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7636916by Wayne Ramwell
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FINAL GRADE
80/100
7636916GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor-The essay demonstrates a f irm understandingof the question coupled with depth of research. Itidentif ies the main themes and carries out anuanced analysis with contextualised examplesthat ref lect a f irm grasp of the legal and practicalaspects. Signif icantly, it identif ies and engagessome of the contested concepts andf rameworks. The essay def tly balancesdescription with analysis.-The essay has a clear f ocus with a well-developed analysis that makes use of wide-ranging primary and secondary academicliterature.
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RUBRIC: UOM - LAW (PGT)
CONTENT
DISTINCTION(95)
DISTINCTION(90)
DISTINCTION(85)
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DISTINCTION(75)
MERIT 60-69%(69)
PASS 50-59%MA(59)
PASS 40-49%DIPL(49)
FAIL(39)
STRUCTURE
DISTINCTION(95)
DISTINCTION(90)
DISTINCTION(85)
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80 / 190
80 / 95
Is publishable in a high quality peer-reviewd academic journal without materialrevision.
Constitutes rare work of great insight; demonstrates substantial orginality inreasoning and interpretation; constains no major f laws at any level.
Applies the principles of the disciplinen to the issue(s) at hand in an original yetappropriate manner to produce a well reasoned analysis, with conclusions caref ullyand ef f ectively argued and supported; displays a deeper than normal expectedunderstanding of theoretial nuances, particularly in theior application; showsdiscernment in the use of germane literature base(s).
Demonstrates originality and deopth in thinking and application; demostrates acomprehensive f amiliarity with relevant theories, doctrines and cases; showsf amiliarity with germane literature base(s).
Shows breath of study and some originality in applications; shows externsiveknwoledge abd crit ical understanding of relevant theoriey, f actos and issues; isdirectly relevant to the issues to be addressed in the assignement.
Is suf f icient and relevant to issues beign disucssed; shows a good grasp ofrelevant theory, f acts and issues; ref lects a crit ical understanding of a broadrange of reading.
Is generally competent and displays an adequate understanding of the issues tobe addressed; is just suf f icient to cover the subject, but has some irrelevancies;shows a satisf actory grasp of relevant f acts and issues; shows adequate readingbut lit t le originality.
Does not f ully cover the subject specif ied and/or is sometimes irrelevant, shows aweak graso of relevant concepts, f acts and issues; suf f ers f rom inadequatereading and thinking.
Does not ref lect any background reading; shows only superf icial understanding (atbest) of the relevant issues; relies uncrit ically on subjective personal opinion orhearsay.
0 / 95
Is f lawless (with a not inf inite, but indef inite range of f lawlesness).
Has no structural weaknesses of great consequence.
Has no structural weaknesses of great consequence; integrates detail in acoherent whole; argues autonomously to a reasoned and logical conclusion; issupported throughout by appropriate and accurate language.
Has no structural weaknesses of great consequence; integrates detail into acoherent whole; argues autonomously to a reasoned and logical conclusion; is
DISTINCTION(75)
MERIT 60-69%(69)
PASS 50-59%MA(59)
PASS 40-49%DIPL(49)
FAIL(39)
supported throughout by appropriate and accurate language./
Has no structural weaknesses of great consequence; integrates detail into acoherent whole; argues autonomously to a reasoned and logical conclusion; israrely af f ected by inappropriate or inaccurate language.
Reveals an attempt to create a coherent whole; attempts to guide reader thorugha reasoned conclusion; is rarely af f ected by inappropriate or inaccurate language.
Links parts together but f alls short of creating a coherent whole; but does notalways guide the reader and does not always provide a conclusion to thearguments deployed; is weakened in places by inappropriate or inaccuratelanguage.
Sometimes f ails to link parts to each other; shows litt le regard f or the reader anddoes nto come to a justif iable conclusion; is weakened by inappropriate andinaccurate language.
No attempt made to argue to a conclusion; written in the f orm of an unstructuredmonologued or narrative; shows lit le respect f or the conventionsof grammar.