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Javid, C.Z., Farooq, U., & Umer, M. (2013). An Investigation of Saudi EFL learners' Writing Problems: A Case Study along Gender-lines. Kashmir Journal of Language Research, 16(1), 179-203.
An Investigation of Saudi EFL learners’ Writing
Problems: A Case Study along Gender-lines
Dr. Choudhary Zahid Javid Assist. Professor, Department of Foreign Languages,
Taif University, Taif, KSAEmail: [email protected]
Tel: +966-502312949; Fax: +966-7284299
Dr. Muhammad Umar Farooq
Assist. Professor, English Language Centre, Taif University, Kingdom of Saudi Arabia
E-mail: [email protected]: +966582912894
Dr. Muhammad Umer Lecturer, Department of Foreign Languages,
Taif University, Taif, KSAEmail: [email protected]
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Abstract
The study in is a comprehensive investigation to
identify the important writing tasks, major areas of
difficulty in academic writing, the factors causing these
difficulties and the corrective measures in the Saudi EFL
academic context. It attempted to identify gender-based
differences for the above-mentioned factors and the results
of independent-samples t-test did not show major
differences in the perceptions of both the groups partially
accepting the null hypotheses. Several research studies
were reviewed and a 40-item Likert-scale agree-disagree
questionnaire was developed by the researcher. It was
translated into Arabic and piloted before it was
administered to 194 Saudi EFL learners (108 male & 86
female) studying at Taif University. Descriptive analyses
and Independent-samples t-test were run using SPSS version
17. The findings reported that these particular Saudi EFL
learners have serious problems in their academic writing
due to their weaknesses in using appropriate lexical items,
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include wrong use of prepositions, spellings, irregular
verbs, articles, punctuation, suffixes and prefixes. It is
recommended to implement a stricter admission policy,
increase language courses, develop tailor-made activities,
provide increased practice in academic writing, exploit
modern teaching techniques and equip the classrooms with
modern teaching aids to improve Saudi EFL learners’
academic writing.
Keywords: Academic Writing, Perception, Syntactic Errors; Gender
Introduction
Because of the English language being a storehouse of
world knowledge, it has been chosen as the medium of
instruction for higher studies in general in many regions
of the world including the gulf countries and, of course,
the English language teaching in particular (Crystal,
2003).
When it comes to the teaching and learning of language
skills, writing comes at the end according to the natural
order hypothesis of language learning, but this does not
make writing skill insignificant. Rather, its significance
increases manifolds in the academic contexts in which
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show what they have learnt. A growing mass of research has
offered valuable insights into the significance of this
skill for academic success. Bjork and Raisanen (1997, p. 8)
argue that
We highlight the importance of writing inall university curricula not only because ofits immediate practical application, i.e. asan isolated skill or ability, but because webelieve that, seen from a broaderperspective, writing is a thinking tool. Itis a tool for language development, forcritical thinking and, extension, forlearning in all disciplines.
According to Fageeh (2011), “many EFL learners heavily rely
on writing as integral skill to language learning” as
supported by much research that EFL learners’ listening,
speaking and reading skills mainly depend on their writing
competence (Hefferman, 2006; Hinkel, 2004; Al-Ghamari,
2004; Cayer & Sacks, 1979).
Though writing skill is considered extremely
important, a lot of research studies conducted in the
various EFL contexts strongly suggested that EFL learners,
who study in institutions that use English as a medium of
instruction, face severe problems in writing skills that
hinders their academic progress (Tahaineh, 2010; Rababah,
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p. 79) reiterated that the writing skill “……. is needed for
taking notes, describing objects or devices and writing
essays, answering written questions, writing their
compositions, writing experimental reports, etc”. Like
other EFL contexts, the situation in the Arab world has
also been reported poor and Arab students seriously lack in
all English skills in general and writing skills in
particular. Several studies conducted in the Arab world
revealed that Arab students face maximum problems in their
writing (Abdul Haq, 1982; Zughoul & Taminian, 1984; Al-
Khuweileh, & Al-Shoumali, 2000; Al-Hazmi, 2006; Al-Samdani,
2010; Grami, 2010; Ezza, 2010).
Writing is defined as "…. the logical organization and
arrangement of the written sentences within a paragraph and
paragraphs within the units of discourse …………and the
expression of the ideas" (Abu-Ghararh, 1998, p. 87).
Concerning the problems of ESL learners’ in writing, Al-
samadani (2010, p. 53) stated that it “is a complex,
challenging, and difficult process” because it includes
multiple skills such as identification of thesis statement,
writing supporting details, reviewing and editing. This
complex process makes it rather difficult to teach it. The
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fact that it involves a comprehensive knowledge of grammar,
suitable vocabulary, writing mechanics (e.g., punctuation &
capitalization), organizational skills, style, imagination
etc. Another factor that makes teaching of writing rather
difficult is that it has been historically dealt with vis-
à-vis the other skills. Writing skill is formally defined
as the “recording of human communication, using signs or
symbols to represent the spoken words” (McMillan
Encyclopedia, 1986, p.1317) whereas functionally speaking
it is defined as a “curiously solitary form of
communication, addressed to an absent and often unknown
reader” (Peters, 1986, p.169). The challenge faced by the
faculty members in teaching this skill is that it is either
considered a secondary activity in ELT or taken as a
desocialised communication pattern. This problem rather
intensifies when it is not the learners’ first language
because of the additional problems encountered in this
regard. Highlighting these difficulties, Hopkins (1989)
stated that writing is the most difficult skill to be
learnt for non-native speakers. Piper (1989 cited in Grami,
2010) reported that instructional methods are instrumental
in shaping the learners’ behaviour towards writing skills
as well as their writings. It has also been pointed out184
Javid, C.Z., Farooq, U., & Umer, M. (2013). An Investigation of Saudi EFL learners' Writing Problems: A Case Study along Gender-lines. Kashmir Journal of Language Research, 16(1), 179-203. that the approaches to teach writing skills vary in the
different academic contexts due to the indigenous specific
circumstances.
As for the history of teaching of writing is
concerned, it was not given much attention as evident from
scarcity of research studies related to this skill till the
beginning of the last decade of the twentieth century
(Krashen, 1984). Long and Richard (2003) reported that
writing skills teaching was given importance during 1990s
when English established its status as a language of
international communication and consequently “English as L2
writing skills do not only ―play an increasingly important
role today in the lives of professionals in almost every
field and discipline” (p. XV). A closer look through the
history of teaching of writing skills reveals that among
the different approaches that have been experimented to
teach writing effectively, three approaches have been the
most influential which are product approach, process
approach and genre approach. Much research has strongly
suggested that all these approaches carry their own
weaknesses and strengths but they are complementary to each
other as well (e.g., Grami, 2010; Hayland, 2007; Paltridge,
2004; Badger & White, 2000; McDonough & Shaw, 2003).
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Research has offered valuable insights into the fact
that all the approaches of teaching writing skills have
their own strengths and weaknesses; therefore, it is not
advisable to follow any one of these exclusively; rather,
the teachers should have thorough knowledge of all these
approaches so that they should inculcate the professional
ability to exploit all these approaches to pick and choose
appropriate techniques according to the students’
level/needs, social context and their peculiar academic
echo system (Badger & White, 2000; Asiri, 1997; Raimes,
1991).
Like the rest of the world, English language teaching
(ELT) has embedded firmly in the Arab world during the last
few decades and a growing mass of research produced in this
region has been related to English teaching and its sub
fields (Al-Seghayer, 2011). Though tremendous efforts have
been made, as reflected by the huge funding allocated to
ELT, the research studies conducted in the Arab world
reported that EFL learners in the Arab world including
Saudi Arabia suffer from serious problems in this regard
such as students' poor performance low proficiency level in
the target language (Javid, Farooq, & Gulzar, 2012; Al-
Jarf, 2008; Rababah, 2003). Bacha (2002) suggested that it
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motivated to develop their writing and that "L2 writers are
known to face problems in developing their writing skills
at the university level. These problems are even more
accentuated with L1 Arabic non-native speakers of English
in required English composition courses" (p. 161). A report
published by the Cambridge Examination Center in 2009 about
the proficiency level of Saudi students "…ranked them 39th
of the 40 nations participated in both academic and general
training tests" (Cambridge ESOL: Research Notes, 2010 cited
in Al-Seghayer, 2011, p. 45). This poor performance has
been more strongly revealed by the studies which were
conducted to evaluate Saudi students' writing skills
(Bersamina, 2009; Grami, 2010; Al-Eid, 2000). Grami (2010)
cited the results of IELTS test report of Saudi students
which revealed that they scored comparatively low in all
English language skills (5.17, 4.97, 5.81 out of 9 in
listening, reading and speaking respectively ) but the
average in writing skills was the lowest (4.83 out of 9).
Numerous studies have been conducted to identify the
problems of Saudi EFL learners in their writing. The
findings of these studies reported that despite the fact
that Saudi students study English as a compulsory subjects
for six years before joining any university but actually187
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performance in the university entrance examinations (Grami,
2010). Tahaineh (2010) has stated that Arab students’
errors in writing mainly fall in the category of syntax and
grammar and quoted Hashim’s (1996) findings, who reviewed
and analysed a number of studies conducted on Arab EFL
learners’ syntactic errors and stated that Arab learners’
errors can be categorised in seven syntactic subcategories:
prepositions, verbs, articles, conjunctions, relative
clauses, adverbial clauses, and sentence structure. Kharma
and Hajjaj (1997) is another study that reinforced the
previous findings and revealed that Arab EFL learners’
errors in writing are syntactical and especially in
prepositions. Most recent studies conducted to investigate
Arab EFL learners syntactic errors also found out that
verbs and prepositions are the most problematic areas in
this regard (Zahid, 2006, Muhammad, 2005, Muortaga, 2004).
Concerning the problems of Saudi university undergraduates,
Khan (2011), who recently conducted a study to investigate
the problems of Saudi university undergraduates, has
mentioned that they face several problems in phoneme
clusters, spellings, grammar, mistakes due to L1
interference, structure, doubling of subjects, doubling of
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wrong use of prefixes & suffixes etc.
Much research has offered valuable insights into the
reasons of Arab EFL learners’ weaknesses in English in
general and writing skills in particular. Khan (2011)
reviewed several studies in this regard and concluded that
Arab EFL learners’ problems are caused by the following
reasons:
a) school graduates have lack of informationregarding the university or college theyenrolled in; b) there is deficiency in theEnglish language curricula offered by someschools and universities; c) dreadful teachingmethodology; d) problems with proper languageenvironments; and e) lack of personal impetuson the part of the students. (p. 1250)
According to his findings, the causes of the problems may
be dealt with from four perspectives, i.e., the learners,
faculty members, curricula and the environment of
teaching /learning context. It has been reported that Saudi
EFL learners are more interested in getting better scores
instead of learning the target language and they are in the
habit of memorising passages without understanding,
grammatical rules and lexical items to achieve high grade
point average (Grami, 2010; Zaid, 1993). Another very
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EFL learners is that a vast majority of them lack intrinsic
motivation and bear various extrinsic motivational factors
to learn English language (Javid, Asmari, & Farooq, 2012).
Concerning the role of EFL teachers, a growing mass of
research has suggested that a vast majority of EFL teachers
are hired from the Arab countries (such as Egypt, Sudan,
Jordan etc.) to serve in Saudi Arabia. These teachers seem
to lack the following: a) a proper and appropriate training
to teach English, b) a proper motivation to indulge in
teaching process, and c) willingness to incorporate
innovation and modern techniques in their teaching
practices; thus, causing the continuation of traditional,
outdated and teacher-led teaching practices that is a major
impediment in the way of effective and efficient ELT in
Saudi Arabia (Bersamina, 2009; Grami, 2010; Syed, 2003;
Zaid, 1993). Another important factor in this regard is the
absence of appropriate and learner-centered curricula to
cater for the specific EFL needs of the learners. It has
been frequently reported that the curricula taught in
several Saudi university is outdated, traditional and
textbook-based that encourage the students to merely
memorise instead of making them grasp the target language
(Khan, 2011; Bersamina, 2009; Hazmi, 2006; Zughoul, 1987).190
Javid, C.Z., Farooq, U., & Umer, M. (2013). An Investigation of Saudi EFL learners' Writing Problems: A Case Study along Gender-lines. Kashmir Journal of Language Research, 16(1), 179-203. The context of the study
This study was conducted in the second semester of
academic year 2012 at foreign languages department, Taif
University (TU). It offers 4-year graduate and 2-year
masters programmes majoring in English language and
linguistics. The students who are enrolled in the graduate
programme have to take 59 compulsory courses of 2-credit
hour each in eight semesters. These courses include
language, linguistics, literature and translation courses.
During the first three semesters, the undergraduates are
taught various language courses to improve their four
English language skills. Though the undergraduates are
given intensive courses in various English language skills
including writing but research, such as a study conducted
at TU by Javid, Farooq, and Gulzar (2012), strongly
suggested that Saudi EFL learners suffer from serious
handicap in all language skills including writing.
Research Objectives
This empirical study intended to investigate the
following research objectives:
a. Identifying the kinds of academic writing as
perceived by male and female Saudi EFL learners
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b. Identifying the academic writing problems as
perceived by male and female Saudi EFL learners
studying at TU,
c. Identifying the causes of academic writing
problems as perceived by male and female Saudi
EFL learners studying at TU,
d. Identifying the solutions to overcome academic
writing problems as perceived by male and
female Saudi EFL learners studying at TU.
Null Hypotheses
H01: There is not any statistically significant
difference in the perception of
male and female Saudi EFL learners
regarding the kinds of academic
writing at TU.
H02: There is not any statistically significant
difference in the perception
of male and female Saudi EFL learners
regarding the academic
writing problems at TU.
H03: There is not any statistically significant
difference in the perception
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of male and female Saudi EFL learners
regarding the causes of
academic writing problems at TU.
H04: There is not any statistically significant
difference in the perception
of male and female Saudi EFL learners
regarding the solutions to
overcome academic writing problems at TU.
Participants
For the purpose of this study all the junior and
senior students, who have already spent two to three years
at TU, were taken as the population whereas the freshmen
and sophomores were not investigated. Considering the fact
that the study in hand was perceptive in nature and the
researcher considered it important to elicit the responses
of those EFL learners who knew the academic echo system at
TU so that authentic and reliable responses may be ensured.
The questionnaire was translated into Arabic to collect
reliable data. The researcher coordinated with the faculty
members and visited the male participants of the study
during their lectures to collect the data whereas the
female faculty members were requested to administer the
translated questionnaire to collect the data from the
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same values assigned to all the items were rejected by the
researcher. One hundred and eight questionnaires filled in
by the male cohort and 86 by the female participants were
selected for the final analyses.
The participants of the study were investigated once
when the questionnaire was administered and they were given
the option of free will to respond to the questionnaire.
Furthermore, it was optional to mention their personal
information. They were also informed that their personal
information would be de-identified and data would be used
for the purpose of this study only. Their submission of the
questionnaires was considered as their informed consent.
Instrumentation
The researcher consulted many related research studies
including the ones conducted in the EFL context of Saudi
Arabia (such as Al-Seghayer, 2011; Grami, 2010; Al-
Khasawneh, 2010; Al-Hazmi, 2006) to collect data to develop
a suitable questionnaire to elicit the responses of male
and female English-major undergraduates of Taif university
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Likert-scale agree-disagree questionnaire was developed and
translated into Arabic (See appendix#1). The Arabic
translation along with the English version was given to two
senior professors of translation at TU to identify any
inconsistencies. Their suggestions were incorporated in the
final Arabic version that was piloted with 20 EFL learners
at TU. A Pearson correlation matrix was run for all the
forty items using SPSS 17 that yielded a Cronbach's alpha
coefficient of .75 which was a high value for ensuring
sound judgments as George and Mallery (2003) have reported
that alpha coefficient of more than .70 is acceptable for
reliable scientific investigation.
Statistical Analysis
The descriptive analyses, namely the means, medians
and standard deviations, were run for all the questionnaire
items to identify the most and least preferred
questionnaire items. Furthermore, independent-samples t-
test was used to see whether or not any gender-based
statistically significant differences existed. The data
analyses generated the following results.
Results and Discussion
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The 40-item questionnaire was divided into four
sections to elicit the participants’ perceptions towards
important writing tasks for their English-major studies at
TU, the areas of difficulties in this regard, the factors
that cause these problems and the probable solutions. The
results generated through the descriptive analyses and
independent-samples t-test have been summarised in tables
1, 2, 3 and 4.
The first section of the questionnaire contains ten
items that were included to elicit the participants’
perception to identify important academic writing tasks for
their EFL studies at TU. Table 1 details the responses of
the male and female Saudi EFL learners in this regard.
Table (1): Analyses of important academic writing tasks atTU
Academic writing
tasks Group N M SD T df p
value
1 Topic sentences /supportingdetails
Male 108
3.6667
1.0590
-2.74
7
192 .007
p <0.05
Female
86 4.0465
.8103
-2.83
0
191.72
2 Paragraphs Male 108
3.9259
.8395
.658 192 .028
p <0.05
Female
86 3.8372
1.0388
.642 161.66
3 Summaries Male 108
4.1111
1.1051
-.969
192 .118
p >0.05
Fema 86 4.25 .935 -.98 191.
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le 58 4 7 254 Letters Male 10
83.4444
.9795
1.021
192 .341
p >0.05
Female
86 3.2907
1.1153
1.006
170.41
5 CriticalAppreciation
Male 108
3.1296
1.0598
-.210
192 .313
p >0.05
Female
86 3.1628
1.1361
-.208
176.34
6 Reports Male 108
3.2407
1.0400
1.614
192 .867
p >0.05
Female
86 2.9884
1.1323
1.599
174.87
7 Narrative Essays Male 108
3.2407
1.1590
1.471
192 .724
p >0.05
Female
86 2.9884
1.2223
1.462
177.86
8 DescriptiveEssays
Male 108
3.2593
1.0445
-.767
192 .850
p >0.05
Female
86 3.3721
.9828
-.773
186.69
9 ArgumentativeEssays
Male 108
3.3704
1.2722
-.642
192 .726
p >0.05
Female
86 3.4884
1.2718
-.642
182.41
10 Expository Essays Male 108
3.6667
1.1107
1.552
192 .924
p >0.05
Female
86 3.4186
1.1004
1.424
157.63
Descriptive analysis results reveal that both sample
groups saw eye to eye to each other as far the most
important writing task is concerned and writing “summaries”
has been assigned the highest values in favour of the
female cohort. The first and second questionnaire items
have been identified as the second and third most important
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supporting details and third highest to paragraph writing
whereas the male cohort did the same but in a reverse
order. Furthermore, the male participants also allotted the
third highest value (3.66) to writing “expository essays”
as well. Lowest value of less than 3.0 is not assigned to
any item by the female cohort but the males did it for two
items, i.e., to writing reports and narrative essays. The
results of this empirical study contradict with the
research conducted by Al-Khasawneh (2010) who investigated
Arab postgraduate students studying at the College of
Business, University Utara Malaysia and found out that
summary writing was among the least important tasks for
their postgraduate studies whereas writing article reviews
and reports were the two most important tasks. One probable
justification for these contradicting results is due to the
different levels (i.e., undergraduate v/s postgraduate
level). The participants of this study need to write
summaries for different concepts related to their various
literature and linguistics courses; thus, ranked it the
most important task for carrying out their studies
effectively. The findings are partially in line with the
results of Al-Khasawneh (2010) towards their perceived
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this study also reported it among the less important tasks.
Standard deviation of more than 1 was calculated for
nearly all items except the top three ones showing that the
participants carried wide differences in their perceptions.
Independent-samples t-test results indicated that though
both groups bear differences in their perception towards
all items but significant difference has been recorded only
for the first and second items; thus, partially accepting
the first null hypothesis because both groups have not
shown any significant difference except items 1 and 2.
Table (2): Analyses of problems faced in academic writingtasks
Problematic areas in Academic writing
Group n M SD T Df p value
11 Vocabulary Male 108 3.8519
1.0836
.172 192 .686 p >0.05
Female
86 3.8256
1.0197
.173 186.68
12 Spellings Male 108 3.3148
1.2047
.358 192 .144 p >0.05
Female
86 3.2558
1.0537
.363 190.27
13 Articles Male 108 3.2037
1.1337
-.181 192 .766 p >0.05
Female
86 3.2326
1.0702
-.182 186.48
14 Punctuation Male 108 3.1111
1.2023
-.376 192 .452 p >0.05
Female
86 3.1744
1.1187
-.379 187.35
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15 Prepositions Male 108 3.2037
1.1978
-.589 192 .782 p >0.05
Female
86 3.3023
1.1069
-.594 187.74
16 Suffixes/Prefixes
Male 108 3.2593
1.1790
-.865 192 .047 p >0.05
Female
86 3.3953
.9614 -.886 191.88
17 Irregular Verbs
Male 108 3.1481
1.1982
-1.724
192 .915 p >0.05
Female
86 3.4419
1.1541
-1.731
185.17
18 Question Words Male 108 3.2222
1.1547
.803 192 .271 p >0.05
Female
86 3.0930
1.0586
.811 188.17
19 Grammar Male 108 3.7407
1.2257
.722 192 .536 p >0.05
Female
86 3.6163
1.1496
.727 186.88
20 Organisation of Ideas
Male 108 3.4630
1.1392
-.497 192 .412 p >0.05
Female
86 3.5465
1.1947
-.494 178.36
The descriptive and comparative analyses of ten items
that constitute the second section of the questionnaire
eliciting participants’ perceived responses regarding the
difficulties they face in their academic writing have been
summarised in the above given table. An interesting finding
is that none of the ten items has been allocated high value
of 4.0 or above by either group indicating that the male
and female participants of the study did not perceive any
of these areas as a very serious problem. This does not
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conducted in the various Arab countries and strongly
reported that Arab EFL learners face serious problems in
all English language skills in general and writing skills
in particular (see for example Khan, 2011; Al-Samdani,
2010; Bersamina, 2009; Grami, 2010). Concerning the
seriousness of the problem, Zaid (1993) stated that Arab
students tend to cram grammatical rules, required lexical
items and even important passages in English due to their
lack of understanding and inability to write even few
correct sentences in the target language.
Item analysis for this section of the questionnaire
exhibits strong affinities in the perceptions of the male
and female participants. Use of suitable vocabulary has
been declared the weakest area with the highest mean values
that hinder their English-major studies at TU. This finding
is in accord with the previous study conducted by Al-
Khasawneh (2010) who also reported that the postgraduate
Arab students studying in Malaysian university also ranked
vocabulary as the most difficult area. Difficulties in
grammar have been unanimously identified as the second most
problematic area with comparatively high mean values. The
next item in this regard remains the organisation of ideas
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lower values (i.e., 3.15 to 3.30) were assigned by the male
and female groups to the use of prepositions, irregular
verbs, articles, suffixes and prefixes. This result is in
line with much research conducted in the various regions of
Arabic peninsula such as the findings of Hashim (1996) who
reviewed many studies related to the syntactic errors of
Arab EFL learners and reported that their problematic areas
include use of prepositions, verbs, articles, conjunctions,
sentence structure etc. Many other studies as well revealed
that Arab EFL learners face severe problems in using
prepositions and articles correctly (Khan, 2011; Zahid,
2006; Mourtaga, 2004 etc.) The least mean value was
allocated to punctuation suggesting that the participants
of this study do not have serious problems in punctuation.
The participants assigned medium values to the remaining
six items but their responses carried differences for all
these items.
The results exhibited some interesting trends. Three
items with maximum values and one with least value bear
complete similarity in the perception of both the male and
female participants but SD of more than 1.0 for these item
reports high inter rater differences. The same is true for
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high SD of more than 1.0. The results of independent-
samples t-test reported significant difference for only one
item that elicited their responses regarding the use of
suffixes and prefixes. The results indicate that the null
hypothesis # 2 is also accepted with a minor difference of
only one item out of the total of ten items in this
section.
Table (3): Analyses of the reasons of weak academic writing Reasons of Weak Academic Writing
Group n M SD T Df p value
21
Low proficiency in thetarget language
Male 108
4.0556
.9154
1.461
192 .013
p > 0.05
Female
86 3.8372
1.1668
1.422
158.49
22
Lack of language courses at Taif University
Male 108
4.5556
.6604
-1.31
1
192 .035
p > 0.05
Female
86 4.6744
.5829
-1.33
0
189.93
23
Teachers' lack of interest in writing tasks
Male 108
3.5185
1.1559
-1.70
2
192 .201
p >0.05
Female
86 3.7907
1.0417
-1.72
2
189.03
24
Limited opportunities to practice English outside the classroom
Male 108
4.4074
1.0325
-1.37
0
192 .016
p > 0.05
Female
86 4.5930
.8026
-1.40
9
191.90
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Interference of your mother tongue
Male 108
3.4630
1.4688
-3.08
8
192 .001
p > 0.05
Female
86 4.0581
1.1413
-3.17
6
191.89
26
Inappropriate teachingmethods
Male 108
3.8704
.9676
-1.43
6
192 .055
p >0.05
Female
86 4.0814
1.0761
-1.41
8
172.78
27
Lack of writing practice at Taif
University Male 10
83.8333
1.0722
-1.83
8
192 .933
p >0.05
Female
86 4.1163
1.0563
-1.84
1
183.54
28
Use of Arabic in the classrooms
Male 108
3.5926
1.1684
1.321
192 .382
p >0.05
Female
86 3.3605
1.2734
1.308
174.77
29
Lack of audio visual aids in the classrooms
Male 108
4.2778
1.0837
.435 192 .999
p >0.05
Female
86 4.2093
1.0967
.434 181.43
30
Insufficient use of
dictionaries Male 10
83.7778
1.0170
.302 192 .402
p >0.05
Female
86 3.7326
1.0563
.301 179.21
Table 3 details the descriptive and comparative
analyses for the ten items included in the third section of
the questionnaire meant to elicit the participants’
perception towards the causes of weak academic writing. The
participants assigned comparatively much higher values to
the various items of this section as compared to the
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high value of more than 4.0 to six items and the male group
did it for four items. ‘Lack of language courses at TU’ has
been ranked at the top with extremely high values of 4.67
and 4.55 by the female and male cohort respectively
confirming the findings of Zahid, Farooq and Ajmal (2012)
that insufficient number of languages courses has been a
major cause of ineffective ELT in Saudi Arabian
universities. Furthermore, the SD has been calculated as
0.58 and 0.66 for the female and male participants
confirming that they bear strong agreement as far as this
item is concerned. The female cohort assigned the second
highest value of 4.59 to 24th questionnaire item suggesting
that the limited opportunities to practice the target
language outside the classroom is a major reasons for their
weak academic writing. The other group allocated it the
third highest value. This finding is in line with the much
research conducted in the Arab world and revealed that lack
of support from the society and family in terms of
providing Arab EFL learners with sufficient opportunities
to practice the target language cause a major handicap in
effectively learning the target language including the
writing skills (See for example Kahn, 2011; Tahaineh,
2010). Though there are contradictory voices as well such205
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Arab students perceived it one of the least important
factors in this regard. Another major reason, the second
most favoured item by the male participants and the third
most favoured item by the female participants, held
responsible for weak academic writing remained the ‘lack of
audio visual aids’ in the teaching process. Both sample
groups saw eye to eye to each other as far the least
preferred items were concerned. ‘Use of Arabic in
Classrooms’ has been allocated the lowest values by both
groups followed by ‘insufficient usage of dictionaries’.
This finding is not consistent with the study conducted by
Javid, Farooq and Ajmal (2012) in the same context and
reported that frequent use of Arabic language in the
classrooms by the faculty as well as the students has been
a major cause of ineffective ELT in Saudi universities.
The results of independent-samples t-test revealed
that four items (21, 22, 24 & 25) bear statistically
significant gender-based differences partially accepting
the third null hypothesis.
Table (4): Analyses of measures to improve academic writing Measures to Improve Academic Writing
Group n M SD T Df p value
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Using multiple teaching techniques
Male 108 4.5370
.7416 -.314 192 .631 p >0.05
Female
86 4.5698
.6952 -.316 186.91
32
Using pair/group
work Male 108 4.333
3.7488 1.251 192 .094 p >
0.05Female
86 4.1744
1.0197
1.209 151.48
33
Using English as a medium
Male 108 4.2037
.7582 -2.255
192 .494 p >0.05
Female
86 4.4535
.7770 -2.248
180.39
34
Diagnosing students' problems in academic writing
Male 108 4.3148
.8823 -1.834
192 .007 p > 0.05
Female
86 4.5233
.6458 -1.898
190.73
35
Frequent use of modern teaching
facilities Male 108 4.222
21.017
0-
1.992192 .008 p >
0.05Female
86 4.4884
.7933 -2.048
191.92
36
Additional coachingfacilities for
weaker students Male 108 4.203
71.133
7-.873 192 .195 p >
0.05Female
86 4.3372
.9531 -.891 191.41
37
Timely correction of students' errors
Male 108 4.2778
.9937 -1.766
192 .021 p >0.05
Female
86 4.5116
.8080 -1.808
191.90
38
Increased language courses
Male 108 4.4259
.9192 -.576 192 .634 p >0.05
Female
86 4.5000
.8506 -.581 187.67
39
Using peer reviews Male 108 4.0556
1.1008
-.896 192 .433 p >0.05
Female
86 4.1977
1.0935
-.897 182.91
40
Frequent dictionary
usage Male 108 3.833
31.264
2-.622 192 .195 p >
0.05Female
86 3.9419
1.1309
-.630 189.37
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The analyses of the last ten questionnaire items which
were included to elicit the participants’ suggestions
regarding the correctives measures to improve their
academic writing demonstrate interesting trends because all
the items except the last one has been assigned extremely
high values of more than 4.0. The results of this section
are in contrast to the results of the previous section to a
great extent. ‘Using multiple teaching techniques’ has been
assigned extremely high values of 4.56 and 4.53 by the
female and male participants respectively clearly
indicating that Saudi EFL learners strongly feel that the
teachers follow traditional methods of teaching that are
monotonous and uninteresting. This finding is supported by
high mean values allocated to the item that elicited their
perception regarding the frequent use of modern teaching
facilities in English classes to make them lively,
interesting and appealing for the learners. The results of
these items strongly support the findings of the growing
mass of research (e.g., Javid, 2011; Khan, 2011; Grami,
2010) conducted in the Arab world. A relatively
contradictory finding is reported by Al-Khasawneh (2010)
that ranked the use of multiple teaching techniques among
the least preferred items. The female participants allotted208
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diagnosing the EFL learners’ specific writing problems so
that appropriate corrective measures may be taken by the
ELT faculty. This item was ranked as the fourth highest by
the male cohort. The finding is in line with the
recommendation of Al-Khasawneh (2010) who suggested that
error analysis of EFL learners’ writings is quite
instrumental for improving writing skills because “…..it
helps to build students’ awareness of the different types
of grammatical errors they are making and encourage them to
check their errors by using grammar handbooks” (p. 19). The
third most important item as considered by the female group
has been the timely correction of EFL learners’ academic
writing errors. Increasing the number of language courses
has been ranked the second highest by the male cohort and
4th highest by the female participants. ‘Frequent
dictionary usage’ is the only item that has been allocated
low mean value of less than 4.0 by both groups suggesting
that frequent use of modern gadgets has weakened their
association with print material including dictionaries.
The comparatively analyses generated by independent-
samples t-test indicated that three items (34, 35 & 37)
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confirming the fourth hypothesis of this study.
Conclusion and Recommendations
This study is a comprehensive investigation to
identify the important writing tasks, major areas of
difficulty, the factors causing these difficulties and the
corrective measures in a Saudi EFL academic context. It
attempted to identify gender-based differences for the
above-mentioned factors and the results of independent-
samples t-test did not show major differences partially
accepting all four hypotheses. It has been found that the
participants of this study need writing skills to paragraph
level for carrying out their undergraduate English-major
studies and that they also have serious problems in their
academic writing due to their weaknesses in using
appropriate lexical items, organisation of ideas and
grammar. The other weaker areas are prepositions,
spellings, irregular verbs, articles, punctuation, suffixes
and prefixes. The findings strongly support the previous
research that Saudi EFL learners who are supposed to have a
reasonable command of English commit serious errors of
various syntactic categories even at sentence level.
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The findings also suggested that the number of
language courses as well as the opportunities of writing
practice in the classrooms are not sufficient considering
the fact that the participants of this study reported that
they do not have appropriate English language proficiency
when they joined Taif university for their English-major
studies. This finding may resonate with the undergraduates
who join other Saudi universities for their higher studies.
Therefore, it seems important to implement a stricter
admission policy and only those students are given
admission in English departments who have a reasonable
command of the target language so that they may be able to
effectively handle technical courses of English literature,
linguistics and translation. It is strongly recommended
that along with other content based courses, English
departments need to provide their undergraduates with
sufficient number of language courses to improve their all
language skills in general and writing skills in
particular. Another important factor that should be
considered for better results is to identify Saudi
students’ specific errors and to develop tailor-made
activities, in the form of on-campus and home assignments,
to address to their common mistakes. This will not only
help them with their problematic areas but also enhance211
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the findings of much research it has been found out that
EFL learners do not get any support in terms of practicing
the target language in the real world context because of
limited use of English in Saudi Arabia. Therefore, it also
seems imperative that the English faculty members should
provide their students with as many opportunities to
practice the target language as possible. In this regard it
is also worth mentioning that effective use of group/pair
work will be extremely instrumental to materialise it with
an additional benefit of making their students learn from
each other. These groups should include learners of
different levels so that the students with comparatively
better proficiency help the weaker ones. Use of traditional
teaching methods is reportedly a major cause for their weak
writing and it is strongly recommended that the faculty
members should exploit modern teaching techniques and the
classrooms should be provided with the latest teaching aids
to ensure enhanced learning possibilities.
There seems a scarcity of research related to the
writing problems of Saudi undergraduates along gender lines
as the researchers could not find any relevant study in a
Saudi context. This study is an effort to fill this gap but
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context of the current study and should not be over-
generalised to other academic settings without conducting
further investigations. Therefore, it is suggested that
further research is imperative to understand this area in a
better and more comprehensive manner.
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Appendix # 1
QUESTIONNAIRE
I- PERSONAL Name: Email: Level: GPA:
II- Circle the most appropriate choice. 1 = strongly disagree 2 = disagree 3 = neutral 4 = agree 5 = strongly agree
A: Which of the following tasks are significant and relevant for your studies at Foreign Languages Department,
Taif University?
Strongly disag
Disag
ree Neutral
Agre
e Stronglyagree
Academic writing tasks No
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ree Topic sentences/supporting details
1Paragraphs2Summaries3Letters4Critical appreciation5Reports6Narrative essays7Descriptive essays8Argumentative essays9Expository essays10B: Which of the following problems do you face in your
academic writing tasks?
Strongly disag
ree
Disagr
ee Neutral
Agre
e Strongly
agree
ItemsNo
Vocabulary1Spellings2
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Articles 3Punctuation4Prepositions5Suffixes / prefixes6Irregular verbs7Question words8Grammar9Organisation of ideas 10C: Which of the following are the reasons for your weak
academic writing skills?
Strongly disag
ree
Disagr
ee Neutral
Agre
e Strongly
agree
ItemsNo
Low proficiency in the target language1Lack of language courses at Taif University2Teachers' lack of interest in writing tasks3Limited opportunities to practice English outside the classroom
4Interference of your mother tongue5
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Inappropriate teaching methods6Lack of writing practice at
Taif University 7Use of Arabic in the classrooms8Lack of audio visual aids in the classrooms9Insufficient use of
dictionaries 10
D: Which of the following steps are necessary to solve the
above-mentioned problems ?Strongly disag
ree
Disagr
ee Neutral
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Using multiple teaching techniques1Using pair/group work 2Using English as a medium3Diagnosing students' problems in academic writing4Frequent use of modern
teaching facilities 5Additional coaching facilities for weaker
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Javid, C.Z., Farooq, U., & Umer, M. (2013). An Investigation of Saudi EFL learners' Writing Problems: A Case Study along Gender-lines. Kashmir Journal of Language Research, 16(1), 179-203.
Timely correction of students' errors7Increased language courses8Using peer reviews 9Frequent dictionary usage 10
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