Giovanna Milanesi 'Narratological analysis of the poem Aṃdhere meṇ of Gajānan Mādhav Muktibodh'
Universität Hamburg
Narratological analysis of the poem AṂDHERE MEṆ of
Gajānan Mādhav Muktibodh
Giovanna Milanesi
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ABSTRACT:
This study is about 'Aṃdhere meṇ' of Gajānan Mādhav Muktibodh. My essay is based on
narratological analysis: I will consider the long poem, with its language based on powerful
oneiric images and symbols and its continuously shifting from echoes of reality and
nightmares, as a story narrated by the poet to a reader.
By the use of a kind of analysis usually employed in film studies, (mainly based on the
analysis of the characters as first described by Yakovlevich Propp and then developed by
Joseph Campbell and Christopher Vogler) I will try to give evidence to the fact that the
structural cohesion of the poem is based on its solid narrative structure that orients the reader
through the various stanzas in spite of the difficulties of the symbolic language.
Using then the actantial model of A. J. Greimas I will trace the relation between the various
characters that appear, pointing out as one of the main theme on which the poem is
constructed is the quest of the eternal, never reached, supreme possibility of expression.
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INTRODUCTION
When reading Muktibodh's poems, I always felt that his complexity and the depth of his
poetry should place him far beyond the Hindi literature of that period. Undoubtely Muktibodh
is one of the most significant representatives of world literature and at almost fifty years after
his death remains unaltered his ability of speaking to the modern, contemporary man. His
'contemporaneity' makes us feel as his poems were written in the universal language of
mankind: perhaps it is his ability to go to the deepest of the unconscious to face and describe
its nightmares and dreams, or the clarity by which he reveals his hopes and failures.
In this study on Muktibodh, I was deeply influenced by the essay of Mariola Offredi in
'Three tendencies of contemporary Hindi poetry', in which she offers a structural analysis of
the poem. I appreciate her rigourous methodology that leads the reader far beyond the most
evident, apparent meaning and that goes into the construction of the poem itself and into the
personal use of the language by Muktibodh. After having read Mariola Offredi's study I had
the desire to use a kind of methodology that would have allowed me to see in a clear way the
structure beneath the test; instead of using structural analysis, though, I felt that a kind of
analysis based on narratology would have better described the complexity of the poem.
An extremely interesting characteristic of Muktibodh's poetry is that every immage is
rendered in a 'visual' language: his poems appear mostly as a series of visions witnessed by
the poet and communicated to the reader. Moreover, Aṃdhere meṇ, his longest poem, is
structured as a story with a beginning, an end and a series of actions performed by a main
character. The story on which the poem is constructed is so well structured that orients the
reader in spite of the difficulties of the language: we can also say that part of the 'beauty' of
the poem lays in this contrast between the difficulties of the language and the extreme
'legibility' of the story.
All this moved me to attempt a 'narratological' analysis of the poem: in this essay I consider
the poem mainly as a text constructed on a narration, from this basic consideration I will try to
disclose in the poem its multiple levels of significance.
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1) THE POEM
Aṃdhere meṇ is the longest poem of Muktibodh. It was composed in a span of ten years time:
its composition began in Nāgpur in 1953 and was completed in Rājnāndgānv in 1963. The
poem was first published in Muktibodh's first volume of poems 'Cānd kā muṇh ṭheṛhā hai'
that was edited in 1964 by Śrīkānt Varmā with an introduction of Śamśer Bahādur Siṇh. Some
times before his premature death, occurred in September 1964, Muktibodh asked the editor to
include in the volume the long poem 'Āśaṅkā ke dvīp: aṃdhere meṇ' changing its title in
'Aṃdhere meṇ'. Since then many edition of Muktibodh's poems have been published. I used
for my work the poem in the volume 'Pratinidhi Kavitāeṇ' edited by Aśok Vājpeyī in 1984.
The poems is written in 8 chapters, each chapter is divided in various stanzas of different
length, separated by a space or a dotted line. Here is a brief summary of the events described
in every chapter:
1. In a dark room somebody is walking, the poet can hear this person but can not see him
because he is 'on the other side of the wall'. The plaster of the wall falls down and forms the
image of a face.
Outside of the city, the image of a face appears on the surface of a pond. A magic cave opens
and inside the cave there is a man. The poet recognizes the man as the supreme possibility of
the self-expression.The poet asks him some questions but the winds blows off his torch and he
is thrown into the dark.
2. The poet awakes in the dark as somebody is knocking at the door. He knows that the person
knocking is the same man that was in the cave but he does not want to open the door. Then,
when he resolves to open, he sees nobody outside. A 'bird of the night' tells him that the man
is gone away, he says also that that man is the 'supreme expression' of the poet and that he is
his teacher.
3. The poet does not understand if he is awake or still dreaming. He hears a music and goes to
the veranda: there he sees a band of phantom-like persons. He recognizes among them the
same people that in daytime are governing the city: journalists, poets, ministers...
Seeing him staring at them they try to kill him. The poets runs away through the alleys.
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4. The poet awakes, revealing us that all what happened before was a dream. He realizes that a
curfew has been imposed in the city. He runs through the alleys, then he comes to a bargad
tree. There he sees a very poor man that lives under the tree. The man seems mad, but in the
nights he regains his mind and sings a song in which he reproaches his mind for being
material and egoist and for having in this way killed his ideals. Hearing these words, he poet
gets very angry and confused and begins to fight with him.
5. A bargad leaf falling his shoulder scares the poet. He runs again away through the alleys
while gun-shots are heard. Then he comes to a barred house that has stone stairs that lead
underground. He goes underground and ends up in a cave. On the wall of the cave some gems
are shining and a waterfall flows. He realizes that the gems are his experiences, his sorrows
and thoughts, all these lived in solitude.
6. The poets escapes from a soldier and a squad of tanks. Then he feels as if something is
attracting him: he follows this attraction and comes to a statue of Tilak that begins to bleed.
Then he sees something moving, wrapped in a sack: the moving figure stands up: he is
Gandhi. Gandhi holds a child in the arm and hands him to the poet. In the poet's arms, the
child begins to cry louder and louder while the poet feels a growing happiness. Then the child
disappears and the poet finds himself holding bunches of sunflowers. Then the flowers turn in
a gun.
The poet enters the house: somebody is lying on the floor, shot to death: it is an artist, a
solitary poet. The poet runs away but it is caught by some soldiers that torture him.
7. He is released. He feels the need to search for 'new companions'. He tries to collect some
brightening stones to compose flowers of light, but trying to do this he feels the 'non
expressivity of words'. He runs again away in the alleys. In these alleys he sees some people
walking. He tries to pass through them but he always finds himself at the bottom of the line.
Then somebody puts a flier in his hands: he reads what is written in the flier and feels as all
his own thoughts were expressed in it. He finds in itself a new reason of life and feels himself
as transformed.
8. In various images is described a revolution in the city: the fire, the intellectuals and thinkers
that try to hide somewhere.There are some powerful images, as 'dark colored' men forging a
burning wheel. Then the dream breaks and the poet awakes. He realize that he is in his room
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but he feels as he has been visited by a lover. He goes to the veranda and sees the man that he
was searching at the beginning of the poem, but just at the moment the poet sees him, the man
disappears in the crowd.
2) MARIOLA OFFREDI'S STRUCTURAL ANALYSYS OF THE POEM
In 'Three tendencies of contemporary Hindi poetry'1 the Italian scholar Mariola Offredi gives
an interesting analysis of the poem. I will brief summarize the main points of her study in
which she uses structural analysis to individuate a line of interpretation of the poem.
Interpretation is important in Muktibodh's poetry because he uses such a lot of symbols and
oneiristic images that he is not often immediately comprehensible for the reader.
M. Offredi indicates as a central axis in Muktibodh's poem the 'conflict'. The conflict
expressed here is the one experienced by the generation of Muktibodh: a generation of
educated people that, due to the growing unemployement, had to live far beneath the welfare
of the upper-middle class and sometimes in condition of poverty. Sharing the ideals and the
culture of the upper middle class but excluded from the benefits of a higher social condition,
these intellectuals tried to partecipate to the social conflicts.
She examines then in detail three main symbols in the poem: the bargad, the cave and the
alleys. She states that these symbolic images are constructed by a multiple sovrapposition of
many images with the same metaphoric meaning, building up what she calls 'polysemantic'
symbols, made by a sort of 'condensation of images'.
The first symbol taken in the study is the bargad tree. The bargad was one of the main
symbols in 'Cānd kā muṇh ṭheṛhā hai' ('The Face of the Moon is Crooked', another famous
poems of Muktibodh), but in 'Aṃdhere meṇ' is used less often and with the meaning of a
stable, reassuring place.
The symbol of the cave is much more structured and it represents the 'inner life'. She states
that this symbol is gradually build up by using a set of images with the same symbolic
meaning: the room, the brain, the heart, the cave. This four images can be divided into two
groups each composed of two related words that have a sort of opposition, following the
scheme:
1 M.Offredi, C.Cossio, S.Vannucchi, Tre tendenze della poesia hindī contemporanea, Cesviet, Milan 19806
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cave-room heart-brain
In this four-words scheme we can observe a double parallelisms: the first between the 1° and
the 3° term (cave, heart) that can be opposed to the second, made of the 2° and the 4° (room,
brain). The cave has the meaning of natural shelter and the heart represents the source of the
feelings, in opposition we have the room as a man-built shelter and the mind as the source of
thoughts. M. Offredi described the first two terms as belonging to the instinct and desire and
linked to the world of unconscious, while the seconds is belonging to the human mind and to
the conscious: this parallelism establishes as the central axes of the poem the conflict also in
the terms of conflict between the conscious and the unconscious.
The third symbol is the alley. Here M. Offredi traces two different phases in the formation of
the symbol: first a negative phase, in which the image is described with a feeling of
suffocation and fear, and the second positive when the alleys become the place of the political
fight and a relative solution of the social conflict. She considered the alleys as having the
same symbolic value of the 'labyrinth': an expression of the mental 'periplus' of the poet that
finds a way to get out only when he is ready to recognize the alleys as the place where the
fight for liberation of the oppressed poor people takes place. Accepting to participate in this
battle would definitely carry the poet out of his 'inner-self' leading so to a resolution of the
conflict.
Other symbols that appear in the poem: Tilak that represents the death of the ideals of the
upper middle that is somehow silent towards the civil repression that took place after the
independence. Ghandi represents the middle class that has been the leading force of the
independence movement. As far as the figure of the 'mad' is concerned, M. Offredi considers
the 'mad' as the poet himself that awakes his consciousness and wants to take part to
revolution, in agree with the interpretation of Bhagvān Siṃh 2 and Aśok Cakrdhar3.
The great contribution of M. Offredi's study is the use of structural analysis to disclose the
meaning of the long poem that remain, otherwise, quite obscure. Muktibodh poetry indeed is
not so easily understandable for the reader due to the use of symbolic and metaphoric images:
it is a poetry that describes and 'paints' the objects always beyond the level of reality.
Offredi offres an interpretation of the poem as the story of an evolution: the progressive
change of the poet that from an life based on individualism comes to social and political2 In Sarvnām, February 1973.3 Aśok Cakrdhar, Muktibodh kī Kāviprakriyā, MacMillan, Delhi 1975.7
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involvement. At the time in which the study of M. Offredi was published Indian literary
criticism too was very focused on the social involvement of the literates.
There are of course other possible interpretations. In my point of view the mean theme of the
poem is the sense of the writing itself and the possibility of expression for the poet. It is just
this sense that makes the poem still so meaninful for contemporary man. In order to see how
this theme is present and elaborated in the poem I thought as necessary to study at first the
narrative structure on which the poem is based, a narration that make us consider the poem as
a story.
3) THE POET AS 'HERO'
In Aṃdhere meṇ, as in other poems of Muktibodh, the reader is continuously shifted from the
world and images of reality to those of pure onirism. The things are often animated, the
location and the space change in very unexpected ways; the language, moreover, is often
difficult to follow with its alternative use of common terms and difficult sanscritized
compound words. Within this complexity, what has the function of orienting the reader is the
story that the poem tells, its plot: the poems is in fact a long description of an action
performed of a main character (the poet) with an aim (the meeting of a person) through
various phases structured with a beginning, a climax and a final phase. For all this factors we
can define Aṃdhere meṇ not only a poem but also a 'story' and defining the poem as a 'story'
presupposes that we can trace in it the structural characteristics common to all the stories.
These 'common characteristics' of all the stories were identified, as it is known, by the
formalist Vladimir Yakovlevich Propp in his 'Morphology of the folktale'.4 Propp analyzed the
plot of the Russian folk tales and identified their irreducible narrative elements: he
demonstrated that all the folktales are structured in 31 set of actions perfomed that he calls
'functions' (for example the function of 'absentation', when the hero of the story leaves his
country or family, or the function of 'interdiction', when an interdiction is addressed to the
hero, and so on).
Based on the work of Propp, Joseph Campbell in 'The hero with a Thousand Faces'5
demonstrated the recurrence of universal mythological 'patterns' in many narrative forms all4 Vladimir Yakovlevich Propp, Morphology of the Folktale,1928.5 Joseph Campbell, The Hero with a Thousand Faces, Pantheon Press, New York, 1949.8
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around the world. Every story is based on a pattern that is basically universal but that is
everytime adapted to the social structure of the culture in which it is told. This universal
pattern, or 'universal story', is developed on the various adventures of a 'universal hero' that
has to reach to his task passing through various stages. For Campbell, the characteristics of
the 'hero' are timeless and universal and so are the stages of his 'performance': the 'call to
adventure', the 'receiving help', the the 'meeting the Goddess' or the 'atonment with the father',
the 'return'. So every story narrates all the same actions of an hero that leaves his place or
family for gaining some kind of knowledge and after having achieved his task takes this
knowledge back to his country or place.
Inspired by the works of Campbell, Christopher Vogler6 has developed the scheme of the
basic plot units. The actions of the hero have for him two aspects: the external journey that the
hero perform to gain his goal and the internal journey where he gains a kind of knowledge.
The beginning of the plot is always based on the 'call to adventure'. After this starting point,
all the major events are 'turning points' for the sucession of the different acts of the story ( the
plot is almost always divided into three acts): important turning points are the 'crossing the
threshold (the hero is at this point far from his land/his home/his entourage) and the 'coming
into a special world' (being far from his ordinary world, the hero experiments the unknown),
then the 'road back to ordinary world' (the hero returns with something that he has gained in
his adventure). The 'climax' (or the 'crisis point') coincides with the 'resurrection', the 'final
attempt' of the hero against his enemies before the victory and the 'return with the elixir' or
'mastery'.
Vogler traces a scheme of the main points of the plot in which, based on the division on three
acts, is traced the correspondance between the actions that the hero performs (external
journey) and his degree of awareness (internal journey):
Parts External Journey Internal Journey
Act I Ordinary World Limited Awareness
Call to Adventure Increased Awareness
Refusal (or Reluctance) Reluctance to Change
Meeting the Mentor Overcoming
Crossing the Threshold Committing
Act II Tests, Allies, Enemies Experimenting
Approach to the In-most Cave Preparing6 Christopher Vogler, The Writer's Journey: Mythical Structures for Storytellers and Screeenwriters, M. Wiese
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(or Second Threshold)
Ordeal Big Change
Reward Consequences
The Way Back Dedication
Act III Resurrection Final Attempt
Return with the Elixir (tobenefit the Ordinary World)
Mastery
In order to see if this structure can be applied to the plot of the poem, we should divide
Aṃdhere meṇ into basic sequences: as we have two main characters, I will indicate the poet as
A and the unknown person (that 'master' that is the 'object' of the poet's quest) as B. Here is a
summary of the main sequences:
1. In a dark room A hears somebody walking. On the wall a face appears.
2. In a pond a face appears on the surface of the water.
3. In the wood a cave opens. A enters the cave with a torch and sees B. He recognizes B and
asks some questions.
4. Asking the questions he has violated something: the wind punishes him by blowing out the
light of the torch and throwing him in the dark.
5. He wakes up hearing somebody at the door. He knows that it is B. He is afraid of meeting
him. Then he resolves to open the door.
6.There is nobody outside. A bird of the night tells him that B is his 'teacher' and suggest him
to search for him.
7. A awakes but is not sure if he is really awake or still dreaming. He hears the notes of a
musical band that is approaching. He goes to the balcony and sees a band composed of
phantoms. He recognize among them some important persons of the city.
8. The phantoms realize that A has recognized them and try to kill him.
9. A awakes from what reveals to be a dream. In the city a curfew has been imposed. He runs
away.
10. A meets a mad man under the bargad tree A fight with the mad because he does not want
to hear what the mad is singing.
11. A leaf of the bargad tree fall on A shoulder. A is frightened and runs away.
12. A comes to a barred house. Under the house there is a natural cave. A descends into the
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cave and finds some jewels and precious stones covered with water. He takes some stones into
the hand.
13. The road is patrolled by a soldier, A sees also some tanks. A runs away.
14. A feels something that is attracting him, he follows this attraction and comes in front of a
statue of Tilak.
15. The statue begins to bleed. There is a shot. A runs away
16. A sees a sack that is moving: the figure of Gandhi emerges from the sack. Gandhi hands
him a baby
17. A goes away with the baby that cries louder and louder. The baby turns into a bunch of
sunflowers and then in a rifle.
18. A sees an open door and enters. In the room there is an artist that has been shot dead.
19. A walks down the stair but is caught and tortured.
20. A is released. He takes some stones from the soil and tries to make flowers of light, but he
cannot finish them.
21. A runs away. He sees lines of people walking while he find himself alone.
22. Somebody gives him a leaflet and he is surprised as he reads in the leaflet his own
thoughts being expressed. He feels as transformed.
23. A hears some shots, the city is put on fire. The wicked ones hide themselves. Miraculous
weapons defeat the enemies.
24. A awakes and finds himself being alone in his room. In his heart and brain, though, there
are some holes that reflect the light. He feels transformed.
25. A goes on the balcony and sees B going away.
After this division of the plot, we can compare these basic sequences to those described in
Vogel's scheme and we will find that the scheme enumerates exactly the sequential order of
our plot.
The first stage, the 'ordinary world' is not described in the poem but it is only assumed: this
ordinary world is the space in which both the narrator and the reader are situated before the
beginning of the narration. It is this 'starting space', this ordinary world that will give a sense
to all the further sequences of narration because it represents the normality that can make us
be aware of the dreams.
The sequences 1, 2 and 3 are three different renderings of the 'call to adventure' that provokes
an 'increased awareness' in A that is reflected in the 'increasing interest' of the reader that is
caught by the images.
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The sequences 4 and 5 express the 'refusal' and 'reluctance' toward the 'call to adventure',
also the 'prohibition' appears because of the 'reluctance to change' of A.
The sequence 6 expresses the 'meeting of the mentor' (the bird of the night) and the
overcoming of the reluctance.
The sequences 7 and 8 are the first 'crossing of the threshold' that precedes 'the entering in the
special world'. They define the definitive 'committing' of A to the adventure: having being
discovered by the phantoms, he has no other choice than a further action.
The sequences 9, 10 and 11 represents the 'test, allies and enemies'. The enemies are
represented by the soldier of the curfew from which A runs away, the 'test' is the song of the
madman that provokes in A an emotional reaction, the allies are represented by the bargad
leaf. A in this phases is 'experimenting', it is also described for the first time in the poem a
physical contact (with the mad during the fight and then with the leaf that falls on his
shoulder)
The sequence 12 is the 'approach to the in-most cave' that is also the 'crossing of the second
threshold'. The apparently absence of action of this sequence is 'preparing' for the climax that
will follow.
The sequences from 13 to 20 represent actually the 'ordeal' and constitute the climax of the
narration. It is through what happens in these sequences that A will change so much that in the
following part of the poem will be completely different, we can say it has moved from the
intimism to commitment.
The sequences 21 and 22 represent the 'reward' (A find his place among the other people) that
is the result of his inner change.
The sequence 23 is the phase of 'the road back' to home: here A can witness the changes that
are happening and can increase his 'dedication'.
The sequence 24 indicates the 'resurrection': A is as pervaded by a new life.
The sequence 25 represents the 'return with the elixir', here A sees B for the last time. He will
never meet him though: he has now the complete awareness of his own 'quest' and is so ready
to assume it and go alone. Apparently the poem finishes at the same point of its beginning
because A will never meet B (he sees B going away) but a quest that has begun in the dark
finishes here in the light of the day.
If at the beginning of the poem we can assume that he object of the 'quest' of A can be the
meeting with B, in this final point we are prone to believe that the 'object' of A's quest is the
quest itself: our hero assumes and accepts his own 'recherche', knowing that probably this
search will never come to an end.
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To sum up, using a narratological analysis we reveal the solid, 'classic' narrative structure of
the poem, it is this narrative structure that directs the reader through the difficult language and
images of the poem.
This analysis, though, does not disclose the fundamental question that the reader can have in
his mind at the end of the poem. The poem finishes with A that sees B for the second time
and they will never meet, this raises in us a further questions: who is B, and who is
consequently A and, above all, what is the quest really about? And so at the end of the poem,
when the poet has found the object of his quest, is left no choice to the reader than begin his
own recherche.
4) THE POET AS 'ACTANT'
In the previous chapter I explained how narratological analysis can reveal the structure of the
plot, I also placed the poem in the typical scheme of narration defined as the 'journey' of a
'hero' that leaves the known world and faces a series of adventures in order to gain a kind of
knowledge by which he will be transformed. However, if this kind of analysis can make us
better understand the narrative structure of the poem, on the other side it does not give an
answer to the questions about what do the characters represent. In order to answer to this
question we will now consider the various characters of the poem not as 'persons' but as a
representation of the various 'class of actions' that 'generates' the various actions performed
by them.
The analysis presented in this chapter is based on the 'actantial model' elaborated by A. J.
Greimas7. For him the structure of a story is based on a binary opposition (for exemple, hero
end villain, etc.), for this reason is possible in every culture and time to trace in the stories a
common 'grammar' defined as 'enunciation-spectacle': 'the content of the actions changes all
the time, the actors vary, but the enunciation-spectacle remains always the same, for its
permanence is guaranteed by the fixed distribution of the roles' 8 So the actions, the
characters, the place of an action can change, but the 'enuciation-spectacle' remains
unchanged. The permanence of this enunciation-spectacle is made constant by a fixed7 A. J. Greimas, Sémantique Structurale, Larousse, Paris, 1966.8 op. cit. p. 17313
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distribution of roles and is manifested through various 'actors' that embody it, in this point of
view the characters of a narration are not to be considered as 'persons' but as 'actants', factors
that move the action of the narration. As at the basis of the human conceptual world there is a
'basic opposition', in the narration, this kind of opposition becomes a narrative sequence
composed by two actants whose relationship is of opposition and this opposition generates the
plot.
The 'actantial categories' proposed by Greimas are so based on a 'binary oppositions' that
generate all the actions in a story. This opposition can be present in various way, here a brief
scheme:
1) Subject versus Object (for example: the prince wants the princess and faces various
adventures to fulfill his desire): this is the common scheme for the stories of 'Quest' and is
based on the 'Axis of desire' since the desire of an object is the cause of the actions of the
plot.
2) Sender (Destinateur) versus Receiver (Destinataire) (for example: the transmission of a
knowledge): it is the scheme used in the story of 'Comunication' and based on the 'Axis of
transmission' . The sender is willing to establish a junction between the subject and the object:
the receiver is the element that benefits from achieving a junction between the subject and the
object.
3) Helper (Adjuvant) versus Opponent (Opposant): in the quest or in the search of
knowledge, the main character comes in contact with other characters that can have a
'positive' or a 'negative' role toward the task that he has to perform. This constitutes the 'Axis
of the stories of power', the opposition between 'helpers' or 'opponents' will make the plot
develop into the various 'adventures' that the characters of the story will have to pass through.
Other axis of actions in which ways a oppositional relation is expressed are the oppositions
'command/acceptance' and 'prohibition/violation'.
I have made a scheme based on the actantial analysis of Andhere meṇ. In the scheme I refere
to the main character as 'the poet' and person that wants to meet him as 'the mysterious
man'.
The mysterious man Sender The mysterious manperforms various actions in
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order to meet the poet.
The poet Receiver He is always passive andperforms an action only whenis compelled to. Toward themysterious man he hasactions of 'disjunction' (hedoes not want to meet him orfail to meet him).
Wall of the room, door of thecave, water of the pond
Helper They give information to thepoet.
Wind Opponent The wind throws the poet inthe dark, we are on the axis'prohibition/violation' ofwhich punishment is aconsequence.
Bird of the Night Helper He gives an information about the mysterious man, as a consequencet the poet will look outside the room forthe first time.
Tolstoj Object of desire We can define it 'object of desire' , the 'non-written novel mentioned is what the poet want to give to the world.
Band of Phantoms Opponent On the axis of punishment/violation (they want to kill the poet because he has seen who they really are)
Mad man Other personification of theSender
He represents another voice of the sender: he increases the'self-knowledge' of the poet showing him the contradictions of his mind.
Bargad leaf Helper It gives an information andprovokes an action: the poet,frightened from the leaf thatfalls on his shoulder, will runaway and will come to the oldhouse.
Precious stones Objects of desire. They are the poet's 'inner thoughts and sorrows' that he wants to leave to the world. The poet takes them into the hands ( action of
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conjunction). At the end of the poem he will try to use them to make 'flowers of light'.
Soldiers and curfew Opponent The axes is punishment for aviolation
Tilak Object of desire The sight of the statue provokes intense emotion in the poet. He performs an action of conjunction (he embraces the statue and is transformed by this embrace)
Gandhi Helper He will give an object (a baby) to the poet. Then the baby will transform itself intoother symbolic objects.
Child, Sunflowers, Gun Helper The objects have a symbolic value, they represent the interior evolution of the poet.
Death artist Other personification of theSender
As the mad, he represents the 'sender' or a further stage for the poet to reach the sender: it is the end of a solitary way of conceiving poetry that is detached from the real world.
Soldiers that torture the poet Opponent The axis is punishment/violation
People in the roads Helper They will give to the poet a leaflet.
Leaflet Object of desire Reading the leaflet will provoke wonder in the poet as he recognizes in it his 'same thoughts' as expressed .This will lead to the final action.
Fire, Sticks, Embers Helper (Allies) They are actors of transformation of the externalworld.
Through this scheme we can observe three axis:
1. The axis of 'transmission': the main characters of the narration are the poet and the
mysterious man. As we have already pointed out, the poet's position toward the action
displayed in the poem is rather passive: he seems to perform an action only when is
compelled to by the circumstances.
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Following the 'actantial categories' proposed by Greimas, we can define the
mysterious man as 'the sender' of a message and the poet as the receiver of that
message. We can think to the main axis of the narration as an axis of 'transmission'.
The relation between the mysterious man and the poet is a relation of 'disjunction': at
the beginning of the poem the poet in not 'ready' to meet the mysterious man; in the
middle the sender is represented by the mad man and there is a conflict between the
two. The poem ends with a further disjunction as the misterious man disappears into
the crowd just when the poet wants to meet him, but this relation of disjunction is here
accepted by the poet: after his long adventure he has finally met the possibility of
expression (symbolized by 'the sense of having met a lover'). The possibility of
expression, though, is also the 'object of desire' of the poet, as I will illustrate in the
point 3. Since the desire can never be completely fulfilled it constitutes the everlasting
motivation for the artist's tension toward the expression.
2. The axis of power: in the axis of power we find helpers and opponents toward the
task that the poet has to accomplish.
The helpers can be divided in two categories: the first category is represented by
human beings or humanized animals or also things (as they are capable of provoking
events) that have the function of 'givers': they give to the poet information or tools that
will enable him to perform further actions.
The second category is represented by objects that are used by the poet. These objects
often transform themselves into other objects and seem even capable of acting
autonomously as sentient beings. In the universe of the poem the objects and the living
beings are extrapolated from the reality and seem to live an independent live tracing a
net of mutual correspondences; the effect that this 'independence' of the objects has on
the reader can be defined as what Shklovsky called 'ostranie'9: the objects loose their
real function and create a sense of defamiliarization from the reality. As a consequence
the reader loses his sense of reality and is dragged into the personal universe of the
poet.
The opponents are actors of a 'punishment' that follows a 'violation'. They inevitably
cause a 'turning' in the action of the main character, stressed by the repeated verses:
'bhāgtā maiṇ dam choḍ, ghūm gayā kaī moḍ' ('breathlessly I run, many corners I have
turned') and a change in the scenario.
3. The axis of desire. We can define as 'objects' of desire in the poem those persons or
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objects toward which the poet performs an action of 'conjunction'. If we consider all
the 'objects of desire' present in the poem, we easily see that they are all symbolically
connected with what we can define as the 'self-expression trough the written word',
that is the main aim of the poet. This 'possibility of self-expression toward writing is
only reached in the last stanza of the poem and is represented, as we have already
seen, as 'the promise of a lover that will come to meet him'.
Different sense has the statue of Tilak which is not connected with the 'possibility of
expression'. Despite this I have classified Tilak's statue as 'object of desire' due to the
action of conjunction that the poet has with it through which he will be transformed.
There is also another meaning in this Tilak's statue, I will explain better this latter
meaning in the last chapter.
To sum up: in the third chapter I have shown that the poem is based on a 'classic' narrative
structure; in this fourth chapter I have used the actantial model to define the axis on which the
actions of the narration are structured, I also pointed out how in addition to the huge use of
symbols the 'defamiliarization' of the objects adds a sense of 'ostranie'. I could state now that
the 'classic' narrative structure on which the poem is based acts as a sorte of factor of
'orientation' for the reader that leads him in a poetical universe pervaded by a deep sense of
'ostranie'.
5) THE POEM AS A REPRESENTATION
In the previous chapters I analyzed the poem as a set of 'actions' that are performed and then I
tried to find out which are the 'axis of action' that move the various characters of the poem.
Now I would like to focus on the 'characters' and to examine their traits and characteristics
that define them. In order to do this I have identified the phrases though which they are
described, searching all the expressions that shape their attributes and 'qualifies' them.
We look at first the espressions that define the mysterious man, he is described as:
'koī ek' ('somebody'); 'tilismī khoh giraftār koī ek' ('somebody imprisoned in the magical
cave'); 'gahan rahasyamay aṃdhakār dhvani-sā' ('like a deep mysterious dark sound'); 'koī
anjānī an-pahcānī ākriti' ( 'a non known not-recognized form'); sāmne ('standing in front');
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'rahasya sākṣāt' ('visible mystery'); 'rahasya vyakti' ('mysterious person'); 'merī abhivyakti'
('my expression'); 'pūrṇ avasthā vah' ('the completed state he'); 'nij-saṃbhāvnāoṇ, nihit
prabhāoṇ, pratibhāoṇ kī mere paripūrṇ kā āvirbhāv' ('self-possibility, internal light, complete
manifestation of my radiance'); 'ātmā kī pratimā' ('image of the soul').
When the narrator meets the Bird of the Night, this will refer to the mysterious man as 'terī
pūrṇatan abhivyakti' ('your complete, supreme expression') and will say: 'terī guru hai' ('is
your teacher').
In the final stanza when the poet sees the mysterious man for the last time he defines him
again as 'param abhivyakti' ('supreme expression'); 'an-khojī samriddh kā vah param utkarṣ'
('supreme expression of an unesplored richness'); 'maiṇ uskā śiṣy hūṇ' ('I am his disciple');
'vah merī guru hai' ('he is my teacher').
All these expressions used to describe the mysterious man seem to suggest that we can see
him as the representation of the unexpressed possibility of expression personified in the figure
of a teacher that renders manifested what is still unknown to the poet. We can also notice that
the attitude of the poet toward the mysterious man is at the first stage of fear and refusal.
This attitude after the serie of events will change and in the last stanza he will accept him as
the everlasting search of possibility of expression that can never be reached because when the
awareness comes it is already 'lost' ('khoī huī').
As we have already noticed before, the poet is always passive and his characteristics are
never defined: we can say, on the contrary, that what defines him is just this 'lack of
definitions'. This undefined passivity renders possible for the author to set the poem as a first-
person narration so that every event narrated to the reader is filtered by the poet's perceptions.
In this way the reader is dragged into the hallucinatory universe of the poet's thoughts and
nightmares: the minute, obsessive description of the hallucinations is like a well-set stage that
makes him feel the action as suspended in a sense of void, as also undefined is the time in
which the poem take place, introduced as the everlasting present of the beginning 'Ziṃdagī
ke...' ('….of the life').
Other representation of the attainment of the self-awareness of the poet are the madman and
the artist, both expression of his consciousness and of the different stages of a process of
elaboration of a personal way of expression. In this latter sense they can be considred also a
representation of the 'sender' because they are that voice of self awareness that the poet is not
yet ready to hear.
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The madman is a man caught by madness during the day but that regains his mind at night.
In a night-song he deplores his own mind as he considers himself somehow guilty for the bad
situation of the country: 'O mere ādarśavādī man, aur mere siddhāṃtavādī man' ('O my
idealist mind, o my doctrinaire mind'); 'udaraṃbhari ban anātma ban gae' ('voracious, you
have become without soul'); 'bahut bahut zyādā liyā, diyā bahut bahut kam; mar gayā deś,
are, jīvit rah gae tum' ('you have taken much, very little you have given; the country is dead,
oh, you are alive').
What this 'sense of being guilty' towards the nation means is well explained by the
comparison between him and Ajīgart, father of Śunaḥśep. The paragon with Ajīgart that
committed the crime of selling his own son for feeding his stomach10 reinforces the sense of
the awareness to have done too less for the others, having betrayed the country for a personal
advantage. The madman is described as poor and 'miserable' and he lives under the bargad
tree, used also in other poems of Muktibodh as symbol of the unprivileged classes, that poor
people toward which the betrayal has been consumed.
The dead artist, is another representation of the inner consciousness of the poet about having
been isolated and detached from the people. 'Ekāṃt-priy yah merā paricit vyakti hai' ('Lover
of solitude, this is a person that I know'); 'sacāī thī sirf ek ahsās vah kalākāt thā' ('truth was
only a feeling, he was an artist'); 'kāry-kśamatā se vaṃcit vyaktitv calātā thā apnā asaṃg
astitv' ('deprived of the possibility of action, he was conducting his solitary life'). The
following verses: 'svapn va jňān va jīvanānubhav jo halcal kartā thā rah-rah dil meṇ kisī ko
bhī de nahīṇ pāyā thā vah to. Śūny ke jal meṇ ḍūb gayā nīrav ho nahīṇ pāyā upayog uskā'
(dream and knowledge and perception of life that flashing uproared in his heart, he could give
to anybody. Sank in the water of the void, motionless, he could not use them') express the
identification with the poet which is still unable to use his art for the benefit of others.
The death of the artist represents a new stage in the artistic consciousness of the poet 'mar
gayā ek yug, mar gayā ek jīvanādarś' (death is an era, death is an ideal of life'); after having
met the dead artist the poet will be less passive and will movs to the action that will lead to a
complete change.
I have defined various object and even persons are 'object of desire', they represent
something toward which the poet expresses a kind of desire.
The figure of Tolstoj appears in the sky and looks down to the earth, symbol that is explained10 The legend tells thet Śunaḥśep was given by his father Ajīgart for the sacrifice instead the king's son Rohit.
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in the verses that follow: śāyad, tālstāy numā koī vah ādmī aur hai, mere kisī bhītar dhāge kā
ākhirī chor vah, analikhe mere upanyās kā keṃdrīy saṃvedan dabī hāy hāy numā, śāyad
tālstāy numā ('perhaps that man resembling Tolstoj is something else, is the extreme end of
my internal thread, central feeling of my unwritten novel in the form of a repressed hay hay,
perhaps, in the form of Tolstoj'). Tolstoj represents thus the 'unwritten novel' of the poet, the
possibility of expression through the written words that has not been reached.
If we compare the description of the others 'objects of desire' we will see that they are all
connected with the possibility of expression through writing. The precious stones that he
finds in the second cave under the inhabited house 'dīpti meṇ valayat ratn ve nahīṇ hai/
anubhav, vednā, vivek-niṣkarṣ, mere hī apne yahāṃ paḍe hue haiṇ vicāroṇ kī raktim agni ke
maṇi ve prāṇ-jal-prapāt meṇ ghulte haiṇ pratipal' ('surrounded by light they are not jewels;
experience, grief, inference of the reason are lying here by me. Those gems of the red fire of
the thoughts that in the waterfall of the life are dissolved at every moment'). The poet is
pained for not having used them, for not having used his in a way that could help the people:
'maiṇne unheṇ guhā-vās de diyā lok-hit kṣetr se kar diyā vaṃcit janopayog se varjit kiyā, aur
niṣiddh kar diyā koh meṇ ḍāl diyā ('I made them inhabitants of the cave, I deprived the field
of the world-welfare: I prohibited them to be useful for the people, I put them in a cave').
In a further point of the poem, though, when the poet wants to use his means of expression, he
will discover that in order to reach the power of expression of the words the will is not
enough: 'acānak vicitr sphūrti se maiṇ bhī zamīn par paṛe hue camakīle patthar lagātār
cunkar bijlī ke phūl banāne kī kośiś/ kartā hūṇ. ... kiṃtu, asaṃtoṣ mujhko hai gahrā,
śabdābhivyakti- abhāv kā saṃket. kāvy-camatkār utnā hī raṃgīn paraṃtu, ṭhaṃḍā. ('suddenly
I also with agility the dazzling stones in the soil continuously collecting, I try to make flowers
of light...but I feel a deep dissatisfaction, sign of a lack of expression of the word'). The poet
understands that the precious gems can not be used by him because of the lasting inner
contraddition 'are, in raṃgīn patthar- phūloṇ se merā kām nahīṇ calegā! Kyā kahūṇ, mastak-
kuṃḍ meṇ jaltī sat-cit-vednā_sacāī va galtī_ mastak-śirāoṇ meṇ tanāv din-rāt' ('oh, these
colored stone-flower will not do the work, What shall I say, in the well of the brain the pain of
being-awareness _ truth or error_in the veins of the brain the tension of day-night')
To fulfill his desire, to reach the supreme expression, he will have to follow the path
indicated him by the mysterious person at the beginning of the poem: 'ab abhivyakti ke sāre
khatre uṭhāne hī hoṇge.(...) pahuṃcnā hogā durgam pahāṛoṇ ke us par tab kahīṇ dekhne
mileṇgī hamko nīlī jhīl kī laharīlī thāheṇ jismeṇ ki pratipal kāṃptā rahtā aruṇ kamal ek'
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('now I will have to face all the danger of expression, I will have to reach the other side of
difficult mountains and so we will see somewhere the waving deepness of the blue lake in
which at every moment continuously tremble a reddish lotus').
Apart for being symbolized as 'object of desire', we find as well other referents to 'written
words' and the process of writing. When the bargad leaf falls on the poet's shoulder, for
instance, he says: 'kya vah saṃket, kya vah iśārā? Kya vah ciṭtḥī hai kisī kī? Bargad-ātmā kā
patr hai vah kya? ('Is it a signal, is an indication? Is it somebody's letter? Is it a letter from the
bargad-soul?'), giving an interesting parallelism between letter/leaf. Later, when he is caught
and tortured the torturers are trying to find 'bhītar kahīṇ par gaṛe hue gahre talghar aṃdar
chupe hue chāpākhāne ko kojo. Jahāṃki cupcāp khyāloṇ ke parce chapte rahte haiṇ' ('find the
print shop hidden in the underground, deeply hidden somewhere inside, where the leaflets of
the thoughts are continuously printed'); his thoughts are represented here as a leaflet and his
mind as a print shop. While suffering the pains of the torture he is feeling as 'bahut dūr mīloṇ
ke pār vahāṃ girtā hūṇ cupcāp patr ke rūp meṇ kisī ek jeb meṇ vah jeb... kisī ek pheṭ hue man
kī' ('very far away thousands miles I fall silently in the form of a letter in a pocket that
pocket... of a torn mind').
At the end of the poem he is walking among the people and somebody gives him a leaflet
'itne meṇ cupcāp koī ek de jātā parcā, koī gupt śakti hriday meṇ cupcāp kartī hai carcā!!
Maiṇ bahut dhyān se parḥtā hūṇ usko. Āścary! Usmeṇ to mere hī gupt vicār va dabī huī
saṃvedanāeṇ va anubhav pīṛaeṇ jagmagā rahī hai!!' ('in the meantime somebody secretly
gives me a leaflet, a secret force begins silently to talk in the heart!! I read it with much
attention. What a surprise! My own secret thoughts and my hidden sentiments and emotions
are brightening in it!!'). This seals an important point in the evolution of the poem because ut
will be this 'recognition' of his own thoughts in a leaflet given by others that will made him
discover the possibility of the word to become, from personal, universal: 'āsmān jhāṃktā hai
un syāh lakīroṇ ke bīc-bīc/ vākyoṇ kī pāṃtoṇ meṇ ākāś-gaṃgā-sī phailī/ śabdoṇ ke vyūhoṇ
meṇ jhilamil nakśatraṇ/ aur un tārak daloṇ meṇ to khiltā hai āṃgan' ('the sky is spying
through the black lines/ in the lines of the phrases spread the Milky-way/ in the arrangements
of words the star brightened/ and in that way in the constellations flowers a courtyard'). This
reference to the sky is a recalling of the image of Tolstoj (as we have seen the representation
of the unwritten novel of the poet) appearing from the sky. Now it is the poet that reaches the
sky 'Parcā parḥte hue uṛtā hūṇ havā meṇ,/cakravāt-gatiyoṇ meṇ ghūmtā hūṇ nabh-bhar,/
zamīn par ek sāth/ sarvatr sacet upasthit' ('read the leaflet I fly in the sky/ I turn in the sky in
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moving whirlwind/ on the earth together everywhere aware, present'). Having reached this
important point, a transformation will happen: transformation of the poet that finds his way of
expression and the transformation of the society in a sort of final justice, described as a
fantasmagoric dream rendered by powerful images.
The imagines of revolution end as the poet awakes the poet in his room, feeling the contact he
had with his 'object of desire' as the meeting with a lover came to him 'mano ki us kśaṇ/ atiśay
mridu kinhīṇ bāṃhoṇ ne ākar/ kas liyā thā mujhko/ us suapn-sparś kī, cuṃban-ghaṭnā kī yād
ā rahī hai, yād ā rahī hai!! Ajňāt praṇayinī kaun thī, kaun thī?' ('as in that moment/ very
sweet arms coming/ would have holding me/ so that touch of the dream, that kiss I am
remembering, I am remembering!! Who was the unknown lover, who was?').
After this, the conclusion: he will see for the last time the 'mysterious man': he will recognize
him but their meeting will never take place because the 'supreme expression' is always
followed but can never be reached: 'Param abhivyakti/ avirat ghūmtī hai jag meṇ/ patā nahīṇ
jāne kahaṃ, jāne kahaṃ/ vah hai.' ('The supreme expression/ restless goes in the world/ I do
not know where, I do not know where/ it is going').
Based on the contraddiction between the wish to use poetry to liberate the society from the
oppression and the inner captivation for an excaping from the nightmeres of the world, the
poems has the structure of a drama because it appears as based on conflict and duality. It
originates in the dark of the night and ends in the light of the day, it describes the refusal and
at the same time the aim to a contact with the 'teacher', it develops in a long run between
helpers and enemies, in an ascend from the dark of a cave to the heights of the sky, it is the
inner fight of an intellectual between the fascination of the glory and the awareness of the
possibility of being the help for the disvantaged classes, always between sense of guilty and
decisions, unconscious and conscious.
In the mentioned study of Mariola Offredi, she suggested that for Muktibodh, as for the
surrealists, the only possibility for a solution of the conflict is situated in the unconscious. I
think that in Muktibodh the possibility of resolution of the conflict is never given and if at
the end of the poem the light is reached, it is also implied the everlasting possibility to fall
again deep in the dark.
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6) THE RELATION BETWEEN 'REAL' AND 'POETRY': A CONCLUSION
The poem 'Aṃdhere meṇ' appears as an oneiric adventure that takes place in the interior world
in which reality leaves the place to an universe of symbols. In this fantasmatic world where
everything seems unstable and where the things can change in other things, emotions have an
important role: the fear, the grief, the breathless runs, the sense of persecution are as a frame
in which the poet's adventure are depicted. Among the emotions, fear seems to be the
prevalent one, 'horrible, terrible' are among the most used adjective.
In the period in which the poem was at first composed, fear seemed to be part of the author's
life. Emblematic for that period in Muktibodh's life is the description of his contact with
Tilaks statue in the sixth stanza of the poem: seeing the statue he 'maiṇ us pāṣāṇ-mūrti ke
tḥaṃḍe pairoṇ ko chātī se barbas cipkā ruāṃsā-sā hotā' ('I crying hold the cold foot of that
statue of stone'); the statue is bleeding: 'bhavy lalaṭ kī nāsikā meṇ se lāl lāl garmīlā rakt
ṭapktā' ('from the nose of the beautiful forehead blood is dropping').
This 'bleeding' of the statue can be a reference to a real fact: Muktibodh was living in Nagpur
in 1953, when he began to write the poem, near to his house there was a statue of Tilak that he
used to see everyday. That statue had surely been the silent witness of one of the darkest
pages of India history after the independence: the terrible repression in Nagpur that followed
the worker's strike of the Emperess Mill in 1953, when many strikers were shot dead by the
police.
This real experience of life was filtered through the poetic language and rendered in images
that go far beyond the real experience and become the universal. This use of poetic language
to expand reality was a characteristic of Muktibodh's poetry.
Muktibodh expressed his ideas about the use of language in poetry in three collections of
essays: 'Nayī Kavitā kā ātmasaṃgharṣ tathā any nibandh' ('The interior conflict of New
Poetry and other essays', published in 1964), 'Ek sāhityik kī ḍāyrī' ('Diary of a man of letters',
published in 1964) and 'Naye sāhity kā saundary-śāstr' ('The esthetic of new literature ',
published in 1971).
In his essays he indicates the creative process of the poet as constituted of three different
stages: at the first stage there is the real as is experienced by the poet; at the second stage this
experience of the real is filtered trough the fantasy of the poet in order to become possible
object of poetry; in the third stage this real experience filtered through the fantasy is
communicated through the words. In this latter stage there is a conflict between the emotions
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of the poet and the language: the phantasy awakes the meaning contained in the words, but the
words as they are used carry a pre-established meaning created by its social use. In order to
awake new possible significance of the words the poet has to 'recreate the language' through
the association of images and symbols. In Aṃdhere meṇ there is a frequent use of similitude
and metaphors that creates a superimposition of images. The same effect is given with the use
of compound (for example when he describes the physical characteristics of the 'mysterious
person') that have the same effect of expanding the word beyond its common significance.
It is this sort of 'recreation' of the language, this extrapolating the word from its 'common use'
that makes Muktibodh again so relevant in his research of the means of expression.
Conclusion: I started this essay trying to demonstrate that the poem Aṃdhere meṇ can be
considered a poem based on a solid, 'classic' narratological structure. I used narratological
analysis as a mean to deeper investigate the various significances of the poem, showing that
exists more than one level of significance. The ultimate significance is left to the reader, that
is free to catch it because the word in the poem bears a high level of ambiguity that takes him
far away from the everyday use of the common word.
The surprising modernity in this conception of poetry suggests that Muktibodh has still much
to reveal to contemporary man, showing what he really was and continues to be: a giant in
literature.
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