit up at the same time. The doors were

closed with an enormous slam! Surprised, I turned around but there was still no one there.

The sports centre was giving me the creeps. I was scared when… “Blarp!” A party blower

sound rang in the air and a thousand people came running out behind tables. They were all

my friends! Then the policeman came. It was the same policeman that I asked for directions

to the sports centre. Then the policeman took off his cap and I recognized him immediately.

He was my dad! Just then some tables were pushed out. There was some food and a cake. On

the cake, it was written, Happy birthday, Bobo! I forgot it was my birthday! That was why

Laura told me the wrong directions and Dad was faking being a policeman!

In the end, we all had a good time together!

By Hayden Lai, 4B


John’s mum was sick yesterday because she ate something wrong.

She said, “Please take care of Sally today.” John and Sally were sad.

In the morning, they watched a funny movie. Suddenly, Sally was

hungry so they went to the kitchen. They looked inside the fridge but there was

only a jar of jam and two cartons of soya milk. Then John saw two packets of

instant noodles but he could not cook them. Sally said, “I can’t either.”

John suggested, “Let’s go to Jolly Fast Food Shop.” Sally could not

tie her shoelaces so John had to help her. They went there on foot. On the way,

they chatted with each other. In the fast food shop, John ordered spaghetti with

ham and cheese and Sally ordered macaroni with mushrooms. The food was

delicious.

Before they left the fast food shop, John said, “Let’s buy soup noodles

with dumplings for Mum. It is the cheapest but the healthiest one. It’s only

twenty-two dollars fifty.” Sally said, “There’s a free drink with every set. Let’s

have a cup of lemon tea. It’s healthier than other drinks.” Then John took the

food home. At home, Mum said, “What a good son, John!” John was happy.

by Timber Nam, 4B

The Good Big Brother Yesterday, John and his sister, Sally were unhappy. Their

mother was ill so she could not take care of them. She needed to rest at home.

In the morning, they read books and played electronic games. At

noon, Sally was hungry. She could eat a horse! John looked into the refrigerator.

He could not find any apples. He could not find any cheese either because the

fridge was almost empty. There were only two cartons of milk and a jar of peanut

butter.

Then John and Sally ran into the kitchen. They looked in the

cupboard. They looked from top to toe too. They could not find anything but

noodles. John said, “I can’t cook the noodles.” Sally said, “I can’t either.”

They felt disappointed. Sally said, “Let’s give up. We can’t cook anything!”

However, John said, “Let’s eat out at Jolly Fast Food Shop. It’s the best!” Sally

agreed with John. Suddenly, Sally whispered into John’s ear, “I can’t tie my

shoelaces by myself.” Then John helped Sally to tie her shoelaces. After that,

they got to the fast food shop. John ordered sushi and Sally ordered tuna salad.

They both drank some juice. They felt satisfied.

After lunch, John bought some congee for his mother. John’s

mother felt better after she ate the congee. She said, “You’re a good brother.”

Everyone felt happy.

by Mantova Chan, 4B

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The Good Big Brother Yesterday, John and Sally’s mum had a fever. She needed to

rest at home. She said to John, “Please take care of Sally today.” John nodded.

They were sad.

John and Sally first read some story books. Then, they played

board games. At twelve o’clock, they were hungry. They looked in the

refrigerator to look for some food but there was almost nothing inside. There

were just two cartons of milk and a jar of peanuts. The milk was expired! They

were disappointed.

They passed by the kitchen and saw two packets of instant

noodles. John could not cook the noodles. Sally could not either. Sally said,

“Let’s think of another idea quickly. I can eat a horse!” They were worried that

they would not have anything to eat.

Suddenly, John had an idea. He whispered to Sally, “Let’s go to

Jolly Fast Food Shop.” Sally agreed. They told their mum and when they were

about to go out, Sally whispered, “I can’t tie my shoelaces.” Then John helped

her. When they arrived at Jolly Fast Food Shop, they saw their dad working there.

They told their dad what happened and they had some food together. They

bought some food for Mum, too! Sally thought, “What a good brother I have!”

By Aubree, 4B

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The fat princess

Once upon a time, a dirty and ugly monster kidnapped a princess who

was called Molly. Although she was already as fat as an elephant, the monster decided to eat

her when she became even fatter. To make Molly fatter, the monster only gave her junk food,

such as French fries and pickled pork. However, she loved them very much! and because of

that, Molly did not sense the danger until one day.

One day, Molly heard two little monsters chatting, “Hey! The girl is

already very fat. Why doesn’t the boss share her with us?” said one of them. “I don’t know,

but……” “What are you two chatting about?” the boss asked, while they were chatting. He

stared at them. The two little monsters did not answer and they just ran away embarrassed.

From that day on, Molly decided to escape from the only window with

bars. So she ate a load of vegetables and fruit and she seldom ate junk food. A week later,

she was thin enough to squeeze through the bars. The only thing that she needed was a rope.

Fortunately, she found one in the corner of the small, dirty room so she passed the rope down

and slid down from the window while the monsters were sleeping. However, she landed with

a loud “thud” that was loud enough to wake up the monsters.

The monsters chased Molly and she was running as fast as her legs could

carry her. Molly was fast but there were too many monsters. They surrounded her quickly

and walked slowly to Molly. At last, they ate Molly happily.

By Rocus Leung, 4B

Our Picnic

Yesterday was the time of the year that I loved the most. The

day I would go to Sai Kung Country Park for a picnic with my sister Susan, Dad

and Mum.

Since Mum wanted us to help her with the preparation work, we

went to ABC Supermarket to buy some food before we took the bus to Sai Kung.

We were thrilled and bought tonnes of food, like a tin of sausages, a loaf of bread,

a bunch of bananas and a few packets of chips. My mouth started watering while

we were doing the shopping and I could not wait to start our feast.

We chatted happily on the bus and yet something did not seem

right after we got off. Suddenly, Mum yelled, “Oh no! We left our food on the

bus! Let’s catch that bus and get the food back! Hurry up!” Then we tried to

chase after the bus but we failed because the bus left at high speed. To make

things worse, it started raining cats and dogs. “Let’s just go to The Best

Restaurant in the World instead,” Mum said, with a trace of disappointment in

her voice. Unfortunately, the food was yuckier than cow dunk, so we were sad.

Our annual picnic was completely ruined and Susan’s eyes

turned red and moistened when we were on the way home. “Let’s go there for a

picnic again next Saturday,” Dad suggested. A clown-like smile spread across

my sister’s face, “Hurray!”

By Thina, 4B

Our Picnic

Yesterday was a sunny day so my family went to Sai Kung

Country Park for a picnic. My sister Susan and I did not have school. Dad

suggested that we could go for a picnic. Mum, Susan and I agreed that it was a

great idea.

Then we went to the supermarket for food and drinks. We put

our favourite potato chips, bread for sandwiches, bananas, sausages and

blackcurrant juice into the shopping cart. They were on a big offer. They were

also the food and drinks that we wanted for the picnic. We were excited.

When we got on the bus to the park, we were amazed by the

beautiful scenery, the bay. We took photos of this beautiful sight. Then we got

off the bus and started walking to the destination. We talked and laughed happily.

When we reached there, we suddenly found that our shopping bags were left on

the seat! We were hungry and helpless at that moment.

Fortunately, the bus driver was our neighbour. He was friendly

and helpful. He also got our phone number. He found that we left the food on the

bus so he phoned us. He came to the park with the food after he was off duty. In

the end, everyone was happy.

We invited him to join our picnic. We had a picnic

together. We enjoyed ourselves very much. On the way home, we sang songs

together. In the end, we were tired after getting home.

By Heidi Tsoi, 4B

Our Picnic

Yesterday, Mum, Dad, Susan and I went to the supermarket

because we wanted to buy something for our picnic.

Then we checked out at the cashier. We bought two cartons of

blackcurrant juice, two packets of potato chips, a bunch of bananas. We paid

using Dad’s Octopus card. I was excited to have a picnic!

After that, we went there by bus. On the way, I saw lots of

beautiful flowers, butterflies and birds. I was amazed by them because they were

cute. After arriving at the destination, we got off the bus hurriedly and did not

notice that we had left our belongings on the bus carelessly! Soon, we were

extremely hungry. “I want food! Where’s our food, Mummy?” I grumbled. My

mum frowned and comforted me, “Just a few more seconds.” Mum was busy

searching all the bags. A few minutes later, I still had no food so we started to

discuss what to do next. After our discussion, we decided to leave for lunch and

come back later.

After lunch, we returned and we decided to go cycling and fly

our kites. We played in Sai Kung Country Park for the whole day. We had a

happy time even though we made a big careless mistake!

By Clayton Cheung, 4B

My best friend Emma

Emma is short and she has big eyes. She has long hair, short legs and small ears. I,

on the other hand, have small eyes, short hair and long legs. We both have small ears. We are

both ten years old too.

Emma is talkative. She likes telling funny jokes. She is always cheerful. I am quiet.

I am not very talkative but I am as cheerful as Emma. I am shy. When I am having a contest,

I always shiver as if I am naked in the North Pole!

Emma always goes ice-skating. She goes ice-skating on Wednesdays. Emma and I

sometimes go cycling. On the way, we like feeding birds and enjoying the scenery.

We made friends at the park. For the first time we met, we were not friends like now.

Then I shared my food and we chatted together. The friendship between us had begun then!

We will cherish our friendship forever!

By Hayden Lai, 4B

Composition (4) A Sporty Weekend 4C Leung Hou Lam Jocelyn Laura and I were good friends. One day I called Laura last Sunday. I asked her, “What would you do on Sunday?'' Laura said she would play badminton. Laura asked me to join. I said ok.

I did not know the location of the Happy Sports Centre. Laura told me, “Go out of the Kwai Fong MTR station. Turn left. Walk straight ahead. Turn right. Walk across the road. The sports centre is on your left.” The next day, I took the MTR to the sports centre. I could not find the sports centre. I got lost and worried. Then I saw a policeman. I asked the policeman to help me. He told me the route to the sports centre.

Finally, I found the sports centre and met Laura. We played happily.

Composition (5) Eating Habits 4C So Ka Ying Kathy Carmen had bad eating habits. She liked a lot of meat, cakes, chicken, soft drinks, sugary food and fried food. Her mum said, “You need to eat more grain products and dairy products.” But Carmen did not listen to her mum. One day, Carmen had a buffet dinner with her family. She ate a lot of food. She ate cakes, beef, ice cream, meat and fried chicken. Her mum said “You eat too much junk food. You drink too many soft drinks. They are bad for you. You need to eat more dairy products and grain products. They are good for you and make you strong.” Carmen did not feel well. They took her to the hospital that night. Carmen changed her eating habits. Carmen ate more vegetables and fruit. She ate less meat and junk food.

Composition (6) The Fat Princess P.4C Annabella Siu

Once upon a time, Princess Molly lived in a tall castle. A monster kept her in a castle. She wanted to leave but she was too fat. She could not get out of the window because she ate French fries every day. She never did exercises. She felt sad. Then she changed her eating habits. She ate healthy food every day and she did exercises every day. She became fit and strong so that she could get out of the window. She left the castle. The monster chased after her. Princess Molly ran faster than the monster. She got away. She went home and met a prince. She married the prince. She felt happy. She learnt to eat more healthy food and do more exercise.

Composition (1) My best friend Emma. 4C Cheung Hoi Yoi ,Liz.

Emma is my best friend. She is ten years old. Emma is shorter than me. She has long hair. She has big eyes. She is the funniest girl in our class. She always tells us jokes and makes us laugh. Emma likes going ice-skating. She is good at ice-skating. She joins the England ice-skating team. She always likes going ice-skating on Wednesdays after school.

Emma likes going cycling. She goes cycling with her friends. She sometimes goes cycling on Sundays. I think she doesn’t like going cycling alone.

I like to be a friend of Emma’s because she is kind and popular.

Composition (2) Our Picnic 4C Chan Chi Lam, Ella

Yesterday I wanted to have a picnic with my family. We decided to go to Sai Kung Country Park. Susan and I felt excited. We wanted to buy some food and drinks for the picnic. We went to the supermarket. We bought a tin of sausages, a bunch of bananas, two packets of potato chips, a loaf of bread and three cartons of blackcurrant juice. Then we took a bus to the country park but we left the food on the bus. We felt very hungry. In the end we went to a cafe. We ate spaghetti with meat sauce, beef curry, fruit salad, tuna fish, mushroom soup, macaroni with chicken, five cupcakes and chocolate ice-cream.

We will take good care of our belongings next time.

(Composition 3) 4C Kun Tin Wai Tiffany My Good Big Brother John and Sally’s mother was ill yesterday. She said to John, “Please take care of Sally today.” Sally felt hungry but there was no food in the fridge. John found two cartons of milk. He found some noodles. He could not cook the noodles by himself. John had an idea. “Let’s eat out!” said John. “Good idea!” said Sally. Sally could not tie her shoelaces by herself. John helped her. John and Sally had spaghetti with meat sauce at a fast food shop. They drank a can of Coke and ate a plate of beef curry. They bought a carton of soya milk and a bowl of congee for their mother. Mum was happy.

The Good Big Brother 4D Sau Nok Hang, Jayden

Sally and John’s mother was ill yesterday. Mum asked John to take care of

Sally. Mum needed to take a good rest at home. Sally and John were worried about

Mum.

Sally felt hungry. John opened the fridge in the kitchen but Mum didn’t buy any

food from the market in the morning, so there wasn’t any food for lunch. They were

hungry.

They found two packets of noodles in the cupboard but John didn’t know how to

use the cooking stove. Therefore, they couldn’t cook the noodles. They were upset.

John suggested eating out at Jolly Fast Food Shop. John helped Sally to tie her

shoelaces because she couldn’t tie her shoelaces by herself.

Sally wanted to order spaghetti with meat sauce and John wanted to eat macaroni

with cheese and mushrooms. They were excited because it was the first time they ate

out by themselves.

After their lunch, John suddenly remembered that his mum didn’t eat anything in

the morning. He bought a box of ham and cheese sandwiches for her. When they went

home, Mum felt better. She ate the sandwiches joyfully. Mum praised John for being a

good big brother.

The Good Big Brother 4D Tam Gang Hei, Cadence

Sally and John’s mother was ill yesterday. Mum asked John to take care of

Sally. John said, “I will take care of my sister.” Mum said, “Thank you” to John.

Sally was hungry. John opened the fridge. The fridge was empty! There were

only two cartons of milk. They felt upset. When they were upset, Sally saw two

packets of noodles. She said, “Can you cook a packet of noodles for me, please?” John

said, “But… but …I do not know how to cook noodles. Do you have any other ideas,

Sally?”

Suddenly, John thought of an idea. He said, “Instead of cooking noodles, let’s go to a

restaurant and eat some food.” Sally said, “This idea is good. Can we go to Jolly Fast

Food Shop?” “Yes!” said John. Before they went to the restaurant, Sally asked John,

“Can you help me to tie my shoelaces? I don’t know how to tie them.” “OK,” said

John.

Then, they went to the restaurant. They ate a lot of food because they were very

hungry. Then, they came back home. Sally told Mum about the things that happened

today. Then, Mum appreciated them a lot.

The Good Big Brother 4D Tsang Pak Hei, Timothy

Yesterday, Sally and John’s mother was ill. Mom said, “Please take good care of

Sally today, John!” John said, “OK, Mum!”

Sally thought, I’m hungry! She touched John’s back. John said, “Let’s open the

fridge because I’m hungry too.” John opened the fridge and said, “Oh no! There’s

nothing to eat. The fridge is empty.”

John went to look all around the kitchen and he found two packets of noodles.

John said, “I can’t cook noodles. What about you, Sally?” Sally replied, “I can’t either!

What should we eat, John?” John said, “How about going to Jolly Fast Food Shop to

buy food for Mum and us?” Sally said, “Good idea!”

John said, “We have to go there on foot.” But Sally couldn’t tie her shoelaces so

John helped her. John said, “Let’s go!” Then, they went to Jolly Fast Food Shop .

After they had bought the takeaway, they went home and gave their mother some

food and they ate together at home. In this story, I learned that you always need to help

and take care of your siblings.

My best friend Emma 4D Choy Pui Yee, Chloe

My best friend is Emma. She is ten years old. She is shorter than me. Her hair

is longer than mine and her eyes are bigger than mine.

She always tells funny jokes so she has so many friends. She has a good sense

of humour. Everyone likes her. She is always happy and funny. She is the funniest

person I know.

Emma always goes ice-skating on Wednesdays. She goes ice-skating in Mega

Box. She is good at ice skating.

She sometimes goes cycling on Sundays. She made friends with me two years

ago in a park. She couldn’t find her parents, so I wanted to help her. She was so

scared. We sought help from the security guard. The security guard was nice. He

helped us to find her parents.

In the end, everyone was happy. Emma’s mum said, “Thanks for your help.”

After that, we became friends. We often go cycling together.

My best friend Emma 4D Ng Tin Wing, Jasmine

My best friend is Emma. She is ten years old. Her hair is longer than mine.

She has a pair of big eyes. She is shorter than me.

She is a funny person. She always tells jokes and makes me laugh. She makes

funny faces when I am sad. I was delighted by her jokes. She is a cheerful and an

optimistic person too. She thinks positively. She keeps a diary. She writes down all

her happy things every day.

She always goes ice-skating at Mega Box on Wednesdays. Her ice-skating

skills are very good. She thinks that going ice-skating is not easy but she never

gives up.

I sometimes go cycling on Sundays. One day, I went to ride a bicycle. Emma

was cycling there too. Suddenly, I fell down. Emma saw me so she picked me up.

We became friends. I like Emma very much because she takes care of me.

Our Picnic 4D Lau Ching Yee, Eunice

Yesterday, I went to Sai Kung Country Park with my family to have a picnic.

We were very excited.

We needed to have lunch in the park, so we went to a supermarket to buy some

food and drinks. We bought a lot of things such as three cartons of blackcurrant juice,

a tin of sausages, a loaf of bread, two packets of potato chips and a bunch of bananas.

They were heavy. Then we took a bus to the park to have the picnic.

We were so tired that we all fell asleep on the bus. Suddenly, I heard Dad yelling,

“Wake up! We have arrived!” Then we got off the bus sleepily. Susan shouted, “We

forgot our food!” We tried to run after the bus but the bus was too fast. We could not

catch it. After that, Mum looked for the phone number of the bus company on the bus

stop stand. She called the bus company and told them our problem. She asked the staff

of the bus company how we could get our food and drinks back. The staff asked us to

pick up the food from the next bus stop because he told the bus driver to put the things

on the bench. We went to the next bus stop by taxi and got the food. We were lucky

that the food was still there.

After this picnic, I learned that we shouldn't sleep on the bus and we should take

care of our belongings.

Our Picnic 4D Iam Cheuk Nam, Perry

Yesterday, Susan, Dad, Mom and I wanted to have a picnic so we decided to go

to Sai Kung Country Park as our destination. Then we went to a supermarket.

At the supermarket, we bought some chips, bananas, grape juice and sausages.

Mom said to us, “I have a surprise for you two.” We were over the moon. The cashier

said, “You can have a coupon because you spent more than fifty dollars.” “Thanks,”

said Mom. I noticed there was something big in Mom’s bag.

Then we went to a bus stop to wait for a bus. When we got on the bus, we started

to discuss what we would do during our picnic. We finally got off the bus and realized

that our food was not at hand. Then we all screamed out like a wolf howling in the

night and shouted, “Why did we talk on the bus?” I asked Mom what was in the bag.

“It was a turkey,” said Mom. I felt very hungry.

Luckily, our coupon saved our day. We called the hotline. “Hi! May I have

eleven sandwiches and four cans of cola for delivery? I’ll pay with a coupon.” Ten

minutes later, the food finally came.

We ate at last. The food was not tasty but we could still have food. I was ready

to shout, “This is the worst picnic ever!”

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Hazel Chan (5)

When I was little

I talked to my mum about my childhood when I was little.

When I was little, I was fat and short but I was also cute. My hair was short and my

eyes were big. My nose was small. My mouth was small too. Everybody said I was cute

and beautiful.

I used diapers and dummies when I was little. I always sucked my dummy! It looked

like I was drinking my mum’s milk! I had a baby stroller too. My mum put some cushions

and soft toys in it; she made it very comfortable for me. I used milk bottles until I was

four!

My mum said that I was very independent when I was little. I love drawing very much.

I didn’t like my mum to help me when I was drawing. She said I thought that if I didn’t

draw the pictures by myself, it wouldn’t look like my own drawings. One day when I was

drawing, I noticed that I was using the wrong side of the crayon! I laughed because of my

silliness. I think I really enjoyed drawing on my own.

When I was little, I couldn’t do a lot of things by myself. But with the help of my mum, I

could do them successfully. Now I can do them by myself because I am a big girl now!

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Clara Chan (6)

When I was little


When I was little, I had short hair. My eyes were big but my arms were short and my

hands were small.

When I was two, I didn’t use dummies or need to wear diapers but I needed a baby cart.

My parents said that I was heavy so it was tiring for them to carry me when they brought

me out. So they put me in the baby cart.

When I was little, I didn’t play phone games or computer games. I played with dolls.

My mum said I liked playing dolls because I thought they were cute and beautiful. I liked

playing with blocks too. My mum told me that when I played with blocks, it was very

noisy. It was because I always threw the blocks on the floor. My mum told me not to do

that but I still threw them on the floor rudely. My mum was angry but I was happy. I think

I was naughty!

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Belle Cheung (8)

When I was little

I talked to my mum and dad about my childhood when I was little.

When I was little, I was very fat. My mum told me that when I was two months old and

my cousin was five months old, they compared our size. I was even fatter than him. When

I was little, I had a small nose and a small mouth. My eyes were small but my face was

very fat. They said I was cute.

When I was little, I liked to sit on the highchair together with my cousin. It looked very

crowded but they said we had fun. We liked to sit together in a baby cart when we went

outside too. I thought I felt safe when I was with my cousin! Now I still love playing with

my cousin too! We are very close friends and we always stick together!

When I was little, I loved my dummy very much but then I found myself loving sucking my

fingers more than the dummy! Maybe I found my fingers were yummier than the dummy.

I forgot what toys I used to play with when I was a baby. When I was older, I remember I

loved playing with a toy called the digital camera. I took photos with my older sister.

Sometimes she took photos of me and sometimes I took photos of her. We often looked at

the photos together. It was fun to look at the photos together because we were cute in the

photos and it showed we did silly things and our faces were funny!

I remembered one special experience when I was one year old. As I always sat on the

highchair, but one day I fell down from the highchair. I cried loudly. My mother didn’t

hug me but she gave me a dummy instead. Surprisingly I then stopped crying and I

smiled. I think I was really funny!

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Carmen Lau (14)

When I was little


When I was little, I had short and dark hair. My face was round. I had big eyes and a

big nose. My mum said I was cute and thin.

My mum loved me so much. I had many things when I was little; I had a dummy, I had

diapers and I had a baby cart too. When I was little, I drank milk powder with my milk

bottles. My mum said I could hold the milk bottle by myself when I drank milk.

I had a lot of toys when I was little. I played with teddy bears. I played with Hello

Kitty dolls too. I had a toy house. I liked playing with girly toys. I also played card

games with my brother. But I cannot remember if my brother played the girly toys with

me.

We sometimes went to the park to play. I remembered once when I was five years old, I

played on the slide in the park with my brother. We took turns to climb on the slide and

then slide down. When I was ready to slide, suddenly my shoes dropped and they dropped

onto my brother’s head. I couldn’t remember if he was hurt but my brother didn’t cry out

loud. It was so funny! I liked playing with my brother.

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Lily Pang (24)

When I was little


When I was little, I was fat but I am thin now. My hair was short but my hair is long

now. My eyes were small and now my eyes are still small.

My parents said I was very independent when I was little. I could sleep by myself when

I was little but I needed to sleep in the baby cot. I think it was very comfortable to sleep in

the baby cot as I could fall asleep quickly. I think I liked to be clean when I was little. I

could brush my teeth with toothpaste when I was two years old.

I played with teddy bears when I was little. I liked playing with dolls too. I played hide

and seek and hopscotch when I was four. I liked playing with my elder sister too. It was

very blissful to have a brother or a sister to play with when I was little. I liked drawing

pictures a lot. I felt happy when I drew, but once when I was four, I was drawing a picture

at home. My sister shouted at me angrily, “Stop drawing!” I was shocked. I was stopped

by her because I was drawing on the wall! Maybe she thought I was naughty.

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Ken Poon (25)

When I was little


When I was little, I was fat but I am thin now. I had big eyes and I had a big nose too.

My hands were big too. When I was little, I used bibs, diapers and feeding bottles. My

mother put me into the baby trolley when we went out.

When I was little, I played Lego blocks with my elder sister, my mum and my dad. I like

playing hide-and-seek with my friends in kindergarten but I always got hurt. I thought I

was very playful and I was very careless.

When I was little, I couldn’t go to school by myself, so my mum and my dad took me to

school. I could pack my school bag by myself too. When I was little, I had a tutor so I

think I was lucky.

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Jeff Wong (27)

When I was little


When I was little, I was fat and cute. My eyes were big. My legs and my arms were

short. I was heavy.

When I was little, I used diapers and nipples. I slept in my baby buggy. I liked playing

with small balls, toy cars and dolls. I had a toy piano too. My toys were interesting and

my mum said it was fun to look at me playing. She said when I was playing with the toys, I

looked so funny.

When I was little, I could comb my hair by myself. I could eat by myself too. I could

wear my clothes and bath by myself. I could climb the stairs by myself. My mother and

father were very happy because they thought I was very independent.

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Audrey Yip (30)

When I was little


When I was little, I had short hair and big eyes. Everybody said that I looked like a

boy. I thought it was because of my short hair. I didn’t mind because I didn’t care about

it! What I cared about was food. I was fat because I ate a lot of food. But I am thin now

because I don’t eat a lot.

When I was little, I needed to wear diapers. I didn’t need to use dummies. It was

because I always sucked my fingers instead. When I was little, I liked to play on the slide

and with my toy telephone. However, I didn’t know how to press the buttons on my toy

phone. I just held it in my hand, put it next to my ear and talked. I thought it was fun.

I could do many things when I was little. I could brush my teeth by myself. But I didn’t

know how to get dressed by myself when I was little. My mum taught me and I did it when

I was four years old. My mum said I was very independent.

P4E 1920 Heep Woh Chime 4E Serena Yu (31)

When I was little


When I was little, I had short hair and my eyes were big. My ears were small too. I

had a big head but I had a short neck and I was fat. Everybody said I was cute.

When I was little, I had a lot of princess toys and Disney toys. I liked playing with girly

toys. I started liking the Disney character Minnie Mouse when I was two years old.

When I was little, my parents looked after me. My mum told me one funny experience.

It happened when I was two years old. I couldn’t do up my buttons, so I put the first button

in the last button hole. Then my mum saw it and she helped me. I thought I was very

lucky because my parents loved me so much and they took good care of me.

5A Castor Yung

An unforgettable trip

Last Sunday, my younger sister Kelly and I went to a country park. “How far

is it from here to the picnic site?” asked Kelly. I said, “It’s half a kilometre.” We

walked to the picnic site.

At 2 p.m. we ate sandwiches, sausages and some fruit for lunch. The food was

yummy. Then we played badminton and took some photos. We were happy.

After a while, we were ready to go home. Kelly suggested, “Can we take a taxi?

I’m so tired.” I said, “Good idea! It’s comfortable and fast!”

When we arrived at home, the driver said, “$128 please.” I replied, “Oh no!

We just have $100!”

In the end, I called my mum for help. She was unhappy.

5A Hebbe Lai


Today was a holiday. My sister Kelly and I went to Penguin Country Park. We

prepared some chicken wings and sushi. We were so excited.

We looked at the map on the information board. We decided to go to the

campsite. It’s not far. It’s 0.5 km. After arriving at the campsite, we enjoyed our food

first. After that, we played badminton. We were so relaxed.

In the evening we wanted to leave. I wanted to take a bus because the fare is

cheap. My sister Kelly wanted to take a taxi because she was tired. Although

travelling by taxi is comfortable, it is expensive.

Finally we chose to take a taxi because she was tired. After that we arrived at

our home, the driver told us to pay $128. We found that we didn’t have enough

money. Luckily the driver gave us a discount because we were just kids. What a lucky

day!

5A Cherry Mok

Bonnie’s Special Day

Yesterday, Bonnie and her mum went shopping in a big mall in Tsim Sha Tsui.

They bought new clothes.

Bonnie tried on the shorts, a T-shirt and a pair of sandals. Her mum tried on a

pair of high heel shoes.

Suddenly, Bonnie saw a pretty lady in the beautiful dress and a hat. Also she had

sunglasses on. Bonnie thought that she was a pop star. Bonnie asked, “Can you help

me to sign a name?”

Then the lady took off her sunglasses. She said, “I’m your mum.” Bonnie was

surprised. “Mum, you’re so beautiful,” said Bonnie.

5A Helen Lo

My summer holiday

Dear Miss Tam,

How are you? I had a great summer holiday with my family. My family and I

went to Japan for five days.

We went to Legoland. I rode on the longest roller coaster and played some

shooting games. I also watched the 3D Lego movie. Then I went to the sushi

restaurant. I ate some noodles and sushi. After lunch, I went to the museum. I saw

some old buildings and the old customs. Then I went to see some cherry blossoms in

the park. I took some photos there and saw the fish in the ponds.

We also went shopping in a big shop. I bought an ice cream, some clothes, a

key holder and some snacks. Then I went to Universal Studios, I played the Linguee

jumping machine.

I think the holiday was great because I could eat some noodles and play in the

theme park. We watched the 3D Lego movies and saw the cherry blossoms in the park.

How was your summer holiday? Please write back soon.

Love,

Helen

5A Amanda Tang


Last Sunday, my sister and I went on a trip to Sai Kung Country

Park. We felt so happy.

Then we arrived at a picnic site. We were very hungry. We had a

barbecue and the food was yummy. After that, we played badminton, it

was so fun.

We wanted to go home because Kelly was so tired. She wanted to

take a taxi. Although travelling by taxi is expensive, it is comfortable.

Then we decided to take a taxi.

When we arrived at our destination, we found that we didn’t have

enough money. We were worried. However, the taxi driver said “never

mind” and let us get out of the taxi. We were so happy.

A report 5B Torres Tse

Yesterday I asked Kimchi about the places he has visited. He has been to Ocean

Park, Disneyland and the Science Museum.

Kimchi has been to Ocean Park twice. He went there in May and July, 2019. He

saw the animals and rode on the cable car. He thought it was interesting.

Kimchi has been to Disneyland three times. He went there in 2018, 2019 and

2020. He rode on the rides and took photos with cartoon characters. He thought it

was amazing.

Kimchi has been to the Science Museum twice. He went there in 2017 and 2019.

He looked at the displays. He thought they were so funny.

Kimchi loves these three places. He thinks Hong Kong is so great.

5B Angel Lau

A naught boy, Danny

Danny has a bad habit. He likes playing computer games for a long time and he likes playing

tricks on others .We seldom play with him and talk to him.

Yesterday, we all listened to Miss Law but only Danny didn’t listen to her .He was sleeping

because he played computer games all night .He didn’t sleep last night so he slept in the class.

We saw that Miss Law was very angry. She said “Danny, you can’t sleep in the class, wake up

and stand at the back of the classroom!” Danny walked very slowly. The classmates all laughed

at him, he felt embarrassed.

Danny felt that he was not doing wrong so he took out a paper and folded it into a plane. He

wanted to play tricks on his classmates. He threw the paper plane out.

Suddenly, the plane flew to the teacher. It hurt Miss Law’s arm. Danny was frightened.

However, Miss Law didn’t punish him. She told him, “Danny, you should behave well and

shouldn’t play tricks on others.” Danny quickly apologized to Miss Law.

Since then, he always helps others and behaves very well. Everyone likes to play with him,

talk to him and be friends with him. They like Danny very much.

5B Heymon Chung


It was Kelly’s birthday last Sunday. It was also an unforgettable day. The weather was nice

and beautiful. To celebrate, I decided to take Kelly to Tai Lam Nature Trail for a picnic. Kelly

was so excited.

First, we prepared some sandwiches, potato chips, fruits and soft drinks. We also brought the

badminton rackets and kites. Then we took the bus to Tai Tong. Kelly just couldn’t wait to

arrive and kept asking, “How long does it take to get there?” After half an hour, we got off at

Tai Tong, and we looked at the information board. Kelly asked, “How far is it from here to the

picnic site?” I said, “It’s not far, it’s only half a kilometre.”

We first ate our lunch because we were so hungry after the long journey. The potato chips

were very yummy. Kelly loved them very much. Then I sang a birthday song for her and gave

her a big hug. She felt happy. We played badminton after the meal. We also flew a kite. Kelly

was so excited because she had never flown a kite before.

It was late already. We needed to go home. We packed up the things and walked to the bus

station. However, Kelly was over-exhausted and suggested taking a taxi to go home. I said

although a taxi is comfortable and fast, it is not cheap. I was afraid that I did not have enough

money. However, it is Kelly’s birthday and I wanted to make her smile.

We finally got home by taxi but the problem came as the taxi fare was more than I had. I felt

very embarrassed. I sincerely told the taxi driver that I didn’t have enough money. I just wanted

to take her home safely because it was her birthday.

The taxi driver smiled at Kelly and said, “Happy birthday, my dear, just pay whatever you

have!” I was surprised that the taxi driver was so kind and generous. Kelly and I were very

grateful. To Kelly, it was a wonderful day. However, to me, it was an unforgettable and

embarrassing day.

5B Jason Kwan


26th May Sunny

Last Sunday was my sister Kelly’s birthday. I decided to bring her to Ma On Shan

Country Park to have a picnic. We prepared a lot of things inside my bag. We prepared some

sandwiches, some apple juice, fish balls, potato chips and some chicken wings. My bag was

very full.

When we arrived at the country park, we saw an information board. “How far is it from

here to the picnic site?” asked Kelly. I replied, “It’s not far. It’s half a kilometer.” We started

to walk to the picnic site to have a picnic. When we arrived at the picnic site, we put all our

food on the mat. We ate our food first. We were eating our food while we were talking to

each other. We ate all the food in the bag. We were very full. Then we played badminton.

Sometimes I won, sometimes she won. I was very happy to play badminton.

When we wanted to go home, it was already four o’clock in the afternoon. I suggested

going home by bus because it is cheap. But Kelly was tired, so she wanted to go home by

taxi because it is comfortable. At last, we decided to go home by taxi.

After travelling by taxi, I paid the taxi fare to the driver but I didn’t have enough money.

We were very scared! Luckily, the driver was nice. He let us go home. We said thank you to

him and even gave him some candy! I thought he was the kindest driver I have ever met.

Today was an unforgettable and lucky day.

5B Venus Cheung


21stMay Sunny

Last Sunday was my younger sister, Kelly’s birthday. So we went hiking in Tai Mo Shan

for a celebration. We were excited. We saw an information board when we arrived there. We

looked at the map. Kelly asked, “How far is it from here to the picnic site?’’ “It’s half a

kilometer,” I replied.

After that, we arrived at the picnic site. Then we started our lunch. Kelly took her food

from her backpack. We ate some sandwiches and fruit. Also, we drank some delicious

orange and apple juice. We were very full. After a while, we played badminton together

happily.

Next, we felt very tired. I wanted to go home by bus because it is cheaper, but we needed

to walk a long way. However, Kelly didn’t want to walk anymore. She wanted to take a taxi.

Although it is fast, it is expensive.

Then, I called a taxi with my mobile phone. A few minutes later, the taxi came. We fell

asleep in the taxi because we were tired. We woke up when we arrived at our home. The taxi

driver told me that I needed to pay one hundred and twenty-eight dollars, but I only had one

hundred dollars.

Finally, the taxi driver was kind. He charged me one hundred only for the fare. We

thanked him a lot. It was unforgettable. I should bring more money when we go outside next

time.

Good writing! 5B Natalie Chu

MT6 An accident

Today was an awful day for the Tang family. They thought it was a good day to go hiking so

they went to Happy Country Park. They went there by car. They parked the car and started to

walk to the barbecue site to have a barbecue. They were walking happily when Mum

accidentally tripped on a rock and fell over. She twisted her ankle! They couldn’t find any long

sticks so Dad acted as her cane.

After they reached the barbecue site, they started to have a barbecue. The naughty children,

Maggie and Ricky, were playing with the sharp forks. They were playing happily. Suddenly

Dad heard a scream. Someone said, “Ouch!” It was the children. They carelessly scratched each

other. They both got a deep cut. They didn’t have any bandages so they could only use water to

rinse it.

After they had their lunch, they went near the pond. Dad was taking photos with his camera

while Joe was jumping on the rock. It was really beautiful. Unfortunately, Joe slipped when he

was jumping. He fell into the pond. He didn’t know how to swim so he shouted, “Help!” Dad

swam towards him as fast as he could to save Joe. Although Dad saved him, Dad got a cold. He

kept sneezing and coughing.

In the end, the Tang family decided to go to the hospital by car. They saw the doctor and the

doctor told them to take a rest for three days. After that, they planned to go home.

They were able to get back into the car but they hit the peak time. The road was filled with

cars and it took them five hours to get home. “What an awful day!” shouted the Tang family.

My summer holiday 5B Chantal Lau

Dear Miss Yip,

How are you? I went to Japan on my last summer holiday. My mum, dad and I

stayed there for five days. The weather was sunny. We were pleased.

On the first day, we went to Tokyo Disneysea. We rode many exciting rides. We

thought ‘The Scary Tower’ was the best game. It was very interesting and exciting.

We played it three times.

On the third day, we went to Sunshine City shopping mall for some shopping. I

bought a lot of souvenirs for my friends and classmates. Moreover, we visited the

aquarium there. There were many beautiful and lovely fish. It was very fantastic

and amazing. I took many nice photos with them,

We enjoyed the Japan trip very much. I want to visit there again. Have you ever

been to Japan? It is a really wonderful country. Please write back soon.

Love,

Chantal

5B Annie Jim


Yesterday, Bonnie and her mum went shopping in Lucky Shopping Mall. They were very

happy.

Bonnie left her mum and went in Sunshine Clothes Shop. Bonnie wanted to buy a blue T-shirt,

green shorts and pink sandals because she wanted to look cool so she would have more friends.

However, the clothes were very expensive, Bonnie knew that her mum wouldn’t buy the clothes

for her. She was very sad.

Bonnie couldn’t find her mum! She was very scared. She saw a lady with sunglasses and

earrings. The lady was in a hat, dress and high heel shoes. Bonnie asked her, “Have you seen

my mum?” The lady took off her sunglasses. It was Bonnie’s mum! Bonnie was very surprised.

Her mum explained that when she was paying for her clothes, the shopkeeper said that she

was the one hundredth customer so she had a one thousand dollar cash coupon to celebrate

Lucky Shopping Mall’s one hundredth anniversary. Bonnie asked her mum, “Can I buy some

clothes that I like?” Her mum agreed.

At last, Bonnie and her mum went back home happily with their hands filled with shopping

bags.

An unforgettable trip 5C Hon Fei Fei Phoebe Last Sunday was my birthday. I went to Ma On Shan Country Park with my younger sister, Kelly. We were excited. When we looked at the information board, Kelly asked, “How far is it from here to the picnic site?” “It’s not far. It’s 0.5 kilometre,” I replied. When we arrived at the picnic site, we had our lunch first. It was delicious. Then we played badminton. It was interesting. We enjoyed it very much. Then it was time to go home. I wanted to go home by bus because it was cheaper. However, Kelly wanted to take a taxi because she was so tired. In the end, we decided to take a taxi. When we got home, we found that the taxi fare was $128. However, we only had $100. We were scared. Luckily the taxi driver was nice. He let us pay $100 only. We were glad. We thanked him for his kindness.

An unforgettable trip 5C Hon Fei Fei Phoebe Last Sunday was my birthday. I went to Ma On Shan Country Park with my younger sister, Kelly. We were excited. When we looked at the information board, Kelly asked, “How far is it from here to the picnic site?” “It’s not far. It’s 0.5 kilometre,” I replied. When we arrived at the picnic site, we had our lunch first. It was delicious. Then we played badminton. It was interesting. We enjoyed it very much. Then it was time to go home. I wanted to go home by bus because it was cheaper. However, Kelly wanted to take a taxi because she was so tired. In the end, we decided to take a taxi. When we got home, we found that the taxi fare was $128. However, we only had $100. We were scared. Luckily the taxi driver was nice. He let us pay $100 only. We were glad. We thanked him for his kindness.

Bonnie’s Special Day 5C Marco Mak

Last Sunday, Bonnie and her mother went shopping in a big shopping mall. They went there on foot. There are many shops such as a supermarket, a

bakery, a cinema and some clothes shops.

When they arrived, they went to a clothes shop at once. Bonnie wanted to buy a pair of red sandals, a white T-shirt and a pair of black shorts. She would go

to the beach with her friends next Sunday. She looked at the clothes by herself

and tried them on in the fitting room. However, Bonnie could not find her mum when she came out. She was

afraid. Suddenly, she saw a woman in a pretty dress, with a big hat and a pair of

sunglasses. “Oh! Excuse me, did you see my mum?” Bonnie asked the woman. The woman took off her hat and sunglasses and said, “Surprise!” Bonnie was

so excited to find that her mum became so beautiful. She jumped high. They

bought a lot of clothes and went home happily.

My Summer Holiday 5C Lo Wing Tung Jodie Dear Miss Ho, How are you? Did you have an interesting summer holiday? I had a fantastic one. I want to share it with you I went to Mainland China during the holiday. I went there with my parents for eight days. The weather was hot and sunny. On the first day, I went to my cousin’s home by my aunt’s car. After an hour, we arrived there. My relatives ran out of their house and shouted, “Jodie, we miss you!” I was so happy and excited. I missed them too. I can only see them once a year. On that day, we played, sang and danced. We did a lot of activities. What a lovely day! On the second day, we rode bicycles all day. It was amusing. We enjoyed it very much. The third day was the best day of this year because it was my birthday. My cousins, aunt and uncle celebrated my birthday with me. I got many presents. How wonderful it was! I enjoyed my summer holiday very much. I want to visit them again next year. Miss Ho, how did you spend your holiday? Please write soon. Love, Jodie.

An unforgettable trip 5C Chu Ching Yi Angel Last Sunday, Kelly and I went to a country park. The weather was hot and sunny. We took some food and drinks with us. We felt excited. When we arrived at the country park, we looked at the map on the information board first. “How far is it from here to the picnic site,” asked Kelly. “It’s not far. It’s only 0.5 kilometre,” I answered. After arriving at the picnic site, we ate our lunch and played badminton until 6 p.m. It was getting dark so we wanted to go home. I wanted to go home by bus, but Kelly was tired so she would like to take a taxi. When we got home, the taxi driver asked for $128 for the taxi fare. However we didn’t have enough money. We were scared. Luckily the taxi driver was kind. He said, “It doesn’t matter. $100 is fine.” We said “thank you” to him. It was really an unforgettable trip!

An unforgettable trip 5C Wong Nok Hang Eben Last Sunday, the weather was sunny. My younger sister, Kelly and I went to Sai Kung Country Park. We went there by MTR and got off at Choi Hung Station. Then we took a bus there. After an hour, we arrived at the country park. First we looked at the information board to find the picnic site. It was about 0.5 kilometre from the information board. As it was not far, so we walked there. When we arrived, we found a table to have our lunch. We had some sandwiches and soft drinks. They were delicious. Then we played badminton and took some photos of different kinds of flowers and birds. After playing for a few hours, we were tired. We wanted to go home. I suggested taking a bus but Kelly wanted to take a taxi. Since we were so tired, we decided to go home by taxi. However, when the taxi arrived home, we found that we did not have enough money to pay for the taxi fare. Immediately I called Mum for help. She arrived quickly and paid the fare for us. We said sorry to the taxi driver. It was really an unforgettable trip for us!

An unforgettable trip Wong Nok Hang Eben Last Sunday, the weather was sunny. My younger sister, Kelly and I went to Sai Kung Country Park. We went there by MTR and got off at Choi Hung Station. Then we took a bus there. After an hour, we arrived at the country park. First we looked at the information board to find the picnic site. It was about 0.5 kilometre from the information board. As it was not far, so we walked there. When we arrived, we found a table to have our lunch. We had some sandwiches and soft drinks. They were delicious. Then we played badminton and took some photos of different kinds of flowers and birds. After playing for a few hours, we were tired. We wanted to go home. I suggested taking a bus but Kelly wanted to take a taxi. Since we were so tired, we decided to go home by taxi. However, when the taxi arrived home, we found that we did not have enough money to pay for the taxi fare. Immediately I called Mum for help. She arrived quickly and paid the fare for us. We said sorry to the taxi driver. It was really an unforgettable trip for us!

A naughty boy

There was a naughty boy called Danny. All the students hated him because he always

played tricks on them. Therefore, Danny had no friends in class.

Yesterday, the class teacher, Miss Law was teaching the students English while Danny

fell asleep. Suddenly, someone snored loudly. Miss Law followed the voice and shouted,

“Danny! Wake up!” Danny stood up and said, “Good morning Miss Law!” All the students

laughed.

Miss Law was as angry as a thunderstorm. She punished Danny. He stood at the back of

the classroom. Then she taught the students again.

Later Danny thought of a tricky idea. First, he used some paper. Then he made a paper

plane. Finally, he threw it. All the students and Miss Law saw it. Miss Law thought, I think

Danny felt bored. Therefore, Miss Law had a funny game with the students. The students and

Danny were playing the games when the bell rang. At recess, Miss Law said, “Later, Danny

can teach other students how to make the paper craft and you can use them to decorate our

classroom.”

The classmates became friendly to Danny. Danny also learnt that he should be nice to

others and shouldn’t play tricks on them.

An accident

One day, the Tang family decided to go on a trip in the countryside because they wanted

to get away from the busy city. Maggie, Ricky and Joe packed some sandwiches and soft

drinks. Dad packed the barbecue food like sausages, fish balls and bread. They were looking

forward to the trip. They also brought sunscreen and water because it was a sunny day.

When everything was ready, they set off to the barbecue site. They arrived there at ten

o’clock. However, Mum twisted her ankle when they arrived. The road was narrow with lots

of stones. Then Dad came to help mum sit down on a chair nearby. After five minutes, they

continued to walk to their destination.

They reached the campsite after a while. The children were so happy and set the fire

for barbecuing quickly. Maggie and Ricky were overjoyed. They hurt their arms while they

were playing with the forks! Therefore, Mum helped them to treat the wounds. They felt

grieved.

In the afternoon, Dad saw a pond nearby. The view was fantastic so he took the photos

there. Joe was playing near him too. He accidentally fell into the pond! Poor Joe felt scared

because it was dangerous. Dad saw that so he jumped into the pond to save him immediately.

They returned home at six o’clock. They felt tired and moody because there were too

many accidents. The children also learnt to behave well on trips to prevent getting injured.

An accident

Yesterday was an unforgettable day. The Tang family had a profound experience. In the

morning, they were bored so decided to go to Sai Kung Country Park. Before going there,

they went to the supermarket to buy some food. Mum and Dad packed barbecue forks and

food. Maggie and Ricky bought badminton rackets and balls. They felt very excited.

It was sunny and hot. They went to Sai Kung Country Park by bus. Ricky asked, “How

far is it from here to the barbecue site?” “It’s about one kilometer,” Maggie replied. Mum

was walking on the road when she twisted her ankle carelessly. They told her to take a rest.

After twenty minutes, Mum felt better so they continued to walk to the barbecue site.

They set the fire and cooked some food like sausages, corn, chicken wings and beef

skewers. Maggie and Ricky were playing with some forks when they hurt themselves! Mum

helped them treat the wounds. The children felt sorry and promised they wouldn’t be so

playful next time.

“The view is fantastic!” Dad talked to himself while he was taking some photos of the

flowers and bushes nearby. Suddenly, Joe fell into the pond while he was playing and

running around! He felt scared so he cried, “Help! Mum, Dad, please come quickly and help

me!” Joe was saved at last. Maggie tried to calm him down too.

Finally, the Tang family returned home at six o’clock. They all felt exhausted. They

have learnt an important thing after this trip – be more careful when going outdoors!

My summer holiday

28th

July, 2019

Dear Ms Tang,

How are you? I have been to Japan for one week. I went there with my family. We had a

great holiday. However, the weather was very hot.

On the first day, we went to Osaka. We went shopping at Shinsaibashi. I bought a lot of

souvenirs at the gift shop. The next day, we went to the Universal Studios. We played a lot of

mobility games. I felt so excited.

We also went to Kyoto. We tried to wear kimonos and took a lot of photos. The kimono

was very colourful. I felt very hot when I wore it because there were two layers of cloth.

After that, we went to the restaurant that provided pufferfish. It was yummy. My father

told me that the pufferfish was dangerous to eat but there were qualified chefs in

Japan to prepare the food. Therefore, we could eat it in Japan. We also ate a lot of sushi,

sashimi and Japanese noodles in the remaining days of the trip.

This summer holiday, I felt delighted and wonderful to travel with my family. I hope I

will travel there next summer holiday.

Love,

Bosco

My summer holiday

28th

October, 2019

Dear Ms Tang,

How are you? My family and I went to Singapore during my summer holiday. We went

there for four days. This trip was unforgettable and I will tell you now.

At 1:00 a.m. on the first day, we arrived at the airport. Yes, it was 1:00 a.m.! I don’t tell

lies. First, we got on the airplane and because it was midnight, I couldn’t open my eyes wide.

The next morning, we arrived in Singapore. I felt better because I had a good time sleeping

on the plane. After we arrived there, we called the taxi to the hotel. The hotel was interesting!

There were two robots in our room! They could come to your room and help you out.

However, we didn’t have any time to explore their functions. We checked in quickly and left

the hotel.

First, we went to the home of Mum’s friend to play computer games. We also had a tasty

lunch and dinner there. We felt great. On the second day, we got on the bus to Malaysia to

Legoland. There was a roller coaster and a Lego shop. I bought a key ring for my friends too!

What have you done on your holiday? Mine was fantastic! Let’s meet in tomorrow’s lesson!

Please write back soon.

Your student,

Antoine


It was a beautiful Sunday. Bonnie went window-shopping in a big mall with her mum.

They were excited and joyful because it was a multi-story department store with many

different kinds of things for shopping.

Bonnie went to the kids shopping area to see some clothes. She thought that if she wore

the T-shirt, shorts and colourful sandals shown on the display, she would be beautiful and

sporty. Then she decided to ask her mum to buy the whole set of clothes for her.

Bonnie turned around to talk to her mum but she only saw a noble lady. She thought,

‘Who is the lady with the dazzling jewellery, gold dress and nice hat?” Suddenly, the lady

asked Bonnie, “Do you think the pretty dress with accessories is very beautiful?” Bonnie

only had one question on her mind, “Oh, why is Mum suddenly wealthy?”

Finally, Bonnie heard someone say, “Wake up, Bonnie!” After Bonnie woke up, her mum

brought her to the wonderful shopping mall that was in her dream. Her dream came true!

My summer holiday

28th

October, 2019

Dear Ms Tang,

How are you? I travelled to Thailand for one week in my summer holiday. I went there

with my parents. The weather was mostly sunny and rainy. I was very happy to go there.

While walking along the street, I saw White Temple far away. That was so gorgeous. We

went to the temple and found it full of Buddhist significant features. You can only enter the

ubosot from the front, via the narrow bridge that passes over a pool of upturned waves. We

went to the ubosot to worship the Buddha. Then we bought souvenirs from the gift shop.

In the evening, we went to Terminal 21 to do some shopping and had dinner. There were a

lot of people. We went to the book shop, the clothing store, the top store and many more. It

was fun to go shopping!

I was thrilled about this journey. There was a lot of laughter in it. I hope I will go to the zoo

when I travel there next time. How about your holidays?

I will see you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Mona


10th May, 2020

Sunny

Today was Kelly’s birthday. Both of us wanted to go hiking and do some exercises, so we

decided to go to Ma On Shan Country Park. We anticipated that it would be a wonderful trip.

The weather was very good. We woke up early and had a delicious breakfast at home. It

was a long way from our home to the country park. We took a bus to Ma On Shan and it took

an hour to arrive there. We looked at the information board for the route to the picnic site.

We wanted to go to the picnic site because it was far from home. “How far is it from

here to the picnic site?” asked Kelly. “It’s not far. It’s half a kilometer,” I said. When we

arrived there, it was already half past one. We were very hungry, so we took out the

sandwiches Mum made for us. The view there was so beautiful and we could see the sea. We

brought our badminton rackets there to play some sports.

We played badminton until sunset. Then we knew it was time to go. I suggested taking

the bus because it was cheap. However, my sister was tired. She wanted to travel by taxi

because it was more comfortable.

When the taxi arrived home, the driver asked us to pay one hundred and twenty-eight

dollars. However, I was terrified because I only had one hundred dollars in my wallet!

Luckily Kelly had thirty dollars. In the end we had enough money to pay for the fare. What

an unforgettable day!

Jerry Li

My summer holiday Dear Miss Chow,

How are you? How was your summer holiday? I had a great summer holiday.

During the summer holiday, I went to Hong Kong Disneyland with my family and friends. I visited the Iron Man Tower. This was one of the

newest rides in Disneyland. It was cool and amazing. Besides, I also went to Ocean Park. We went to the aquarium. We saw

a lot of fish and sea creatures. Then we visited the Panda Village. The caretakers were feeding a panda patiently. The panda smiled friendly at

us. Afterwards, we visited the South Pole Spectacular to see the penguins. They swam quickly.

At last, we stayed at the new hotel for a night. I liked the themed guest rooms very much. The decorations were awesome. In all, my summer

holiday was unforgettable and wonderful. I hope the next summer holiday will come soon. I look forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes, Jerry

Golden Yu

Bonnie’s special day In the afternoon, the weather was sunny. Bonnie and her mum went to

the Dragon Centre to buy some clothes. They went there by bus. Then they went to the fifth floor first. As it would be Chinese New Year

next week. Bonnie wanted to buy some new dresses. Bonnie was very happy. After paying for the new dress, Bonnie’s mother wanted to buy a

new dress too. She chose the dress, sunglasses and a hat. Then she went to try on the clothes in the fitting room. After that, Bonnie couldn’t

recognize her mum. So she went to the customer service centre because she was very afraid. Then the staff made an announcement: “Don Don

Don: Bonnie’s mum please go to the first floor to get your child. Don Don Don.” Then Bonnie’s mum went to the first floor to meet Bonnie. Bonnie

was glad but Mum was gladder. In the end, Bonnie was happy in her new dress and Mum was happy with the new sunglasses. They went home

happily.

Haley Leung Bonnie’s special day

Last Sunday in the afternoon, it was hot and sunny. Bonnie and her mum went window-shopping in a big shopping mall. They went there by MTR.

First, they went to have lunch in a restaurant. Then they went to the clothes shop to buy some clothes. They wanted to buy sandals, shorts

and some T-shirts. As there was a big sale in the shop, they had chosen a lot of clothes. Next, Bonnie wanted to pay the money but she could not

find her mum. Suddenly a lady in a long dress and a pair of sunglasses appeared strangely. Bonnie was nervous and she thought, “who is that

lady with the sunglasses?” When Bonnie wanted to go to the information centre to ask for help, that lady stopped her and said,

“Bonnie, where are you going? I am looking for you!” Bonnie replied, “oh, you’re Mum!”

At last, Mum and Bonnie went home with a lot of new clothes. They spent a lot of money but they were happy.

Ella

Yesterday I asked Amy about the places she has visited. She has been to Disneyland, Ocean Park and the Peak.

Amy has been to Ocean Park three times. She went there in 2017, at Chinese New Year of 2019 and in the last summer holiday. She visited the

pandas, went to the aquarium and rode on the cable car. She liked Ocean Park very much. It was amazing.

Amy has been to Disneyland once too. She went there last Christmas. She watched the parade and the 3D movie. She also had a buffet dinner.

She enjoyed the buffet the most. She said the dinner made her mouth-water.

Amy has also been to the Peak. She went there twice. She went there in 2016 and 2018. She looked at the view of Hong Kong, went to the Wax

Museum and rode on the Peak tram. She liked to ride on the tram very much! It was exciting.

In all, she wanted to go to the Lady Market. She said she will go there during the next Easter holiday.

Haley Poon A naughty boy

Miss Law was an English teacher. Everyone loved her lessons except Danny. He was a naughty boy. Last Monday, Danny was sleeping while all

the other students were listening to Miss Law. Danny slept on his desk because he played computer games all night.

He went to bed very late so he slept in Miss Law’s lesson. Danny was sleeping when Miss Law walked to his desk. Miss Law was very angry

because Danny did not listen to her. She asked him to stand at the back of the classroom. At first Danny listened in the class, then he was bored.

Next he threw a paper pane to Tom’s desk. Tom picked it up and gave it to Miss Law. Miss Law was extremely mad because Danny disturbed the

classmates. Therefore she punished Danny. She asked him to write the verb table ten times.

Finally Danny felt sorry and he promised Miss Law not to sleep in the

lessons again.

Zachary Ng A lesson for Danny

Danny was my classmate. He always played tricks on us. No one liked him. Miss Law was teaching while Danny was daydreaming. The whole

classroom was very quiet. Suddenly there were some snores. Danny fell asleep soundly and the

snores were from him. He was caught by Miss Law. Miss Law was very cross and yelled his name angrily, “Danny!” Then Danny woke up and he

was very frightened. Miss Law asked him to stand at the back of the classroom until the end of the lesson. At first Danny felt sorry and stood

quietly. Later he found some paper and started to fold paper planes. He even threw them to the other boys. We felt very annoyed and reported

it to Miss Law. At the end of the lesson, Danny was asked to go out with Miss Law. He

finally got a warning letter from the headmaster. What a big lesson for

Danny!

Caleb To

An accident Last Sunday the Tang family went to the country park. The weather was

sunny and hot. They went there to hike and have a barbecue. They were very excited.

However, Mum twisted her ankle when she was walking on the path so Dad told Mum to take a rest and waited until she got better. Then when

the family started to barbecue, Maggie and Ricky were naughty. They played with the forks. Finally, they hurt each other. They both felt pain

and upset. After that, Dad wanted to take photos with Joe but Joe was playing

near the river. Unfortunately Joe stepped on the stone and fell into the

river. “Help! Help!” shouted Joe. Dad saved Joe immediately and the others suggested bringing him to the hospital. Luckily Joe was fine at

last. It was a bad day for the Tangs.

Dreaming to be a Basketball Player

6A Helen Li

Last week, Donna went to the basketball court. She was watching a basketball match. It

was a very exciting competition! She thought, I want to be a basketball player when I grow

up. If I become a basketball player, I’ll win the basketball match.

Donna could not join the basketball team because the PE teacher said to her, “Sorry, you

can’t join the basketball team because you’re not tall enough.” She felt disappointed.

Suddenly, she heard someone say, “Hello!” Donna turned around. She saw a senior

student. The senior student said, “If you want to be taller, you need to eat more fruit and do

more sports so that you can stay fit and strong.” Donna felt happy and said, “Thank you!”

Donna did a lot of exercise every day. Then she became very tall and strong. She joined

the basketball team. At last, her team won a medal too.

The Selfish Benny

6A April Li Benny is a selfish person. He likes playing with toy cars and robots. He usually spends

the money on buying different types of toys. He feels happy when he plays with the toys.

For Chinese New Year, Benny got a lot of red packets from his mum, dad, uncles and

aunties. He wanted to spend his money to buy some toys. Suddenly, his dad went into his

room. Dad sat down and said, “If I were you, I would donate some money to the charity.

How about you, Benny?” Benny said, “I will donate some money to an old woman. If I

donate some money to an old woman, I’ll be happy.”

However, when Dad came into Benny’s bedroom, he found that Benny had a lot of red

packets on his bed. Dad went out of the bedroom and suddenly he came back. Benny was

gasped and nervous that his dad would scold him. Dad said, “I never thought you would lie!”

Benny felt ashamed.

Benny admitted that he was wrong and he said, “Sorry Dad! I will donate more to the

charity!” Later, he donated more money to the charity and the charity people thanked him. In

the end, he learnt if he donated a lot of money to the charity, he would feel happier than

buying toys.

Danny learnt a lesson

6A Timothy Chan

Danny was a naughty boy. One day, when Danny was playing football, he broke

a vase so his mother wanted to punish him and said, “I will not give you the pocket

money this week,” so Danny was scared and he ran away.

He ran to the forest to escape from his mum. In the afternoon, he felt hungry so he

looked for some food to eat. He saw an old house that was near so he went to the

house and he found a lot of food. Then he ate the food happily.

When Danny was eating the apple, he turned into a pig! He felt scared. He saw an

angel. The angel said, “If you tell the truth and say sorry to your mum, you will turn

back into a human again. Otherwise, you will not become a human until you tell the

truth.”

In the end, Danny went home. He told his mum the truth and said sorry to his mum.

Suddenly, he turned back into a human again. After that, Danny learnt to be a good

boy and not to tell lies to people anymore.

The Princess and the Witch

6A Kinki Tang

Once upon a time, there was a castle in which a princess was beautiful and

kind. Therefore, she was very popular with the children there.

It was another ordinary day but the princess disappeared! People across the

continent were in a panic. After an investigation by the royal family, it was

discovered that the princess was kidnapped by the witch who lived in the trial

castle, so the royals decided to send an escort to rescue the princess. “Why did

you bring me here?” the princess shouted, “Uh!” The witch chuckled and she

lifted the princess’ chin slightly. “Your beauty looks like what I have been

longing for. Why don’t you change it with me?” the witch asked. The princess

looked at the witch with these words in horror.

The witch picked up two pills quietly and opened the princess’ mouth. “Eat it!

We can exchange souls.” The witch said with an ugly smile. “Never!” the

princess closed her mouth tightly. The witch was furious and said, “Eat it now!”

The witch used magic to teleport the princess to the Judgement Corridor.

“Here?!” the princess looked around. “Welcome! This is your first time and the

last time!” The witch laughed wildly.

Suddenly, the prince came and rescued the princess. The prince fought with

the witch for a long time. Finally, the prince won and saved the princess. The

prince and the princess lived happily together.

An unforgettable picnic

6A Helen Li

Last Sunday, our school had a picnic in Tai Mo Shan Country Park. I

packed my school bag and went to school in the morning. Then we got on the

school bus and arrived at the country park. We started to have a barbecue first.

After a while Carson needed to go to the toilet.

When we were having the barbecue, suddenly we heard a scream from the

toilet. Then we rushed to the toilet at once. John said surprisingly, “Oh no!” We

saw a snake bite him and Carson fell down on the floor. Peter said, “Oh! Your

leg is hurt! We need to tell the teacher.” John asked softly, “How about the

snake?’ Peter continued, “Let’s take it away.” They tried to take it away and

went to find the teachers.

Finally, Mr Chan took Carson to the hospital. Carson said, thank you to us

and we felt very joyful. Carson’s leg recovered after a few days and he was also

better than before.

The Music Festival 6A

Yoyo Wong

Alex entered the recorder competition at the Music Festival in March. He

practised playing the recorder for two hours every day.

The night before the competition, he began to feel worried. Will I forget the

song? Will my classmates laugh at me? Will I forget to bring the recorder?

thought Alex. He had an awful night. He could not sleep well. He worried about

it.

The next day, Alex was tired and nervous but he played well. He won the

competition. His classmate said, “Well done, Alex!” “How many hours do you

practise playing the recorder?” asked Mr. Chan. Alex answered, “I practise

playing the recorder for two hours every day.” Alex felt happy. He was proud of

himself.

At the end, Alex went home and told his parents, “I won the competition.” He

jumped and laughed.

Dreaming to be a Basketball Player Anson Ho (何俊熹) 6B (14)

One day, Donna watched a basketball match with her classmates because their school invited them to watch this basketball match. When Donna saw the basketball players, she was excited. She thought they were cool.

Since then, she decided to be a basketball player in the future.

The next day, she asked her PE teacher to let her join the school basketball team because she knew that if she became a basketball player, she needed to learn more skills of playing basketball. However, her PE teacher

said, “Sorry, Donna, your height is not suitable to join the basketball team. If you want to join the team, you must

be taller than this line.” As he pointed to the red line on the wall, Donna was very sad. Her sister nearby heard everything and walked forward to Donna. She told her that she also needed to be stronger so that she could be a

basketball player.

Then, Donna started to do sports every day. She went jogging and running in the park. She also practiced her skills on the basketball court and drank milk every morning. The following month, she was asked to join the

basketball team again. Unfortunately, although Donna was taller than before, she still could not reach the red line

and the training was tough. At last, she gave up.

Dreaming to be a Basketball Player Bernice Wong (黃曉晴) 6B (35)

In my childhood, there was a girl called Donna. She was a sporty girl and loved ball games. One day, she and her friends went to watch a basketball competition from the Hong Kong Basketball Association. She saw

all the players putting in ultra effort and striving to win the match. It made her fond of basketball and dream of being a basketball player.

In the beginning of the summer holiday, she enrolled for the basketball team. However, the coach told her that she was not able to join the team because of her height. She had to grow up to 130 cm but she was only 126

cm tall at that moment. Donna was very upset and wanted to cry. After a while, Donna came home to ask her teammate about how to grow taller. “Donna, if you have a balanced diet and moderate exercise every day, you

will get taller quickly.” I encouraged her.

The day after, Donna started to have a healthy life. She drank milk twice a day, ran seven hours a

week and often practiced her basketball skills. After three months, Donna was 131 cm tall and she could finally

join the basketball team. She was proud of herself and her goal was to be an international basketball player.

Dreaming to be a Basketball Player Audrina Tang (鄧青藍) 6B (31)

One day, my classmate Donna watched a wonderful basketball match. She enjoyed it with her friends

– Elise and Cherry. It was a 6A vs 6B intermission basketball tournament. It was thrilling so Donna was fond of it very much. The final result was that class 6B won! Donna thought, “If I become a basketball player when I

grow up, I will be really cool.” She decided to join the school basketball team right away.

In PE class, Donna told her PE teacher – Mr. Wong that she wanted to join the basketball team. At

recess, the basketball team coach measured Donna’s height. However, she was not tall enough to join. To get into the school team, students needed to be at least 140 centimetres but Donna was just 130 centimetres. After learning

this, Donna was disappointed. She cried seriously all night. On the next day, a primary six girl in the basketball

team told Donna, “You need to be tall so that you can block her opponents from scoring. You need to be fit so

that you can run faster than others. You need to be strong so that you can jump high and shoot.” Donna thanked her a lot. She was so glad that the girl taught her how to be a terrific basketball athlete.

After that, Donna concluded her daily plan. She practiced running for two hours and did basketball training for two hours. Furthermore, Donna drank three cups of milk every day. Unquestionably, she grew to 141

centimetres tall! She finally made it! I felt joyful for her too. She rushed to Mr. Wong and said, “I’m 141 cm tall now! I can join the basketball team!” Mr. Wong replied, “Sorry, Donna. Unfortunately, there are no people

entering the basketball team this year. It has been cancelled already.” Donna was heartbroken. She could not believe what she had just heard. At that moment, Mr. Wong said, “you can go down to the covered playground to

ask for the basketball coach to train you only.” When Donna arrived there, she found out that a surprise party

was being held. She spotted a banner saying, ‘Donna, you did a marvelous job!’ Now, she reveals that this party is to appreciate her effort in practicing basketball all the way!

The Selfish Benny Chantal Chan (陳意) 6B (5)

One day, Benny was counting his money in his bedroom. It was because he wanted to buy a new robot. At

that moment, his friend Mark wanted to play and chat with Benny. Then Benny put his purse back into his bag

and waited for Mark. Mark arrived soon and they talked about how to spend the money. Mark suggested he give the money to a beggar. Benny said he would donate the money to charity instead.

Suddenly, Benny’s mind came up with an idea. He said, “Mark, would you also want to give some money to

a charity organisation? I’m going to donate the money to charity. Would you like to support me?” “Yes, of course!”

said Mark. He gave a hundred dollars to Benny. On the next day, Benny counted his money again. He ran to the toy shop and bought the new robot. In fact, he told a lie. He spent the money given by Mark to buy the robot and

he didn’t donate any money to charity. Right at the cashier in the toy shop, Mark appeared to see Benny and asked him, “Wow! How can you afford to buy this new robot?” Benny looked embarrassed and confused. He

finally told Mark the truth nervously, “I …… I spent the money given by you buying this robot.” Mark was extremely angry and threatened him, “If you are not willing to give your robot to me, I’m going to fight with you

and tell your parents that you have told a lie.”

At last, Benny gave his new robot to Mark and apologised to Mark. This story tells us that we need to be an

honest person and we should never cheat others using lies.

The Selfish Benny Esther Chan (陳以霖) 6B (3)

As everybody knew, Benny was a selfish boy. Nevertheless, something happened one day that stopped him from being a selfish guy.

After the Chinese New Year holidays, Benny got a lot of red packets. He wanted to spend the money

buying a number of toys; such as robots and toy cars. Dad came home and saw Benny thinking about how to

spend the money wisely, so Dad taught him to do his financial management. “If I were you, I would save a part of

the money and donate the rest of it to charity.” said dad. Benny nodded his head to express his approval. “I’ve

decided to donate my money to the poor,” replied Benny. Dad was so happy that he has a sensible kid. The following day, Benny walked past a toy stall and saw the fantastic robot. He quickly went home and carefully

took some money from the red packets. “I never thought you would lie to me, Benny!” said Dad disappointedly. Benny did not have enough time to hide the money. He could just say sorry to Dad but he did not think he was

wrong. He ran out of the house and wandered on the street. He then saw a poor child who was a similar age. He

was such a skinny child that he looked like a skeleton. Benny was sad to see him.

Recently, Benny has become determined to help others. He takes his valuable time to go on a charity walk every year.

The Selfish Benny Moji Chu (朱善蕎) 6B (10)

It was Chinese New Year one month ago. After Benny and his family visited Mr. Alex, he got lots of red packets. He put them on the desk of his bedroom. He felt over the moon because he thought he could use

them to buy the latest version models. Then, his dad knocked on the door and went into Benny’s bedroom to tell

him about how to spend that money. His dad said, “If I were you, I would donate the money to charity because I like helping people. How will you spend the money? “Benny smiled and replied, “Let me think ….. I’ll tell you

tomorrow!” He slept after talking with his dad. On the next day, Benny told his dad he wanted to donate all the money to the beggar who slept in the street. His dad was extremely glad that his son was full of compassion.

However, Benny was so selfish that he didn’t want to donate his money to poor people. Instead he deceived his dad with a silly lie.

Two weeks later, he went to the nearest shopping mall to buy some models which he loved to death. He went there while his dad was working in his office so that his dad would not discover his naughty conduct

easily. After that, he went back home with his favourite model. He ran into his room and slammed the door because he needed to bury those models. At night, his dad banged on the door of Benny’s bedroom angrily and he

shouted, “I never imagined you would lie to me! I’m really disappointed with you!” and he ran out of the room.

Benny looked at the wall open-mouthed because everything happened too suddenly. He walked away from his

bedroom and went into his parents’ room. He apologised to his dad sincerely.

At last, Benny’s dad forgave him but he must donate those models to the orphanage’s home and sell

flags with him on the coming Saturday. This story tells us that we should be a generous, honest and

compassionate person. Also we should not tell lies. I am willing to participate in more charity activities in the

nearest future.

Best writing 1 Class 6C (By Sunday Wong)


One day, a little girl called Donna wanted to be a basketball player. It was

because Donna and her dad, Eric watched a basketball competition. She was very

interested in playing basketball.

After that day, she went to Sunny School playground. She wanted to join the

basketball team. But her P.E teacher told her that she was too short to Join. She was

disappointed and felt upset.

After Donna talked to her PE teacher, a senior student came to her. It was one of

the team leaders of the basketball team. She told her to never give up on her dreams

and told her how to become stronger and taller. After she gave her some advice, she

felt much better.

Donna started to live a healthy life, just to accomplish her dreams. At the end,

she became a basketball team member.


The Music Festival

Alex entered the recorder competition this year at the Music Festival.

He was very happy.

He practised and practised. He even practised at midnight. He was

hardworking. He could play it very well but he still kept on practicing. The

night before the competition, he could not fall asleep. He was nervous

that the audience would laugh at him...etc.

On that day, he was scared to the point that he was shaking. He

could not play the recorder.

Suddenly, the audience started clapping and someone even

shouted, “You can do it!” Alex started to play the recorder while everyone

kept on encouraging him. In the end, Alex did not win but he was still

happy.

Best writing 5 Class 6C (By Calvin Yeung)

An Unforgettable Picnic

Last week, my class went on a school picnic. My classmates

and I went to the countryside. We had a barbecue. When we finished

eating, I went to the toilet to wash my hands. I was happy.

After that, I saw a snake and it climbed towards me. I felt

shocked so I yelled, “Help! Help!” I was very scared.

After that, my friends rushed in and saw me lying on the floor. I

was bitten by the snake. I was hurt badly.

Finally, my friends sent me to the hospital. My friends called my

parents and asked them to come. I was unhappy.



Once upon a time, there was a beautiful princess named Jenny.

Although she was a princess, she still needed to look after her siblings. She

was very kind and generous so a lot of people liked her.

One day, Jenny went into the forest to collect some berries for her

siblings to eat as usual. But suddenly an old lady said, “Follow me, I know a

place where you can collect a lot of berries!” Therefore she followed the

old lady. But soon … Jenny found herself trapped in a jail cell and the old

lady apparently was an evil witch that wanted Jenny all along.

The evil witch then offered Jenny a deal. The deal was to change

identities with the witch and the witch would let her go. Jenny denied with

anger but she was worried at the same time.

Not for long, the witch left. Jenny realized that the jail cell was very

old and it’s very easy to escape. So she took this chance and climbed out.

She ran and ran. She soon reached home. Then she told everyone that

there was a witch in the forest so all of them should be cautious when they

went there.

Best writing 3 Class 6C (By Abby Tse)


Danny was a naughty boy. One day, he broke an expensive vase at

home. His mum saw him and he ran away very fast because he knew his

mum would punish him.

He ran into a forest and felt hungry. He looked for food to eat.

Suddenly, he saw a small house in front of him. He went into the house

and there was nobody there. However, he saw a lot of food on the table.

He didn’t ask but he started to eat the food.

Danny was full but he was very greedy. He wanted to eat all the food.

He ate too much so he became a pig. When he finished all the food, he

realized that he became a pig. He felt nervous when he knew he had pig

hands and pig feet! He cried and he asked for help from his mum. When

his mum came to save him, she met a witch who could save Danny. He

apologized about his misbehavior. Therefore the witch saved him. He

thanked the witch and promised he would listen to his mum.

Best writing 2 Class 6C (By Conrad Lam)

The Selfish Benny

There is a boy named Benny. He is very selfish and he

never shares things with his friends.

One day, he had a lot of lucky money. He wanted to

buy a robot, a remote control car and a jacket.

His dad heard this and came into his room. He said, “If I

were you, I would donate it to the charity for the needy.”

At that moment, Benny did not want to donate the

money so he lied. “I will give all the money to a poor guy

living down the street,” he said.

In the evening, Benny went into his room and looked

at his money. Suddenly, his dad came in and said,

“Dinner is ready.” He got shocked as he saw the money

in Benny’s hand. “I thought you donated all the money

but I can’t believe that you lied to me. I’m so

disappointed. BENNY!”

At the end, Benny felt guilty and decided to give all

the money to the charity.

The Music Festival

One day, Alex saw a poster about the Music Festival in the school hall. He

thought it was interesting so he joined the recorder competition and submitted

the form to the teacher.

The competition was in March so Alex practiced a lot, day after day during

the whole month. He always enjoyed the time when he was practicing.

The night before the competition, Alex was very worried that he would

forget the song. He went to bed early but he couldn’t sleep. He worried that

when he was playing the recorder, people would laugh at him. He couldn’t

sleep well at night.

It was the day of the competition. Alex was late for school because he

remembered that he forgot to bring the recorder when he got on the bus. He

needed to go back home to take it so he was late.

When he arrived at the school hall, it was his turn to play the recorder. He

was very nervous and couldn’t play the recorder.

Luckily, his schoolmates said, “Be brave! You can do it!” Therefore, Alex

was confident and played the recorder very well.

In this story, I have learnt that I need to be confident and brave when I do

everything so that I can do it well.

By YU Xin-nga, Sonia

The Music Festival

Last week, Alex was invited to join a music competition. He was excited

about that.

The week before the competition, he practised diligently from day to night.

Sometimes his neighbours also complained about the noise the recorder made at

night but that didn’t bother Alex to practise his recorder.

Time flies. It was the day before the competition. Alex was nervous and

excited about the competition. What a mix of feelings! He thought of his

performance on the stage and thought of losing the competition. Alex was

losing his confidence and began to tremble. He couldn’t even sleep!

The next day at the competition, he was the first competitor. He had gone

onto the stage already. Alex was nervous. It was his first time to play the

recorder on a massive stage and the first time to face so many impatient eyes

looking at him. After a while he started to play the recorder. He realized that he

was playing very well. The crescendos were good and the sound was tender. He

started to be more courageous.

At last he won the competition and he was pleased with it.

In this competition, Alex learnt to be a brave boy and learnt to be more

confident. He is a famous recorder player now because of this useful and

meaningful lesson.

By LEE Sing-him,Moses


Last week, my classmates and I went on a school trip. We went to a country

park to have a barbecue. It was such an unforgettable experience.

It was sunny and the breeze was cool that day. At ten o’clock in the

morning, we set off for the park. Travelling with classmates was such a

wonderful experience!

About an hour later, we arrived at the park. We unpacked our belongings

and started to have a barbecue.

While we were eating, my classmate Ben wanted to go to the restroom. He

took a pack of ketchup for some reason. I was curious about it. Suddenly, we

heard a loud scream coming from the restroom. We rushed inside and saw Ben

lying on the floor with blood on his knee. Beside him, we saw a green python

slithering away! We rushed out of the restroom and called the teachers for help.

All the teachers and students rushed into the restroom. When we arrived at the

restroom, Ben laughed and said, “It is just a prank! Today is April Fool’s Day,

remember?” But at this moment, a girl from the next class fainted. She suffered

from blood phobia and thought that was real!

At last, the girl woke up but Ben was scolded by the teachers for doing such

a silly thing. Poor Ben!!!

By CHAN Yat-nam, Gordon


Last Friday was a warm and humid day and it was also my school picnic

day! It wasn’t an ordinary school trip. It was my last elementary school trip

because I would become a secondary school student very soon. I was very

excited because we would have a barbecue together.

When we arrived at the country park, we found the seats quickly to have our

barbecue. Before we started, our class teacher, Miss Chan told us that we

couldn’t leave by ourselves. We needed to ask her first and left with others.

Then we took out our food and started to have the barbecue. At that moment,

my friend, actually he wasn’t my friend. Everyone hated him because he was a

nosey parker. He wanted to go to the toilet and he asked me to go with him. I

shouted, ‘No way! Oh, are you scared?’ I laughed at him. Then, he asked the

others. However, no one wanted to go with him so he went to the toilet himself.

All of a sudden, we heard a scream came from the toilet. We looked at one

another. I thought, ‘What happened with Tom? Will Miss Chan punish us

because we do not look after him?’ Then, we put down our food and ran to the

toilet as fast as we could.

When we opened the door, we saw Tom sitting on the floor and he looked

painful. Suddenly, my friend Billy screamed loudly, ‘Ah!’ He pointed to the left

of the room. I turned my head to the left. Then I saw a snake out of the corner

of my eye. Then, I found out that Tom was hurt. The snake with black skin but

his leg. Tom’s eyes turned red and moistened. His tears welled up his eyes.

Then, big, silent tears were rolling down his red cheeks. His face was wet with

tears. My heart skipped a beat. I was scared out of my wits. I just stood rooted

to the spot. I was scared of snakes. I was worried about Tom. I was ashamed of

myself. I …, etc.

Just then, my friend, Billy ran quickly to find the teachers for help. Within

minutes, the teachers arrived. The teachers had a quick check with him. Before

long, Billy was sent to hospital to have a check. Also, they caught the snake.

Miss Chan told us that luckily we discovered him early. Therefore, he didn’t

have a serious problem. Fresh air filled our lungs and we felt refreshed and

exhilarated. We all giggled, except the teachers. Miss Chan’s eyes stared at us,

forming an intense gaze. We stopped laughing. There was a fire after her and

suddenly we felt very, very hot. Bad things happened next.

The next day, Billy called us with his mobile phone and thanked us. We said

sorry to him that we treated him badly before. After that day, we became

friends. We were all happy about this. This was our exclusive experience.

In this unforgettable experience, I have learnt that we should listen to

teachers’ advice. Also, when we are having a school trip, don’t leave without

permission so that we can help each other to reduce the risk of accidents.

By CHAN Sum-kei, Akie


Once upon a time, there was a pretty princess called Fiona. Her hair was

smooth like silk and she was as gentle as a lamb. Everyone loved her. They

lived happily together in the forest.

One day, the witch wanted to find some herbal medicine so she went to the

forest. Then, she saw a beautiful princess. She took the princess into a prison.

Fiona was very afraid.

After that, the witch said, “Take this pill, then I will be you and you will be

me.” The princess was not willing to take the pill but she was forced to take the

pill.

In the end, the princess became more beautiful but the witch became uglier

than before.

By LEE Cheuk-yiu, Elly


Once upon a time, there was a princess who lived in a faraway kingdom. Her

name was Princess Ally. She was kind, beautiful and wise. Everybody in the

kingdom liked her very much, except the wicked witch. The wicked witch was

the princess’s beloved maid in the past but after a horrible accident, her face

became very ugly. After the accident happened, she ran into the deep forest and

turned into a wicked witch. She swore that she would turn herself beautiful

again.

One day, Princess Ally went to the forest to have a walk but the wicked witch

captured her and took her to the castle. The wicked witch said, “If that accident

didn’t happen, I won’t be ugly!” “That was only an accident!” the Princess

exclaimed. “That doesn’t matter now because you will become ugly and I’ll

become everybody’s beloved princess,” said the witch. Then she took out two

mysterious pills and said, “Tomorrow is the big day. See you later, dumpy

princess.” After that the witch left. Although Princess Ally was a bit scared, she

was wise. She quickly thought up a plan to escape.

After she escaped, she disguised herself as a poor woman and ran back to her

castle. Since the wicked witch’s plan failed, she vanished like smoke.

By WONG Cheuk-ying, Eunice


Once upon a time, there was a boy called Danny who lived with his mum.

They lived in a forest. Danny was naughty. One day, he broke Mum’s vase.

Mum was very angry and wanted to hit him. Danny was scared and ran away.

When he was in the forest, he felt hungry. He wanted to eat something but

he didn’t bring any food. Then he looked for some food to eat. He felt tired too

so he wanted to find a place to rest also.

Then, he found a house which was made of wood. He wanted to have a rest

so he went into the house. He saw a lot of food inside the house. The food was

yummy.

When Danny ate an apple, he turned into a fat pig. He was scared. After that

he looked for some antidotes. He saw a piece of paper and the paper could

speak. Danny was surprised. The paper said, “Please go back home and don’t

be naughty again.” Danny thought it was the antidote so he went back home.

Mum was worried about Danny. She heard someone knocking on the

door and opened it then. She saw a pig. Suddenly, it turned into a human being.

He was Danny! After that, he was never naughty again.

In this story, I have learnt that I shouldn’t be naughty. I should be good.

By LEUNG Tsz-ching, Tulli


Danny was a naughty boy. One day, he broke his mum’s favourite elegant

vase in the afternoon. His mum was extremely mad and scolded him angrily.

Danny was terrified so he ran out from his home and escaped.

When he was far away from his home, he breathed a sigh of relief and

started walking slowly along the path. After a long run, his stomach was

terribly starving. He found a tiny hut nearby and he went inside.

In the tiny hut, there was an enormous feast on the table. Danny’s eyes were

glittering! He quickly gobbled a sandwich and took a bite on an apple.

Suddenly, he turned into a big fat pig that looked delicious. He was sorry and

embarrassed.

At that moment, the door opened. The owner of the house went in. the

owner could not believe his eyes that there was a large fat pig lying on his table.

He quickly slaughtered Danny and cooked him. This was the end of Danny.

In the story, I have learnt that I can’t be greedy and naughty or I will have a

bad ending.

By LEE Sing-him, Moses

The Selfish Benny

It was Chinese New Year. Benny was at home counting his red pockets. He

really hoped that he could buy some new toys. He was very excited. When he

finished counting his red pockets, he walked out from his bedroom. At the same

time, his elder brother Kenny came out from the toilet.

Kenny knew that Benny was counting his red pockets. Therefore, he gave

some advice to him on how to use the money. “Are you counting your red

pockets? If I were you, I would donate $100 to a charity because it can help the

poor people.” Benny thought for a while and lied to Kenny. “I’ve already

donated half of my red pockets to a beggar on the street. The beggar was so

happy that I gave her a lot of money.” Kenny was very pleased because his little

brother finally knew that helping people was a good thing.

A week later, Kenny was very sad so he went to Benny’s bedroom and

wanted to have a talk with him. At the same time, Benny was stacking his

money. When Kenny opened the door, he was shocked. Benny had a pile of red

pocket money! Kenny was very upset. He said, “I never thought you would lie

to me!” Benny felt sorry. He told Kenny the truth. After that he donated $100 to

a charity. Kenny forgave Benny. They both never lied to each other again.

In this story, I’ve learnt that I shouldn’t lie to my family or friends

because it will hurt their feelings.

By WONG Cheuk-ying, Eunice

The Selfish Benny

After Chinese New Year, many people gave a lot of red pockets to Benny.

Benny was a selfish boy. He didn’t want to give the money to a charity but he

wanted to buy a robot or a toy car. He had a heart of stone.

One day, Benny and his dad walked through a charity show. His dad said he

gave some money to the M.S.F. He had a heart of gold.

The next day, Benny lied to his dad. He said he gave all the money to the

beggars. His dad thought his son was good and nice so he bought a toy robot for

his son. That robot was the same one Benny wanted to buy. Benny was

surprised.

Another day later, Dad wanted to find Benny in his bedroom but he found

out that Benny was counting his red pockets and he was thinking how to spend

them! Dad was disappointed and his eyes popped out of his head. Benny

jumped out of his skin and he was upset.

It broke Dad’s heart but Benny turned over a new leaf because he had learnt

to be honest and help people so his dad forgave Benny. Benny became a good

boy and has helped many poor people since then.

In this story, I have learnt that I should be honest and help people in need.

By CHAN Wai-sum, Summer


Last Sunday, it was a sunny day. Donna went to watch a basketball

competition with her father. She felt very excited because this was her first time

watching a basketball competition! She thought the basketball players were so

handsome. She wanted to be a basketball player!

After a few days, Donna thought if she joined the school basketball team,

she would become a basketball player in the future! She went to participate in

the school basketball team but she couldn’t join it because she was not tall

enough. She felt disappointed.

An older schoolmate saw that and went to encourage her. She said, “If you

want to be a basketball player, you need to be fit, tall and strong. You need to

do more sports and drink more milk so that you can be strong, fit and tall.”

When Donna heard that, she felt much better. She decided to make herself

taller.

Every day, Donna went to the park to run. She drank milk also. She hoped

she could be taller. Finally because of her hard-work, she became taller and she

joined the school basketball team.

From this story, I have learnt that I need to be hard-working so that when I

do things, I can finish them faster and the things will be perfect.

By LAU Yan-yin, Chloe


One week ago, a girl called Donna went to a stadium to watch a basketball

competition. She thought the basketball players were cool. If she became a

basketball player, she would win the awards for Hong Kong and she would be

famous.

On the next day, Donna wanted to join the school basketball team. The

coach told Donna, “You are too short. You are not tall enough. You can’t join

the team.” Donna felt sad. At that time, a member of the basketball team Sally

told Donna, “When I was short, I was not tall enough to join the basketball

team either but now I’m tall enough because I drink milk and do exercise every

day.”

After Sally told Donna about that, Donna thought she could also be taller.

Therefore every morning, she woke up early and did exercise; such as running

and practicing the basketball skills...etc. Also, she always drank milk as she

wanted to be taller.

One month later, she became taller. She was tall enough so the coach let her

join the basketball team. She was happy.

In this story, I have learnt that ‘Where there is a will, there is a way’.

By CHUNG Tsz-him, Horace

An unforgettable experience Joe Lam

Life is full of ups and downs. It surprises you from time to time. It is

essential to stay positive and exercise strong will to overcome obstacles.

I had a memorable experience. When I was in Primary Three, I broke my

left arm in an accident. Before that, I was fond of swimming. Whenever I was

swimming, I felt relaxed and delighted. However, after the accident, I wanted to

give up swimming because I couldn’t fully recover from the accident and it was

difficult for me to stretch my left arm.

I was lucky that I had a caring family and some good friends. They

comforted and encouraged me. They supported me in all aspects. They reminded

me not to give up. After that, I practiced even harder than before. Recently I got a

prize in the Kowloon West Primary Inter-School Swimming Competition. This is

my first prize in an open match. I really need to be thankful to my family and

friends. I am always doing my best and I won’t give up.

Dreaming to be a basketball player William Chen

One day, Donna was on the sports field watching the basketball match. She

saw that all of the basketball players were tall and strong. She thought, “They are

so strong. I want to be a basketball player when I grow up. If I become a

basketball player, I will play the basketball match. If I play the basketball match, I

will be famous.”

The next day, Donna went to her school’s basketball team and said,

“Basketball coach, can I join your basketball team?” The coach said, “You can’t

join our basketball team because you are too short.”

When she was upset, one of the basketball team members said, “You need

to be tall and strong so that you can join us. If you want to be tall and strong, you

need to do more sports and drink more milk.”

After that, she did more sports and drank more milk every day. She became

taller and taller.

At the end, she was tall and strong. She could join the basketball team at

school. She thanked the girl who helped her to join the basketball team. They

played basketball together and became best friends.

The selfish Benny by Casy Lam

One day, Benny opened the red packet money in his bedroom.

He wanted to buy a robot and a remote control car because he

liked toys.

Then Benny’s dad went to Benny’s bedroom. His dad said, “If I

were you, I would donate money to a charity.”

On the next day, Benny told his dad, “I gave the money to a

beggar.” His dad said, “Good boy! I will take you to Disneyland.”

Benny said, “Yeah!”

Next, Benny went to his bedroom and hid the red packet

money. Unexpectedly, his dad came into his bedroom. His dad saw

the red packets on the bed and said, “I never thought you would tell

lies! You cannot go to Disneyland.” Benny said sorry to his dad.

Finally Benny’s dad took Benny to give the money to charity.

Benny felt happy. Benny’s dad gave Benny a robot and a remote

control car because he could keep his promise in the end. This was a

good lesson for Benny and he would never tell lies again.

The Princess and the witch by Venice Chan

Once upon a time, a kingdom had a very beautiful princess. She had a kind

heart too so everyone liked her.

But one day, a witch was jealous of her beautiful face so she caught her and

locked her into the cage, in the witches’ castle. The princess was very scared and

worried that she couldn’t get out.

The witch came out and said, “If you let me change your face with mine, I

will let you go out of the castle.” The witch gave the medicine which could change

faces with the princess but she didn’t want to take it. The witch was very angry.

She kept her locked in the cage. The princess cried and said, “Please let me out!

Please!”

Luckily, a prince from another kingdom came. He fought with the witch.

Finally, the prince won. The witch lost and disappeared. The prince saved the

princess. After a long time, they got married. The kingdom was a happy one.

An unforgettable picnic by Grace Chan

My class went on a school picnic last week. There were many flowers and

trees in the country park. We barbecued and we enjoyed the beautiful scenery.

Tom walked into the toilet to wash his hands.

Suddenly, we heard Tom’s call from the toilet. We felt very shocked and

surprised. We went into the toilet immediately to see what happened.

We saw a snake slithering away in a panic. Tom’s foot was bitten by a snake

and it hurt him. He was sitting on the ground in pain. We were very scared.

We asked for help from the teacher and the park administrator. Tom was

treated in the hospital. Fortunately, the snake was not poisonous. Tom had good

treatment from the doctor. We were all relieved eventually.

The Music Festival by Sophie Tang

One day, Alex saw a poster about the Music Festival. He wanted to join it

because he was good at playing the recorder. So he asked her, “Can I join the

Music Festival, please?” His mum said, “OK, I agree but you need to get good

results in this festival.” Alex said, “Sure!” So he kept practicing the recorder every

day for two hours. He was quite excited about the competition too.

Time ran so fast. A few days later, the night before the competition, Alex

couldn’t sleep. He was worried. He even thought, Will the audience laugh at me?

Will I play well in the competition? He kept thinking of some negative

consequences for the whole night.

The next morning, he arrived at the competition venue. When the worker

there said, “Alex, it’s your to go to the stage”. When he walked onto the stage, he

couldn’t help shaking because he felt scared. When he started to play the

recorder, a time machine appeared and the time stopped. All the people couldn’t

move except Alex. Alex was scared. A boy came out from the time machine and

said, “Hi, Grandfather.” Alex was confused and said, “Who are you?” The boy said,

“My name is Sam. I come from the future but never mind this point. You need to

play well in the Festival. Otherwise, you will see the end of the world.” Alex said,

“What?!” Sam said, “You will know in the future. Now please eat this medicine. It

can help you to calm down.” Alex took it and ate it. When Sam gave the medicine

to Alex, Sam and the time machine disappeared. The time was moving again and

the teacher said, “Start!” So Alex started to play. The medicine was working. Alex

wasn’t shivering anymore. Also, he played very well too. At last, he even got the

first prize. Alex was so happy. He thought, “What a strange day!”

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