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Asep Bayu Dani Nandiyanto
*Email: [email protected] page: https://sites.google.com/site/nandiyanto/
Problems Causing Rejection in
International Journal
Departemen Kimia
Universitas Pendidikan Indonesia – Indonesia
2000 Graduated from SMUN 7 Bandung
Entering Chem. Eng. ITB - Indonesia
2001-2002 Lecture at SMUN 7 Bandung
2005 S.T. in Chem. Eng. ITB - Indonesia
2005-2006 Research Student in Chem. Eng. Hiroshima University - Japan2008 M.Eng. in Chemistry and Chem. Eng. Hiroshima University - Japan
2011 Dr.Eng. in Chemistry and Chem. Eng. Hiroshima University - Japan
2011 Visiting Professor, in CENT,
King Fahd University of Petroleum and Minerals - Saudi Arabia
2011-2013 Visiting Special Researcher under JSPS
Hiroshima University - Japan
2013-2014 Assist. Professor in Chemistry and Chem. Eng.,Hiroshima University – Japan
2012-present Assist. Professor in Chemistry,
Universitas Pendidikan Indonesia
Brief of Curriculum Vitae
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Why should we write?
Positive points: • Semua orang mengetahui siapa kita
• Semua orang mengetahui kepakaran/spesialisasi kita • Tulisan kita bisa dimanfaatkan orang lain untuk kemajuan umatmanusia di dunia
Other points: • Kita bisa menjadi terkenal, diundang sebagai “visiting” • Kita bisa menjaga pencurian hak intelektualitas • Kita bisa memajukan science, knowledge, industri, bahkan
bangsa Indonesia
Tulisan
Scientic Paper
(Proceeding, short communication,letters, report, article, mini-review,review, book chapter, edited book,book)
Patent/Hak cipta
Mengunciscientist
Menguncipractitioner
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You should know!
Perangkat yang ada di Journal ISI dan fungsinya1*
1. Manager/Secretary Menerima manuscript kita Men-cek level tulisan
(not english, but structure)
Menyerahkan ke Editor 2. Editor 2 *
Menerima manuscript setelah seleksi satu Men-cek level tulisan Men-cek level originalitas Menyerahkan kepada reviewer
3. Reviewer 3 * Orang yang specific Menerima dan menyerahkan manuscript via Editor
Melihat level tulisan Melihat originalitas
*Berdasarkan pengalaman: 1Submitting own paper 2 Asst. Editor Adv. Powder Technol.)3 Adv. Powder Technol. (5x), Chem. Eng. J. (1x) dan J. Nanoparticle research (7x)
Best contributed reviewer(2013) (Elsevier)
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Strategies for being accepted in InternationalJournal
Bagaimana agar diterima oleh journal dengan ISI?1. Good idea (very important) 2. Good originality Penemuan benar2 baru
Cari apa yang baru 3. Penyempurnaan dari penemuan yang telah ada 4. Dilengkapi dengan analisis intelektual 5. Pemilihan Journal, analisa impact factor
Impact factor= nilai/ranking dari sebuah journal (ISI = Institute of
Scientific Index) • < 1.00 Sangat mudah untuk dimasuki
Editor OK, reviewer biasanya agak jelimet • 1.00 – 2.00 Mulai ditemukan beratnya namun bisa • 2.00 – 4.00 Lumayan berat • 4.00 – 9.00 Cukup berat • > 10.00 Membutuhkan originalitas tinggi
Membutuhkan analisa intelektual tinggi
Ide Reference
Riset
Scopus online?
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Susunan cara menulis umum
Algorithm for writing?1. Dream and Idea (very important) 2. Good experimental data
(80% needed; but can be alternated) 3. Bermanfaat bagi orang banyak? 4. Compare with current papers (not book!!!) 5. Mulai menulis 6. Kembali ke point 4 kembali
Tulis, lupakan, baca-tulis 7. Persiapan publikasi
- Selecting journal (Should be ISI, free of charge, Impact factor) - Re-read our manuscript - Preparing template for journal - Cover letter
8. Submit dan menerima hasil - Manager : if rejected, consider our manuscript structure - Editor : if rejected, consider our originality - Reviewer : If rejected, consider comments and re-construct
9. Preparing for publication
Do not waste your timefor submitting in
International Journalwith no ISI
Less Impact factor OKDiakui dan tidak akan dibajak
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Position of ISSN/ISBN, scopus, ISI
Scientific report
Google scholar
Scopus
40 point
30 point
20 point
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Why is my paper rejected?
Authors Manager Editor
Reviewers
Editor
Where isthe positionof rejection?
Based on author experiences in paper submission
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4%
9%
7%
8%
13%
2%
16%
English Errors27%
7% 7%
Faulty methodology
Inadequate references
Poor quality supporting figures
Outside the scope of journal
Not enough contribution to field
Authors did not follow manuscript instructions
Poor writing style and use of English
Title not representative of study
Subject of little novel interest or not generally
applicable
Poorly written discussion
What are factors causing rejection byinternational journal* *Wallace presentation in KFUPM Feb 2013
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What are factors causing rejection byinternational journal* *Wallace presentation in KFUPM Feb 2013
17%
13%
16%
13%
7%
4%
4%
11%
15%Redundancy
Verb Tense
Passive Voice Errors
Weak Verbs
Verb Agreement
Omitting comparisons
Clear Pronouns
"It" and "There"
Noun Verb issues
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1. Editors and Journals (do not match)
2. Little things that make fatal error
- Title Not appropriate
Do not use complicated English
Be careful!! Wrong grammar- Structure of the paper should be match with title
Subtitle should be correct
Consistency in abbreviation
- English grammar should be correct
- Bahasanya tidak dimengerti recheck, read, dan artikan
- Figure should be attractive
Colorful
Clear Font and Arial
3. Good idea but some “mistakes” in some page/area
(e.g. discussion, etc) Making Editor “kimochi warui ”
4. Do not too long Boring
5. Factor X
Conclusions: What are factors causingrejection by international journal?
Maindiscussion
Size
Legend
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What are factors causing rejection byinternational journal
Today’s Discussion:1. Structure2. Basic Tense3. Passive Voice introduction (report) must be active4. Simplify your words Short and Clear
Less use of which, that, where Less use of “of” Be careful on “it”, “there”, “they”
5. Could, Would, Perhaps, Believe6. Comparison and Superlative7. S + V agreement check “verb” for active/passive;
“A” and “The”8. Specific treated words
Different, various, lead/permit/result/cause, because, due to, etc
9. Precising your wordsBonus discussion:B1. Do you want to fight with other scientists?B2. The way how to response reviewer
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“The manuscript is written in a most
unusual way without detailedinformation on the experimentalprocedures employed. In addition theEnglish language of the paper is verypoor..”
– 2nd
Reviewer, Langmuir (2012)
Voice from reviewer
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Voice from reviewer
“The grammar needs to be significantlyimproved, making it very difficult and
tiresome to read this article andunderstand the points that the authorsare trying to make.“
– 3rd Reviewer, ACS Applied Materials andInterfaces (2013)
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1. Structure
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General structure
1. Use short and simple sentence 2. Write what you want to say
- Tell each figure- Describe each description
Note: Do not miss any figure 3. Simplify verb and sentence 4. Main “point” should be in front of sentence 5. Check where grammar should be6. Sentence should be “complete” (S+V+O+K) 7. Be careful with the unusual word (junky, funky, and slank) 8. Check singular and plural
9. Re-read manytimes
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Structure dalam paper
Structure dalam manuscript untuk jurnal ilmiah1. Perangkat awal (PENTING!!!)
1.1. Title
1.2. Authors 1.3. Affiliation, Address, email afiliasi 1.4. Abstract 1.5. Keywords
2. Main Manuscript 3.1. Introduction 3.2. Materials and Experimental Method 3.3. Results 3.4. Discussions
3.5. Conclusion 3. Acknowledgement 4. References 5. Figure, Scheme, and Table caption
Terkadang digabungResults and Discussions
Communicationatau Letterdigabung
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Perangkat awal (1)
Note:1. Corresponding adalah yang paling dilihat.
Jangan berikan pada “pihak afiliasi asing”!!! Kalau penelitian IndonesiaOtherwise, nama Indonesia tidak akan maju
2. Corresponding harus orang yang benar2 dikenal secara scientific .Less kepakaran of corresponding author Deter level acceptanceEditor dan reviewer pertama akan dilihat siapa correspondingnya
Title
1st author
abstract
Corresponding (asterix (*))
Full
authors
keywords
afiliasi
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Perangkat awal (2)
Title1. Singkat, Jelas, Padat, Containing all originality 2. Frase, ingat BUKAN KALIMAT 3. Semakin indah judul, semakin tinggi citation
Level tertinggi dalam sebuah paper 4. Menentukan paragraph pertama dalam introduction 5. Harus Nyambung dengan Subbab
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Perangkat awal (3)
Nama, address, afiliation, and keywords1. Nama pertama: Biasanya orang utama yang menulis (PhD student) 2. Corresponding: Nama penanggung jawab
Penentu diterima atau tidak pada level pertama Editor dan Reviewer checking
Less kepakaran, deter acceptance possibility Penentu pada kemajuan “suatu institusi/bangsa” 3. Nama kedua, ketiga, … Ikut serta dalam riset dan penulisan
paper 4. Afiliasi: Gunakan “ bahasa indonesia ”, jangan gunakan English
Penyebab Indonesia terpuruk di Dunia Internasional all indonesian affiliations have 2 names
5. Address: Gunakan “ bahasa Indonesia ” 6. Email: Gunakan email afiliasi ( [email protected] ), jangan gunakan email
pribadi yahoo, gmail, hotmail, etc 7. Keywords: point2 pendukung originalitas
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Perangkat awal (4)
What should we put in the abstract1. Pendahuluan (optional) 2. Judul 3. Originalitas dari experiment dan bahan
4. Hasil Result 5. Hubungan Parameter 6. Kesimpulan :
a. Aplikasi b. verifikasi theori
7. Expectasi masa depan
Abstract1. Ringkasan paper 2. Hal yang harus masuk dalam abstract:
- Tujuan penelitian
- Cara metode pelaksanaan penelitian - Hasil yang diperoleh - Originalitas dan impaknya
3. Penentu pembaca akan meneruskan membaca
Dikemas dalam
bahasa indah, singkat,to the point
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Perangkat awal (5)
Judul
MetodePenelitian(+originality)
Originality(beda dgpaper lain)
Tambahanoriginality
Impak(+originality)
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Main manuscript (1)Introduction
Introduction1. Ringkasan paper 2. Dikatakan pelebaran dari Abstract; Atau, ringkasan Introduction =
Abstract
3. Hal yang harus masuk dalam Introduction: - Keadaan target - Penelitian sampai sekarang - Kelemahan orang lain - Apa yang harus dilakukan di bidang science - Hipotesis dan Tujuan penelitian - Paper kita selama ini !!! Menentukan penilaian pertama editor dan reviewer
(1st impression)
- Cara metode pelaksanaan penelitian - Hasil yang diperoleh - Originalitas dan impaknya
Par 1
Par 2
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Main manuscript (2)Introduction
What should we put?1. Ketertarikan tentang judul 2. Alasan mengapa tema judul a. performace
b. capability c. applications
3. Apa yang orang lain sudah lakukan 4. Kekurangan saat ini 5. Fakta kebutuhan target 6. Paper kita sebelumnya 7. Apa yang kita teliti a. tujuan
b. target c. judul
8. Highlight hasil9. Mengapa material dan proses dipilih
10.Keunggulan produk kita daripada yang lain 11.Hubungan parameter 12.Aplikasi 13.Hal yang tidak dibahas 14.Kesimpulan untuk masa depan
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Main manuscript (3)Introduction
Keadaan target
Current paperdan kelemahannya
Cara penanganan
Paper kita sebelumnyaOriginalitas, hasil,inti paper
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Main manuscript (4)Experimental method
Experimental method1. Menjelaskan penelitian apa yang dilakukan
Untuk membuktikan our hypothesis2. Hal yang dimasukkan
- Material
- cara penelitian (Alat pembuatan, statistik, quesioner, survey) - Karakterisasi apa saja (gunakan alat apa, program komputer) - Dimana dan kapan dilakukan
3. Semua ditulis termasuk merk dan brand 4. Semua harus terinci, namun ada sesuatu yang disembunyikan
“Sembunyi tapi terlihat tidak sembunyi” Melindungi hak intelektualitas
Note: Walaupun ada yang disembunyikan, namun apabila orangyang mengulang harus benar2 dengan “seksama”, tidak bisa
sembarangan. Para peneliti International adalah orang yang kepakarannya
tinggi, don’t miss anything for this section
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Main manuscript (5)Experimental method
Materialyangdigunakan
Cara
membuat
Kalau membaca sekilas OK dan logisNamun, ada yang disembunyikan. Dimanakah itu?Answer: concentration, insertion method
Karakterisasi
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Main manuscript (6)Results and Discussions
Results and DiscussionsResult: • Menjelas data, tanpa diskusi • Semua gambar, tabel, foto harus dijelaskan dan dirinci.
Jangan sampai ada yang terlewat • Susun gambar, tabel, foto agar enak dibaca dan informatif • Jangan ada gambar yang ganda/duplikat dalam manuscript • Gambar, tabel, foto, harus dirinci penomorannya • Legenda juga harus lengkap dan enak dibaca
Jangan copy paste langsung dari Excel, karena terkadang legendatidak cocok dengan paper
Discussion • Bukan pengulangan dari Result • Menjelaskan data dan kaitkan dengan theori yang ada
- Mengapa berbeda, lebih baik, atau lebih buruk • Kalau perlu bandingkan dengan hasil orang lain (lebih baik) • Tambahkan data2 lain untuk mendukung hipotesis Apabila Results and Discussions digabung Tulis susunannya seperti result and discussion
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Main manuscript (7)Results and Discussions
How to write Results and Discussions1. Pengantar (optional) 2. Hasil gambar, harus pake alatnya 3. Cara mendapatkan hasil
4. Penjelasan dari gambar 5. Hubungan parameter 6. Perbandingan dan komparasi 7. Kesimpulan total (wajib; conclude, infer, confirm, etc)
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Main manuscript (8)Results and Discussions
Kata2 kunci Result:Figure xx shows …… is shown in Figure xx… were produced (Figure xxx)Setelah itu Past tense semua
Present tense
Present tense
Past tense
Contoh Result
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Main manuscript (9)Results and Discussions
Discussion
Past tenseKecuali apabila jelaskan teori
Ada perbandingan denganteori orang lain,teori yang ada,hasil orang lain
Contoh discussion
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Main manuscript (10)Conclusion
1. Tulisan singkat paper (ringkasan) 2. Isi mirip dengan Abstract but bukan sama 3. Tulisan ringkas penjelasan paper bahwa
“kita telah berhasil” atau “kita telah melaporkan” 4. Tambahkan kekurangan dan kelebihan 5. Future plan juga bisa dimasukkan
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Acknowledgement
1. Tulisan mengenai bantuan-bantuan 2. Beasiswa/fellowship 3. Research grant/supporter research
4. Bantuan orang
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References
1. Cocokkan cara menulis referencesdengan template di journal
2. Isinya secara garis besar - Authors - Judul - Journal - Volume - Pages - Tahun
3. Ingat!!! Cocokkan semua susunansesuai dengan journal.Journal satu dengan yang lainberbeda strukturnya
J. Colloid Interf. Sci.
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Trick untuk menulis
Bagaimana cara menulis paper praktis(Pengalaman)
1. Experimental method (The easiest part in the paper)
2. Result (Find and describe everything from data) 3. Discussion (What is the difference from other reports) 4. Introduction (The most difficult)
- Make a list: Advantage and disadvantage of our result What different from other reports Originality
- Prepare for the last paragraph become the best 5. Take the last paragraph as abstract (shrink this paragraph) 6. Make Conclusion (expansion from abstract)
7. Preparing the template make fit everything, especially reference
8. Re-read paper and check grammar
Ranking Indonesia di Mata DuniaResearcher ID
Reseacher ID (http://www.researcherid.com/):Jumlah scientistIndonesia (Afiliasi Indonesia) = 313 (???)Malaysia = 6,920Vietnam = 211Thailand = 906
Japan = 8,318US = 41,774China = 25,753
Jan 2013
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Ranking Indonesia di Mata DuniaScopus
mmmm…. Dalam kira2 10 tahunPublikasi UKM = 54 Univ IndonesiaHow about UTM? NUS?
54 institusi Indonesia (Universitas dan Lembaga Riset)yang publikasinya terdaftar di scopus
Diambil dari: http://personal.fmipa.itb.ac.id/hgunawan/files/2015/01/50-Perguruan-Tinggi-Indonesia-Paling-Produktif-Menurut-Scopus-28-Jan-2015.pdf
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"Jangan ratapkan hatimu apabila kamu ada dalam suatu keadaan,namun jadikanlah keadaan sekarang sebagai sarana untuk maju.Do your best! "
Penutup dan untuk renungan
“Keep trying and Keep your spirit "
ISBN 978-979-99917-8-2
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2008 Best Master Student Award in 2008
(Kawamura Foundation)
2008 Research Development Award in 2008
(Hosokawa Micron Foundation)2011 JSPS Postdoctoral Fellowship for
Foreign Researchers in 2011 (JSPS)
2013 Outstanding Paper Award 2012
in J. Chem. Eng. Jpn. (SCEJ)
2013 Best presentation award
(SCEJ in Chugoku-Shikoku)
2013 The Society of Chemical Engineers Japan Award for Outstanding Young
Researcher in 2013 (SCEJ)
2014 2013 Best Contributed Reviewer in Advanced Powder Technology (SPTJ)
2014 The George Klinzing Best PhD Award in 2014 (AIChE)
2014 The Most Cited Paper in Advanced Powder Technology (SPTJ)
My achievements
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Thank you very muchfor your attention