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Your essays must be your own words with your own thoughts and your own voice. However, quoting sources in your essays:
What the sources do for you
adds authority to your essays by illustrating
that you are presenting informed opinions
and/or shows your reader exactly
how you arrived at a particular
thought of your own.
In fact, academic essays are usually comprised of three components: • your own thoughts about something you
have read or an issue you are studying
• quotes from your textbook, reading, or
assignment
• quotes from outside sources
Most of your essay is in your own words, but you use quotes to:
• Support your own thinking
• Illustrate your own thinking
• Prove that you are correct
• Or reveal that an opposing point of view is flawed
You can actually follow a very simple pattern:
The introduction generally will not have a quote in it; it will be entirely your own words.
After that, you will start every paragraph with your own words.
You can actually follow a very simple pattern:
And finally, you can conclude each paragraph with a reflection of your own showing how the quote works to support your point.
For the second or third sentence of a paragraph, you will use a well-integrated quote to illustrate or prove the topic sentence of that paragraph.
A couple of rules of thumb:
Do not start a paragraph with a quote.
Do not end a paragraph with a quote.
Use only one or two fairly short quotes per paragraph.
Some examples of signal phrases with author speech tags
According to Jane Doe, "..."
As Jane Doe emphasizes, "..."
Characterized by John Doe, the society is "..."
John Doe believes that "..."
Jane Doe claims that "..."
Jane Doe implies that "..."
List of Speech Verbs
acknowledges, adds, admits, affirms, agrees, argues, asserts, believes, claims, comments, compares, confirms, contends, declares, demonstrates, denies, disputes, emphasizes
endorses, grants, illustrates, implies, insists, notes, observes, points out, reasons, refutes, rejects, reports, responds, states, suggests, thinks, underlines, writes
A well-integrated quote is a lot like a sandwich (or a P.I.E.):
On top = a sentence that is your own thought setting the
context for the quote that you intend to use to illustrate a
point. Context can be the lead-in to a quote.
•Filling = the quote (with author tag/signal
phrase) to back up your thought.
•Bottom = a sentence of your own that
reflects back on the quote.
Paragraph Example:Midway into his famous “I Have a Dream” speech before 100,000 rapt listeners on a scorching hot day on the Washington Mall, King answered critics, who asked why he was not satisfied with the civil rights gains at the time, by detailing a litany of unjust public behavior towards Negroes, ranging from police brutality to disenfranchisement at the voting both. “We will not be satisfied until justice rolls down like waters and righteousness like a mighty stream,” he sang out in his preacher’s voice (304). It was this stunning metaphor of running water and others like it that catapulted King into national respect and prominence.
Context? What’s that?
• Providing context when introducing a quote
means including information about
when/where we are in the plot or
development of the story, epic, novel, play
etc.
Example: As the soldiers in the city of war
fight with one another, “Hate [is] there
with Confusion among them, and Death
the/destructive” (18.535-6).
Context, Continued
• Providing context does NOT mean including
the line numbers in your sentence! The
reader should be able to follow your analysis
WITHOUT having the text in front of him or
her.
No-No Example: In Book 18, Lines 18.535-
6, Homer writes, “Hate [is] there with
Confusion among them, and Death
the/destructive” (18.535-6).
Rule One: Quote Sparingly
• Keep quotes to one sentence or less or prose, or no more than two-three lines of poetry.• If you have something that is longer, break it up with signal phrases and author tags, so the reader knows why you are quoting it.
• “Xxx xxx xxxx,” the author wrote, offering justification for his actions. “Xxx xxx xxxx,” he added.
Rule Two: Quote Just the Good Stuff
•examples of powerful diction or imagery
•especially clear explanations stated by authorities
•controversial arguments in the speaker’s/writer’s own words
If You Absolutely MUST Use a Longer Quote
• Use a BLOCK QUOTE format for more than
two lines from a poem or more than three
from a work of prose.
• Begin quote as a new line of text.
• Indent 1/2” from left margin.
• No quotation marks
• Parenthetical citation goes outside final
punctuation within quote.
Block Quote ExampleIn his poem “The Problem," Ralph Waldo
Emerson explores the inner philosophical
struggle of a religious yet unorthodox man:
I like a church;I like a cowl;
I love a prophet of the soul;
And on my heart monastic aisles
Fall like sweet strains, or pensive
smiles: Yet not for all his faith can see
Would I that cowlëd churchman be. (1-
7)
Quoting from a Poem
• When you quote lines from a poem, indicate
a line break with a slash /
• Example: Homer describes that in the city of
peace there are “marriages…and
festivals./They [are] leading the brides along
the city from their maiden chambers” (18.
491-2) to a joyous celebration.
Notice the In-Text Citation Format for the Iliad!
• Example: Homer describes that in the city of
peace there are “marriages…and
festivals./They [are] leading the brides along
the city from their maiden chambers” (18.
491-2) to a joyous celebration.
(Book#.Line #’s)
• If you do NOT mention Homer’s name in
your sentence : (Homer Book#.Line#’s)
And for Auden?
• Because “The Shield of Achilles” is a shorter
poem with no books or chapters within it,
simply cite the line number(s).
• Example: The wartime setting depicted on
Auden’s shield is “[a] plain without a feature,
bare and brown” (9).
• If you do NOT mention Auden’s name in
your sentence : (Auden Line #’s)
Did you notice the … and [ ] in the examples?
• Use ellipses (…) to indicate that you have left
out words within a line/sentence.
• However, you do not need to use ellipses at
the beginnings or ends of quotes.
• Use brackets [ ] to indicate that you have
made a slight change to the original quote.
More on Using Brackets
• What kinds of small changes might you need
to make to an original quote?
* verb tense—We use present tense to
write about events and characters in
literature
* pronouns—We may want to change
“I” to “he,” for example, when quoting a
character.
* capitalization/use of lower case
Summary
• Keep your quotes short.
• Just quote the good stuff.
• Lead into and/or or out of all quotes.
No floating quotes allowed!
• Do not start paragraphs with quotes.
• Do not end paragraphs with quotes.
Let’s Practice Before We Begin Editing Your Paragraphs
• Correct the following sentences so that the
quotes are better integrated and properly
cited.
1) In line 15 of the poem, Auden portrays the
soldiers an robotic. “Without expression,
waiting for a sign.”
2) In line 615 of Book 18 of the Iliad, Homer
writes: “She like a hawk came sweeping
down” to collect the glorious shield.